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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by Nikki311 (talk | contribs) at 00:56, 23 August 2008 (GAR pass). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

GA Reassessment

I am reassessing this article as a part of GA Sweeps. Here are some suggestions for improvement:

  • I've added a few citation needed tags, which need to be taken care of.
  • "More recently" is a time dependent statement. Can it be more specific?
  • A lot of the sentences in the second paragraphs of "costumed mascot" begin with "In (date)...". It needs to be mixed up to sound less redundant.
  • Refs 2 and 5 need to be formatted with Template:cite web.
  • Ref 1 needs page numbers.

The article will remain on hold for seven days to allow for improvements, at which time I will make a decision about keeping/delisting. Thanks. Nikki311 00:40, 14 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Most of this was taken care of, so I finished some of the rest. There was one sentence left with a citation needed tag, so I just removed it as it didn't change the meaning of the article and it wasn't that vital. Ref 2 (formally ref 1) still needs page numbers, but that one fact isn't enough to keep me from passing this GAR. Great work! Nikki311 00:56, 23 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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