Talk:Khalid ibn al-Walid

Article rewrite with improved sources

I'll be taking a stab at rewriting this article with the goal of bringing it back to GA-status and higher. See work in progress here. The current article seems to be largely sourced to Pakistan Lt. General Agha Ibrahim Akram's 1968 The Sword of Allah: Khalid bin al-Waleed – His Life and Campaigns along with several other sources of dubious or non-encyclopedic reliability such as many direct references to primary sources or generic sources Dictionary of Battles and Sieges and Prophets and Princes: Saudi Arabia from Muhammad to the Present. None of these sources are necessarily unreliable, and there are other sources used whose reliability and neutrality should not be questioned, but the standards should be raised overall. I don't plan on using many of the current sources in my proposed rewrite. There are many other more critical, peer-reviewed academic and encyclopedic sources available, including Fred Donner's seminal The Early Muslim Conquests, Hugh Kennedy's The Great Arab Conquests and various EI2 entries, including the source-critical article "Khalid b. al-Walid" by Patricia Crone, among others, which should form the basis of this article. Where these sources leave gaps in Khalid's biography, I intend to supplement with Akram and others. --Al Ameer (talk) 20:39, 16 October 2019 (UTC)

The rewrite has been implemented. Didn't need to use Akram, and don't recommend that this book be used at all, except perhaps for the author's own opinion about Khalid in the Legacy section where I mentioned the assessment of various notable and relevant historians. There's no mention of Khalid's birth year or age in any of the sources so I'm curious where we got 585 from—so I removed this. Akram was used for this reference, but I didn't find that anywhere in his book, of which I possess a digital copy. There's a bit of supplementary use of primary sources, namely al-Tabari, but the overwhelming majority of info in the article is from modern, scholarly sources. --Al Ameer (talk) 19:02, 17 January 2020 (UTC)

Popular references section

I'm not sure if this section is needed at all. Currently, it's a sample list of films and shows with characters depicting Khalid or military battalions and vehicles, city streets, etc. named for Khalid. It's mostly unsourced. If no sources can be provided, the section should definitely be removed. Of equal concern is that this list could potentially grow immensely if we are to list everything in the world that's been named in Khalid's honor. --Al Ameer (talk) 16:39, 21 January 2020 (UTC)

You did improve the article in many cases Al Ameer, but why did you remove those essential info found in the beginning? He was a Sahaba, and then the occupation as a military leader comes, since he prior to the battle of mutuah he was a sahaba like others. Thank you--79.75.61.27 (talk) 15:16, 27 January 2020 (UTC)

Why is he a sahaba "and then the occupation as a military leader comes"? He was best known as a commander before, during and after his companionship with Muhammad. His companionship with the prophet was concurrent with his military service. The Battle of Mu'ta was in 629. He most likely (according to the secondary sources) converted to Islam in 629, i.e. after Hudaybiyya, though some state he and Amr b. al-As converted in 627. So it is not as if he was a companion for an extensive period prior to his service with the Muslims—he became militarily active with the Muslims almost immediately after his conversion.

Also, it is undue to have a quote with a citation lauding him for his military prowess in the lead when we already mention in the lead that historians generally consider him one of early Islam's best generals. Perhaps this could be rearranged to the first sentence of the fourth passage as opposed to the third sentence. --Al Ameer (talk) 22:18, 27 January 2020 (UTC)

Name calligraphy

Hi 1210saad. I removed the name calligraphy because it is merely decoration and, I would argue, a distraction. It goes against the guidelines set by WP:MoS/Images:

Images must be significant and relevant in the topic's context, not primarily decorative.

We already provide Khalid's name in the Arabic script and the transliteration. The calligraphy art simply does not add any value to the article other than being a decorative spelling of the subject's name, and in fact it decreases the credibility of the article. Also, as the MoS mentions:

Lead images are not required, and not having a lead image may be the best solution if there is no easy representation of the topic.

In a case like Khalid's, like that of most the early Muslim personalities where we do not have images of coins, medieval paintings, manuscripts, signatures, etc., it's best to just leave out any image from the infobox. The rest of the article is well-illustrated, though there's certainly room for improvement. --Al Ameer (talk) 19:26, 29 January 2020 (UTC)

Greetings,

The Calligraphy is present on hundreds of names of Muslim personalities , including the companions of prophet. The article becomes artistically relevant and adds to its imagery. The presence of a an image box and previous use of such images on articles e.g Abu Bakr, Umar, Hassan, Hussain . The norm demands the use of calligraphy must be allowed.

