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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by Trampikey (talk | contribs) at 19:56, 27 May 2007 (re). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

This fine article about the 22-year-run of a character in the UK's EastEnders series is already at Good Article status, and we'd like to see about getting to Featured status. If successful, it will be the first time, to my knowledge, that an article about a soap opera character reaches that level, so this article will be held up as an example at Wikipedia:WikiProject EastEnders, Wikipedia:WikiProject Soap Operas and WP:FICTION of how such articles should be written. Further comments from the community would be appreciated on whether or not this article is ready to go for FA, or what other improvements are recommended. Thanks, Elonka 16:19, 27 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I suggest switching the references to the cite web and cite news formats. Gran2 16:49, 27 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Does that really make a huge difference in the grand scheme of things? -Trampikey(talk)(contribs) 16:53, 27 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Yes. Gran2 18:36, 27 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Also, ref 39 is a Youtube video, which cannot be used as a reference. Gran2 18:55, 27 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Tenses are incorrect, see MoS (WP:TENSE). Matthew 18:38, 27 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]
It happened in the past in an ongoing serial, it should be in past tense. -Trampikey(talk)(contribs) 19:56, 27 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Book references need page numbers. The JPStalk to me 18:58, 27 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]