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May 26
Wojciech Bruszewski and Wolf Kahlen - substubs. wikify.
Koos de la Rey - wikify. Very POV, perhaps need total rewrite.
Maharaji (Prem Rawat) - wikify, remove POV
Jubilo Iwata - bad english.
Whitehead torsion - substub.
Álftanes - substub, wikify.
Miscible - wikify.
John O'Byrne - wikify.
Hugh Kennedy - wikify.
Stars are falling - wikifi, POV.
Natural Hygiene - was an advocacy page for a piece of noxious claptrap. I have tried to npov it, but I suspect my bad temper shows through, and much more work is needed. seglea
Shivneri fort - needs some explanations
Hollywood Pictures ungrammatical stub
Power Stone 2 unformatted
Joanne Arnott unformatted
Tony Ayala Jr. unformatted, style/POV
Sudden downturn of F5 tornadoes interesting, but not encyclopedic in present form Pollinator 02:19, 26 May 2004 (UTC)
Broderie perse - needs wikification
Saitwal - some translation?
Elitesecurity fmt ms
May 25
Chiranjeevi - unformatted, unwikified, nearly unintelligible writing
Maxim Kammerer - wikify
Grimsby Town - unencyclopedic writing, unformatted
Rollout photography - unformatted, unwikified
Marrah Mountains - substub.
Mizuame, Suikazura - substubs.
Fathers' Rights USA, Fathers' Rights Australia, Fathers' Rights in other jurisdictions - substubs.
Palmas Del Mar Beach Resort - Reads like an ad. Wikify.
Selhurst Park unformatted
These anon contributions - Not vandalism, but clearly promoting a set of related web sites. I'm not sure what to do with these but am loathe to leave them as they are. UninvitedCompany
Kedarnath, Badrinath, Gangotri - Wikify, merge with other articles?
Duchsustus - Wikify.
Eleanor of Aragón - wikify. Is there another article about her using a different name? + It seems to be about Eleanor of Aquitaine, and no mention is made of Aragon
SF in Croatia - list of authors, 'zines, societies, etc. Needs to become an article. Also, some sub-pages should be renamed.
Telegraph code only info on chinese telegraph
Liberec Region contains only information about a technical college
Reason (synthesizer) unformatted
Ahman Green unformatted, POV/style
Kenneth E. Boulding unformatted (copyvio?)
Free game unformatted
Untitled Brain/Buckethead/Bernie Worrell Collaboration - retitle? wikify
Battle of Albuera article is hard to read since the author's English isn't the best.
Pawel Delag - stub, wikify, english, general lookover
Tom Jackson almost certainly a copyvio, but from where? Looks like a copy from his campaign site, wherever that is. But is his name Jackson or Robinson?
Castrum - perhaps some explanation as to what the title has to do with the article?
Candaba, Pampanga- needs wikifying
Political history and modern state of the inhabitants of the Alps - Really needs help.
Mutor - substub, encyclopedic? Andrewa
May 24
Justice - too many alternate meanings, needs better layout -- Edcolins
Francisco I. Madero - parts of it very poorly written, needs editing
City - a strange link to a foreign wikipedia needs to be cleaned up: "tokipona:ma tomo" (see very end of the article) -- Edcolins
Iraq Liberation Act source text
The_Bells Source text
Swabian League - para on defeat of peasant army but nothing else
Makki di roti - non-english writer
- + Fixed basic spelling and grammar, but could still use a little work. Done on this page? --Etaoin 20:01, 24 May 2004 (UTC)
Espelands Falls - google cannot find Skrijkofossen (the rest seems to be true)
Artesian - looks like three different dicdef's put together. Kieff 02:50, May 24, 2004 (UTC)
KREWE OF MID CITY - Really ugly. unformatted, unwikified. I was really close to listing this on VfD but I thought that it's possibly encyclopedic. blankfaze | ♫ 02:14, 24 May 2004 (UTC)
- This entry is copied word for word from their web site.Sketchy 16:46, 25 May 2004 (UTC)
FIRST Frenzy: Raising the Bar - ugly. Is this original work or a copyvio? It is. Burgundavia 11:07, 24 May 2004 (UTC)
Short Cuts - ooh that's ugly. needs formatting and wikification. blankfaze | ♫ 02:07, 24 May 2004 (UTC) + rewritten. MGM 20:41, May 24, 2004 (UTC)
May 23
And Love Said No... The Best of HIM 1997-2004 - just an unformatted track listing. Needs work.
