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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by John24601 (talk | contribs) at 10:53, 23 December 2005. The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

Stylistic problems

This page makes the common mistake of addressing the reader in first person. This is highly unencyclopedic style, and just annoys. Perhaps the reader is a 90-year old with osteoporosis, for whom it would be unwise to attempt resuscitation of fellow nursing home residents for the risk of breaking her own arms. JFW | T@lk 09:06, 11 Jan 2005 (UTC)

I'm not sure that this article is really all that encyclopaedic - it is basically an instruction sheet, and that's not what an encyclopaedia is about....

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