In case of any improvements , there is plenty of places to improve the article in the phrase department. Removing the calligraphy does not improve the article quality either. SPQR10 (talk) 03:43, 11 March 2020 (UTC)

You are referring to this clause below

Avoid using images to convey text MOS:TEXTASIMAGES Textual information should almost always be entered as text rather than as an image. True text can be colored and adjusted with CSS tags and templates, but text in images cannot be. Images are not searchable, are slower to download, and are unlikely to be read as text by devices for the visually impaired. Any important textual information in an image should also appear in the image's alt text, caption, or other nearby text.

The calligraphy does not have the motive of conveying text in image.

Secondly carefully reading the passage just the use of word" Avoid" means its not banned to use such objects and exemptions must be allowed. and Thirdly

Any important textual information in an image should also appear in the image's alt text, caption, or other nearby text. This Gudieline will be followed as has been in page [1].

I hope enough such reasons., allow the same

There is a calligraphy of this name on 36 Different wiki pages of different languages with no objections made by any editors which was used before on this page

Also this article had an image since 2013 , with no objections made. — Preceding unsigned comment added by SPQR10 (talk • contribs) 04:02, 11 March 2020 (UTC)

Sword

Details of Hazrat Khalid bin Waleed (Sword). Weight? Height? Sword name (type)?

Please answer. 2409:4041:2E03:AC97:C855:B057:4BDC:DCC4 (talk) 06:59, 18 April 2022 (UTC)

Battles list

I don’t understand the reason behind removing a large amount of Khalid’s battles from the list. These are not skirmishes that are rejected by western academia but verified battles that all have Wikipedia pages. It would be appreciated if an explanation would be given.

The following battles were omitted after I added them: Battle of Zafar (632) Battle of Dawmat al-Jandal (633) Battle of Muzayyah (633) Battle of Saniyy (633) Battle of Zumail (633) Battle of al-Qaryatayn (634) Battle of Yaqusa (634) Battle of Marj al-Saffar (634) (634) Battle of Sanita-al-Uqab (634) Battle of Maraj-al-Debaj (634) Siege of Jerusalem (636–637) (636-637) Battle of the Iron Bridge (637) Siege of Germanicia (638)

2A02:C7E:1118:EB00:7470:76D8:F7D0:3CE9 (talk) 00:10, 3 July 2022 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 13 February 2023

Hello there, Iam just giving a request about changing few lines about Khalid, there is a paragraph which hasn't been added. I dont know if it is written but there was a story in the Campaign of Anbar where Khalid selected old and weak camels of the army and slaughtered then to lay them on a moat. So when the carcasses rose up, the army passed over it to the fort. If this info has already been written, you can ignore this request. THANKS. MA 1.1 Type 4 (talk) 05:44, 13 February 2023 (UTC)

 Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. Cannolis (talk) 05:55, 13 February 2023 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 18 February 2023

Could we just add the generic calligraphy picture from wikimedia in "image" please? Would look a lot more respectable. https://commons.m.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Khalid_ibn_al-Walid_Masjid_an-Nabawi_Calligraphy.png 2A01:C22:9090:A500:648E:E813:E700:9520 (talk) 10:04, 18 February 2023 (UTC)

 Not done: holding off while this discussion is open. small jars tc 10:32, 18 February 2023 (UTC)

Semi protected edit request

In the Early life section, please add that he was estimated to have been born around 584 and 592 AD. https://books.google.com/books?id=4z49BAAAQBAJ&pg=PA30&dq=khalid+ibn+al+walid+born&hl=en&newbks=1&newbks_redir=0&source=gb_mobile_search&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwjq2sCnzpL-AhV6m2oFHR0KALc4ChDoAXoECAYQAw

https://books.google.com/books?id=h5_tSnygvbIC&pg=PA403&dq=khalid+ibn+al+walid+born&hl=en&newbks=1&newbks_redir=0&source=gb_mobile_search&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwj578GZzpL-AhXFm2oFHQcODCIQ6AF6BAgCEAM 2600:100C:A21A:B5A1:7529:90E9:67ED:E132 (talk) 11:17, 5 April 2023 (UTC)