Nils Dacke - needs work
Vincenzo Balsamo - unwikified article. little relation to person. needs biography of Balsamo Yardcock 22:04, 23 May 2004 (UTC)
Michael K. Dorsey - Unwikified biography. TB 20:29, 23 May 2004 (UTC)
Indian numerology - does not make any sense. Needs complete re-write from someone who knows astrology. Jam2k 20:17, May 23, 2004 (UTC)
Chiranjeevi - was obviously written by an obsessed fan. Needs to be re-written as a real article. Jam2k 19:51, May 23, 2004 (UTC)
P. C. Sorcar - sub-stub Jam2k 19:44, May 23, 2004 (UTC)
North Hollywood, Los Angeles, California - vandalized? needs content
- Removed joke, still needs content. --Ben Brockert (:talk:)
Thomas_Scott Virtually no contents
Iron Duke class battleship virtually no content
Greater Siren spelling problems, unwikified
- Fixed some of it, needs to be expanded. --Ben Brockert (:talk:)
Catalepsy unwikified text dump from 1911
- "menstrual derangement", yeah that one needs help. --Ben Brockert (:talk:)
- Got to hand it to the doctors operating at the turn of the last century: Almost everything could be traced back to "menstrual derangement" somehow. I'm also amused by the author's assessment that a sufferer’s character is "weak." I've fixed the article. Kael
CCITT X.409 '84 does this mess have any salvagable content?
Paul Scholes reasonably significant footballer for England and manchester United, should be able to find biographical details on web, but its present contents, Red Headed, English football player pushes it towards vfd. Duncharris 16:08, May 23, 2004 (UTC)
David Weiss HaLivni - non famous?
Pál Teleki - wikify
Post-war Germany vs post-war Japan - rename, rewrite, and if all else fails, vfd
Pvpforums - highly POV, extensive inline external links
- +copyedit and format Sid 18:13, 23 May 2004 (UTC)
Kimberley Katherine Smith - needs a lot of work
Biodanza - some context?
Verbal Behavior - we never stop talking
- truly awful. Anyone who's ever read any B. F. Skinner should be able to do better than this, even if they hate every word he says. It's not even POV, it's just vacuous. seglea
Alt.tv.simpsons - needs verification, POV check
ModPlug Tracker and MadTracker - slightly POV
Pvpforums - NPOV, format, and lot more... or maybe VfD
May 22
Otto Maria Carpeaux - needs extensive NPOVing
Sun Kil Moon - formatting
Maldivian Democratic Party - needs NPOV editing
Dmitri Pavlovitch Romanov - needs sectiones 2 or more
Johnsoe sub-stub, encyclopedic?
Igigi, Nanium, Imi, Elulu, Dudu/Temp, Shu-turul - need expansion and explanation.
Angeleno - move to Wiktionary?
List_of_songs_whose_title_appears_more_than_twenty_times_in_the_lyrics - This is really stupid. Vfd?
- Has a good discussion page and a few other pages link to it. Keep it as sone of those "Ain't it cool?" sort of pages. :-) Ksheka
Xu Chu - seems to possibly be a mix of fact and fiction Guanaco
Coleman Medal, spekkie, Gary Ablett, need cleanup. Newbie User:Skankfest created. valid articles I think, but need tweaks, preferably from someone who knows about Aussie football. Duncharris
Nelson Goodman - needs more serious account, NPOV
How to rehearse - last chance before VfD.
Pain of Salvation - passes the Google test but needs complete rewrite.
C.L.SF.N.S - needs wikification, fails Google test (see full name in article)
Poul Schlüter not sentences
- Also, needs someone who knows about him to work on it. There's not enough clear info. Astarael
Werner Cohn copyvio?
