Talk:Jon Courtney

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I have nominated this page fore speedy deletion for the reasons given. Justpassinby (talk) 13:41, 6 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Interview

Possibly some useful stuff for the article in this recent interview. Bondegezou (talk) 11:25, 10 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Jon Courtney

"Courtney's song writing is notable for the references to and similarities with various, often obscure, sources" Have asked for citation re this statement. 'Notable' could be replaced by 'defined' or similar. I think the statement as it stands requires some indication of peer recognition other that a fan's opinion.Justpassinby (talk) 15:30, 14 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

"He is also credited with the ability to write well for contrasting male and female lead vocals[citation needed], and the harmonies that this produces." Reference needed —Preceding unsigned comment added by Justpassinby (talk • contribs) 13:59, 15 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I agree. I couldn't find one, so I have removed it. Everything in the article now can, I believe, be traced to a source. I've joined you in watching it to make sure that it remains adequately sourced. --Moonriddengirl ^(talk) 21:13, 15 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

"Septic Clit"

I'm not entirely sure about the journalistic value of Septic Clit, who seems to be a user reviewer as described at Drowned in Sound rather than a vetted staff writer. We can explore how it falls into Wikipedia:V#Self-published_sources_.28online_and_paper.29, whether or not this particular contributor qualifies as "acceptable as sources" ("so long as the writers are professionals and the blog is subject to the newspaper's full editorial control", in this case webzine's) if need be. Regardless, statements about the marketability of the band are appropriate in the band article. Statements about the songwriting, given that Jon Courtney is credited as the band's primary songwriter, are probably appropriate in his individual article as well. Speculation about the source of individual lyrics constitutes original research unless published elsewhere. --Moonriddengirl ^(talk) 20:58, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

"Another reviewer both praised and criticized the song composition, noting that with regards to the claims that the band possesses "Hendrix and Floyd qualities with a bit of synth thrown in there somewhere". This does not make sense, so I have deleted it. 78.105.130.169 (talk) 22:01, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

As it didn't make sense to you, I have gladly revised it. Please note that your deletion removed the reference and be careful to avoid that in the future. We need to make sure to retain sourcing for material, especially for direct quotes. Good find on the review, by the way. When I was searching for reliable sources for this article, I searched only for the singer's name, not for the band. --Moonriddengirl ^(talk) 22:19, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Jimi Hendrix and Pink Floyd references: As usual, Moonriddengirl has put her own spin on what is a clearly stated reference and deduced the opposite meaning. The reference reports :"catch a glimpse of the band who are said to possess .....". This is not a reference to the band possessing these qualities. Who said it?...I don't know. Not allowable, poor sourcing, she,as an administrator, should know better. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Justpassinby (talk • contribs) 08:30, 20 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I had the actual quote from the interview, but the IP editor above couldn't understand it. Regardless, what the article says now is quite accurate. With regards to the bands possessing those qualities, the interviewer says "I won't deny that". How much more clear can he be? --Moonriddengirl ^(talk) 11:35, 20 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

The IP editor above is Justpassinby (see first sockpuppet case). Bondegezou (talk) 11:50, 20 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Nowhere in the referenced page is any credit given to Jon Courtney for writing the tune to 'The Prisoner'

The reference to having attributes to Pink Floyd and Jimi Hendrix is not only sacriligeous, it is hearsay —Preceding unsigned comment added by Justpassinby (talk • contribs) 17:00, 20 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I have removed material from this article that is unreliably sourced WP:SOURCES and therefore does not support WP:BLP17:51, 20 March 2008 (UTC)Justpassinby (talk)

I see by your notes here and here that you no longer intend to attempt to express you own opinion in these articles or disrupt process. I'm glad to hear it. If you have problems with some of the text, it's best to attempt to work out your differences as set out in WP:Consensus. Our purpose here is to attempt to create a neutral and sourced article. Meanwhile, as I've mentioned to you before, the reference that you've removed wherein the reviewer discusses attributes of Pink Floyd and Jimi Hendrix cannot be deleted from the article as long as the quoted text remains. Moreover, it is in the source. Also sourced is mention of Jon Courtney's involvement in a project scoring new music for "The Prisoner." The article did not say that this material was utilized in "The Prisoner" (which would presumably require some sort of time travel :)). In case it helps address your concerns with that text, I have clarified that this was a "university project" to prevent anyone inadvertently thinking it was officially related to the show. And my mouse is losing connectivity, so I'd better save this comment before I wind up having to reboot the computer. --Moonriddengirl ^(talk) 19:14, 20 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Have you ever heard this piece of music for the prisoner? You know, I once sang 'Ave Maria' for the Queen. I was having a dump and she was 200 miles away at the time and had never heard of me, but still, that's who I sang it for. Guess that makes me pretty notable? Must start my own wiki page soon.Justpassinby (talk) 23:11, 20 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Use of harmony as a trademark

This is stated in the article, however it is patent nonsense. It has also been derived from an unreliable source. The use of harmony cannot be patented (otherwise every singer in the world would be in breach). Harmonies within a composition can be copyrighted. So, unless anyone objects, then I will remove this piece of gibberishJustpassinby (talk) 23:03, 20 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]