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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by Horrockssam (talk | contribs) at 18:52, 24 October 2017 (→Sam Horrocks Chem 455 Peer Review: new section). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

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Tlefevre (talk) 13:13, 10 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Sam Horrocks Chem 455 Peer Review

Like Chin Wen, I agree that overall you've done a very good job adding to this page.

Also though, I have a few suggestions in the Applications section:

1. What exactly is photocrosslinking? You mentioned it in the first paragraph, but never explained it? 2. Also, there are a few grammar things that would need to be touched up. For example, in the second sentence of the second paragraph, you say, "Cancer treatment have been..." but it should be "Cancer treatments have been..."

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