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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by Guettarda (talk | contribs) at 20:27, 3 January 2006 (→‎Language). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

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Happy editing! Rafterman 03:45, 6 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Language

The language you are using at the Markos Moulitsas article does not conform with NPOV. You cannot use language like "callous comments" or "incendiary rhetoric". Guettarda 18:12, 3 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

While this is an improvement on the original version, it is still not NPOV (for example, "his fellow Americans" is editorialising) and it's unsourced - statements need to be referenced. Your should also refrain from incivil edit summaries. Guettarda 20:23, 3 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Actually the whole thing is far from acceptable - "gloated"? "Had to account for"? This language does not conform to NPOV. Guettarda 20:27, 3 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]
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