Talk:Microlophus occipitalis
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 31 August 2021 and 10 December 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Joshuachenwustl (article contribs).
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Hi! This was a great article and provided so much valuable information about the knobbed pacific iguanas. I read through the article and was able to edit the article for flow and better readability. You may consider including more images! Otherwise, great article. Chukka.vennela (talk) 11:53, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
Hi guys! I added some information about the lizard with focus on behavior
Joshuachenwustl (talk) 09:30, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
Hi! I added more information under some headings, organized the page set-up a little more, and altered the structure of some sentences for greater cohesiveness. Ritu27 (talk) 21:16, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
Great article!
I think this page looks great- I added some information under the diet section and reworded a few paragraphs to make the ideas flow better. mayafiore
Article Review
I just did a review of the article and wanted to make a record of the changes since then. I thought thermoregulation was an important enough topic that it should be included in the summary of the article, so I included a quick sentence about it with the rest of the summary. I also added a quick section about lava lizards in general in the speciation section as I think the group of species the lizard belongs to is important and provides critical context. Otherwise, I thought the article was great! Kellencking (talk) 23:21, 21 October 2021 (UTC)