May 21
Muhsin Al-Hakim - de-POVing and dates in the Gregorian Calendar would be a nice start -Note, this is actually a copyright issue. Burgundavia 02:15, May 22, 2004 (UTC)
Trojan horse (computing) -- conceptually confused, examples aren't, needs major work. Important topic for general user understanding given the malware floating around.
Banat - NPOV, more information about Banat in other countries than Romania
Juls, famous?
Oregon Legislative Councel's opinion on gay marriage, source text
- Listed on VfD. Guanaco 16:13, 22 May 2004 (UTC)
Sycamore trees -- content needs to be merged into American sycamore (the specific type of sycamore being described here), and the page itself redirected to sycamore. see vfd. Burgundavia 02:36, May 22, 2004 (UTC)
Dice -- Looking over this, it's not the best writing. Can we blame this on 1911 Encyclopædia Britannica? --Eequor 18:56, 21 May 2004 (UTC)
Fernand Verhaegen currently more of a list than an article.
Yiu Tung Shopping Centre - Yellow Pages like, in case someone would want to/knows how to write article about it.
Pashtunwali - Needs links, NPOV, correcting of vowel-less deity names and other idiosyncratic spellings; contains self-contradictions. - Various edits and wikifications, still needs much work... --Eequor 21:12, 21 May 2004 (UTC)
Paris_Peace_Accords - To Wikisource
How to care for a pet cockatoo was listed on VfD consensus to keep but needs TLC
Shri Mataji Nirmala Shrivastava - Seriously POV
Sting (wrestler) - Spelling, grammar, links, style, tone and content.
- Fixed first paragraph, but I don't know enough about wrestling to be able to help the rest. PMC
May 20
Photohydrogen - substub
Troglodyte - basically a dicdef; much more could be done. Rhymeless 04:32, 21 May 2004 (UTC)
Pashtun - rather POV and subjective, lacking depth, and not all that well written - Jmabel
Andrew L. Harris - big mess of sentence fragments
Obdurodon - needs much work. Copyvio?
Major Major Major Major - formatting, style
Andrew Van Oosten Canadian politics figure--is he significant? - Yes (slightly). In the (probably) coming up Canadian election, he is a canadidate for the major right-wing party, the Conservatives. Note: he is not currently hold any office. And the article is a copyvio anyway. Burgundavia 02:30, May 22, 2004 (UTC)
Dance and music of Latin America wikify
Operation Rainbow - needs NPOVing
The Simpsons Hit & Run - Another newborn article. Full of wikis, but it reads like an eight-year-old wrote it. I know nothing about the game this talks about. Anyone want to take a whack at it? - Lucky 6.9 17:46, 20 May 2004 (UTC) +completely rewritten, could use more plot summary--someone take a look? Meelar
Lee Westwood - Brand new sub-stub about a British golfer. Doesn't give anything other than his DOB and website link. Almost voted for speedy delete. - Lucky 6.9 17:18, 20 May 2004 (UTC)
Looking at United States Naval reactor rthere are some discrepancies between the vessels listed under each reactor type and the reactors namd in the articles describing the individual reactors and vessels (e.g. S3G reactor, USS Will Rogers (SSBN-659), USS Gato (SSN-615) and USS Triton (SSN-586). This will have to be sorted out by somebody with accurate knowledge!
Paul D. Scully-Power - Needs Wikifying.
Daniel Bell Wakefield - Wikifying and cleanup needed.
Isenfluh babelfish bot?
Münchenwiler babelfish bot?
Stechelberg babelfish bot?
Meiringen-Innertkirchen Bahn babelfish bot?
SS Ahnenerbe not sure all of this is believable... cites please?
- googled for it (in German) and got about 5000 hits. Seems pretty believable. Sid + It existed (I've seen PBS documentary) but facts might need checking. Andris
Tang (fish) needs formatting +done, now just has a copyvio photo
Tutor ventris is this accurate? -no, see VFD discussion. —Ed Cormany
Männlichen babelfish bot
Piz Gloria babelfish bot
The annual customs - needs context, relation to Dahomey (merge?)
Software engineering demographicsNeeds to be wikified...but it looks like some of it might be copyrighted.
