User talk:216.121.240.125

September 2013

Hello, I'm AmaryllisGardener. I noticed that you recently removed some content from Climate change in China without explaining why. In the future, it would be helpful to others if you described your changes to Wikipedia with an edit summary. If this was a mistake, don't worry: I restored the removed content. If you would like to experiment, you can use the sandbox. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks! AmaryllisGardener (talk) 16:16, 16 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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October 2013

Please refrain from making unconstructive edits to Wikipedia. Your edit to Fashion design, unexplained removal of content, has been reverted. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. Thank you. Donner60 (talk) 05:44, 30 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Maybe i didn't make myself clear in the edit summary. I thinks it's probalamatic to have the sub-topic "Star system" solely consists of quotes and extrapolations from a single source. Presumably this is because the idea of a 'star system' - a term not explained in the text - is a creation of the author being quoted which makes the topic NPOV. I noted unencyclopedic language and badly structured because it's unusual for a whole sub section to be composed just of quotes without any context or analysis or even attribution of the author. As is stated in the text itself, "a conception of a designer as a 'creative genius' disconnected from social conditions is central for the working of the fashion system" and yet this 'central conception' is not defended and is only ever mentioned immediately before it is dismissed as a myth. Perhaps the viewpoint of the author and his 'star system' could be condensed and integrated better into the article somewhere else but I'll leave that up to you. 216.121.240.125 (talk) 06:08, 30 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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