Talk:Bob Hainlen/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 02:47, 26 October 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 04:27, 26 October 2024 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• Lead might need expanded a little.
• change "former American" to something else.
• Jersey number needs a ref.
• New high school infobox formatting.
• Full name in body with ref.
• Added cats: Coaches of American football from Colorado, American football punters, American football placekickers, Colorado State Rams men's basketball players, Colorado State Rams baseball players, Basketball players from Colorado, Baseball players from Colorado, Baseball shortstops
• link football, basketball, and track in early life
• "He enrolled at the Colorado State College of Agriculture and Mechanic Arts (now known as Colorado State University) – Colorado A&M" shouldn't the Colorado State parentheses go after Colorado A&M.
• Change Colorado State in infobox to A&M.
• "he called "the region's best passer" was named an honorable mention all-conference selection at the end of the year." Change to "he was called "the region's best passer" and named an honorable mention all-conference selection at the end of the year."
• link golf and tennis on first instance
• "Hainlen was selected in the 19th round (188th overall) of the 1949 NFL draft by the Washington Redskins" change to "Hainlen was selected by the Washington Redskins in the 19th round, with the 188th overall pick, of the 1949 NFL draft."
• link NFL training camp.
• Why does it say Redskins 1950 in the infobox?
• Anything on later life? He's almost 100 years old, there's might be something.

I think that's everything. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 04:38, 26 October 2024 (UTC)