Clepsydra (animal) unverified
Mark N. Brown unformatted
Mark L. Polansky unformatted
Zordon unwikfied, sub-stub, language
Zogam seems like a copyvio, but nothing on google
Mary L. Cleave unformatted
Martin J. Fettman unformatted
Dune Coon - isn't there a policy on offensive redirects? I don't remember
Udit Narayan and Alka Yagnik - POV, style
May 19
René Fonck - needs wikification
Battling companion - needs some cleanup, plus unsure if anyone recognized this genre other than the author.
27Mhz CB27/81 Bandplan. No context.
A00 Sokolsky Opening. No context.
00Axx and 00-xx - what are they?
Subhash Kak - needs NPOV, from someone familiar with India
Muster - Needs to be clarified, and connected with Texas A&M, probably should be added to the Texas A&M page
Hanyu was previously a redirect to Hanyu, Saitama, which contained a bit at the bottom saying that "hanyu" also refers to the Chinese language - but that's plain "hanyu", not "Hanyu, Saitama". So I made Hanyu into a disambiguation page, but I'm not sure whether all dab pages should link to other articles or whether they can simply briefly define things. Specifically, I'm not sure whether the bit about "Chinese name for the Chinese language" should go in a separate article ("Hanyu (Chinese)", perhaps?) or whether it can stay on that page. -- pne
Scaled Composites X-38 - Empty Table.
Tubbataha Reef - no wiki
- seems like a copyright violation, as it is directly copied from the newspaper, and it is not clear that the poster owned the copyright -Yizzerin 17:06, May 19, 2004 (UTC)
Babasaheb Ambedkar - Thin out the hagiography; title should be Bhimrao Ramji Ambedkar but a sysop needs to do the move. Jerzy(t)
Hayward, California - copy-and-pasted student essay needs a second going-over --Smack
Non-Cooperation Movement - needs wikification, NPOV, content?
Hutier tactics - needs wikification, grammar
New Social Movements unwikified
More than a week old
May 18
Managing Urban America - Reads choppily. Needs general work. Astarael
Bristol Cars - Needs a bit of NPOV. - Pls (anyone) discuss specifics on talk? Problem is that one cannot discuss the make in detail without talking about its image. —Morven
Banjo-Kazooie - After a major restructuring and the adding of lots of content in this article i've found it to be somewhat tangled up, especially the Gameplay section, needs to be copyedited, laid out in a better way, fixed for any grammar issues et cetera --Ævar Arnfjörð Bjarmason 22:21, 2004 May 18 (UTC)
Ratfiv programming language style, layout, some wikif.
Reproductive Cycle - We have no article at reproductive cycle either.
Jakki Degg, Melinda Messenger, Jinty Stewart, Jane Swinnerton - all very brief, unwikified bios.
Southern All Stars - messy
- There is also a little POV at the end. Astarael
RACA and all it's related pages need verification, POV-ectomies, copyright status checking, and wikification.
May 16-17
Lach - A band, apparently, and I almost speedied it, then almost VfD'd it, and now I wonder if it should perhaps be salvaged. Not much use in its present condition, I'm afraid. UninvitedCompany
Orell Gessner Füssli in German
ISO 3166-2:SO - needs some type editing/wikification
STF - poss. disambig, ugh indeed
Mahatma Jyotirao Phule - format
The Fountainhead - needs rewrite/organization --Beelzebubs 00:34, 17 May 2004 (UTC)
Dagmar - lots of spelling and grammar errors
Federal Election Campaign Act in bad need of context and wikification
Cheng weishi lun unwikifeid, sub-stub
Kapaleeshwarar Kovil - rewrite needed
Toledoth_Yeshu - totally incoherent - copied directly from Sources about Jesus Christ
Please see http://en.wikipedia.org/w/wiki.phtml?title=Special:Contributions&target=64.252.170.3. The user has created a large number of one-sentence stubs
May 14-15
Mob Rules - Black Sabbath album: not a proper article yet.
Sousveillance and inverse surveillance need merging and dePOVing
Alcazarquivir and battle of Alcazarquivir - NPOVing, wikify
Specialist lexicon - poster was mostly posting back whole chunks of Wikipedia under wrong names, mixed with apparent copyvio risks -- this is a sub-stub of what remains...
