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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by EntirelyOnline (talk | contribs) at 22:00, 5 July 2023 (Lead to short to be removed?: new section). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

Hyphenation of "sprint qualifying"

Looking at the relevant articles it seems that not all editors are in agreement about when or if "sprint qualifying" should be hyphenated. I believe that it would be standard to hyphenate when it acts as the modifier of another word within an English compound (ie. "sprint-qualifying winner"), which in some cases could reduce ambiguity (ie. the difference between "sprint-qualifying results" and "sprint qualifying-results"), although personally I don't particularly care how it's written so long as it makes sense. HumanBodyPiloter5 (talk) 12:16, 24 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

It don't think one has any particular preference over the other. As long as the article is consistent within its self, I don't care either way.
SSSB (talk) 12:25, 24 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Evaluation

Overall this is a very well-written article. I think it would benefit to have the outcome and the major headline of the race in the beginning rather than putting it all the way at the bottom. But it was neutrally written and is up to date. The links work and are to reputable sources. They also use plenty of different sources. They use multiple motorsport news outlets as well as official documents from the FIA and Formula 1. This is very informative, I just would have changed the layout of the information. 192.54.98.221 (talk) 21:54, 17 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I believe the IP editor is referencing the lack of detail in the lead section. If so, I would agree that the lead could be expanded based upon to provide a summary of the body of the text. HumanBodyPiloter5 (talk) 22:51, 17 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Lead to short to be removed?

to be removed? 3nt0 (talk) 22:00, 5 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]