User talk:Neilgravir

Welcome!

Welcome!

Hello, Neilgravir, and welcome to Wikipedia. Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are a few good links for newcomers:

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Death and the Maiden song

The article needs to be wikified. It also starts off assuming that the reader knows what it is...might I suggest the following start to the leader paragraph:

Death and the Maiden is a song composed in 1817 by Franz Schubert. The lyrics to the song are derived from a poem written by Claudius.

The bulk of the article seems to be about it's musical composition and timings, etc. This should all go in a section headed Composition to make this clearer. The bit about it's uses in other media (the film, etc.) could go in another section, at the bottom; Other Media or something similar. Consider adding a See Also section with links to Franz Schubert, and any similar works of his or others. A link to a MIDI file could go in an External Links section.

These are some ideas to get you going. Rob Church ^{Talk | Desk} 20:13, 28 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Oh, I didn't make it clear; if you want any help, just shout. Rob Church ^{Talk | Desk} 20:14, 28 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]

DATMS

Thanks Rob, I'll get to work on it straight away!