Tubes and primers for ammunition 1911 text still unwikifed after ~2 years
- This is one of a series of 1911 articles on ammunition Suggestion: move them all to archives under ammunition, then delete. Opinions? Securiger
- I think they could be resuscitated, albeit some might benefit from new titles indicating that we're dealing with turn of the last century matters. I'd be tempted to leave them for a while - a month or so - and see if I got around to doing anything; if not then yes, archive & delete. --Tagishsimon
Phrenology just had a load of POV material dropped in. It's useful, but needs someone who knows something about it. I've cleaned considerably, now experts should take over. Also, User:LHOON is creating numerous articles about the "faculties" of phrenology--check what links to phrenology. Meelar
Rajputana -sub stub
- A bit better now but still needs a lot of work Jam2k 19:21, May 15, 2004 (UTC)
Silver Jews - needs work from someone who has an idea what it's about.
May 13
HMCS Baffin - needs rewrite to make it an article, not list, plus wikify
Cloudless Sulphur - copy edit, formatting -copyvio, see [1]
- Currently in revision, additional info, pictures and ideas from fellow Wikipedians on this article are welcomed on its talk page. - MGM
How Occupation and Employment can affect Identity - formatting, verify reliability
- I submitted this as an assignment. I got a mark of 64% for it. For verification I suggest you try the Open University, they set the assignment.Barbara Shack
I think it has been successfully cleaned up and should be removed from here. I'm reluctant to do that as I wrote the article and may be biased.Barbara Shack 15:59, 22 May 2004 (UTC)
Aramaean - very probable copyvio. Anyone care to identify the source? -not copyvio, AFAICT, just a lot of attributed quotes. needs wikified. --Ed Cormany Check Arameans. Rhymeless 02:40, 15 May 2004 (UTC)
Chaos (Sonic the Hedgehog character) needs intro & context
Frank A. Gerbode badly formatted POV text dump (has copy permission) --Ben Brockert
Traumatic Incident Reduction long quacky POV (has copy permission) --Ben Brockert
Metapsychology long quacky POV introduction to book (has copy permission) --Ben Brockert
Anamnesis in Traumatic Incident Reduction long quacky POV, topic first mentioned in paragraph 3 (has copy permission) --Ben Brockert
Peasant tiny microstub, lots to say about peasants -- not all were/are serfs
- I've added in what little there was from the 1911 EB. Ben Brockert
More than two weeks old
May 10-12
Direct therapeutic exposure Needs context, content. Says who first used it, what books talk about it, but never what IT is.
Organ transplant -- gives conflicting information on when the first heart-lung transplant occured (and this is a front-page featured anniversary!). Page states both 1981 and 1987 as the first. Some cursory research shows 1981 may be right but I don't have a definitive source. PxT
Caribbean Basin Trade and Partnership Act taken from govt source; needs more wikifying, and some editing.Alcarillo
NOCTI unwikified. advertisement?
- Could be an ad, but it's not exaggerated enough ;-). I did a bit of formatting & copyediting; but it needs context. - Sid
Lord Dudley format
National Mysticism - need NPOV work
TVCG 3 - rewrite English + slight rewrite, could do with fact checking re: 1957 TV antenna - should this be a relay transmitter? --Tagishsimon
Democratic egalitarianism dic definition
May 8-9
Asha Bhosle - just got a lengthy addition of highly-POV and poorly-written text.
Video game industry practices needs NPOV +perhaps we could incorporate this into video game industry?
Hedwig Elisabeth Amelia de Baviere Pfalz-Neuburg needs to be fixed/rewritten - cleaned a bit, there may be other daughters
Pharaoh gives different years than articles on individual Pharaohs (e.g. Amenhotep I or Thutmose I of Egypt). There are disputes about Egyptian chronology but could we try to be consistent between different articles?
Mehdi Mahdavikia needs more links, content, less newspaper crap language +added some links, but I don't know the man Sid 14:00, 9 May 2004 (UTC)
May 5-7
Mary Ann Day Brown - article only contains genealogical information and doesn't say why she is individually famous. I left a message on the talk page asking for more info to be included in the article but none has as yet. -- Graham :) | Talk
Soviet tank production during World War II - lacks insightful layout, should be renamed list in it's current form. - MGM 08:36, May 6, 2004 (UTC)
National Chi Nan University - proper formatting; grammar Alcarillo
Statism- The article as written seems to need work on NPOV. Sounds like an entry from the Encyclopedia of Libertarianism. Gwimpey
Panchavati and Tanaji Malusare need context and formatting
Egg tempera unwikified, format
Carlsbad Decrees unwikified, very stubby
May 4
Chromophil substance - needs context and copyedit
Lockergnome forums needs to be rewritten or deleted (was on vfd)
Pirate Radio needs fact check --- was Francois Mitterrand ever arrested for running a pirate radio station? (Smerdis of Tlön)
Ceramics - needs an opening paragraph and distinction from Pottery (nothing to do with boy wizards, though)- MGM
Copy info from List of books by award or notoriety into List of prizes, medals, and awards and vice versa, create some link between these lists to prevent redundancy
Mystic Records could use a sentence
Historia Britonum - cut down excessive quotes?
Vinnish is this accurate?
IXC unformatted
David Heath (wrestler) unformatted
2001 Conservative leadership election - mainly dealt with at Conservative Party (UK); only linked to from Ann Widdecombe who wasn't even a candidate!
May 2-3
Garrett A. Morgan into which I have merged Garrett Morgan contained information that seems to have been apocryphal or just plain wrong. Aiming for NPOV, I have removed what seemed dubious, although other web pages include it. Please would somebody else have a look at this and correct if necessary? EdH
Will to Power mostly just quotes
James Blake - Somebody needs to make an article out of what is currently a wall poster Chancemill
Vinnie Vincent - needs wikifying, possible fact-check, NPOV, etc. Similarly, Mark St. John, Bruce Kulick, although those look better. Possibly worth checking other KISS related entries too.
Chinese nobility - needs to cover noble titles up to the Qing Dynasty
Cohen v. California unwikified
May 1
California's Gold Describes someone as 'cherubic and fit'. NPOV.
Louis Crane unformatted
Ian McKenzie Anderson - unwikifed, noteworthy enough?
Sandy Burnett - needs a bit attention?
Masaaki Sakai poor english. Added some info that was implied in the original version--Rachelinga(t)
Gaetano Badalamenti only DOB and DOD
U.S. Marine Corps Force Reconnaissance - needs edit to a user-friendly article directed to the general public (has a lot of military terms).
Ezo - wikify, update (taken from 1911 encyclopedia)
John Demjanjuk looks like story was unfinished, even before yesterday's news that his deportation is underway. --Jerzy(t)
April 29-30
Colon Hydrotherapy (Colonics) Clearly this article has got issues.
Amos Meller rewrite. Makes little sense. All google hits for "Amos Meller" are Wikipedia mirrors. Misspelled? Does not exist?
Amma makes no sense (Makes more sense now, but still despirately needs help --FrankB)
Oakworth Hall sounds like sales brochure
Futami Jouwa from vfd, no consensus, needs tidying up
History of Somalia slightly POV, mostly tongue-in-cheek
Agent 212 unwikified, lacking context
Daryl F. Mallett - fan article about some SciFi editor. Needs massive trimming and rewrite, removing of excessive linking, trimming bibliography, fact check (I couldn't verify the film credits). Maybe even a copyvio? But from where? Lupo
William Melton little more than externals links, this isn't dmoz
April 26-28
Feijoada completa recipe, style, to wikibooks?
Spiritual socialism POV, context
Bear Son Tale huh? context, relevance, etc.
Boris V. Morukov has been wikified, needs to be structured
Nuclear fallout - mess created by merging two articles. The beginning is reasonable, after that, a scrambled file of facts. Some content would be happier at radioactive contamination.
Asana - needs some NPOV and cleanup from someone who knows about this.
Community inquiry labs - needs context
Prophet Onias - very definitely POV, needs fact checking.
- Completely rewritten by anon, might need another check. Mustafaa
- I NPOVed it some, wikilinks, etc.., but have no clue about facts Sam [Spade] 11:45, 19 May 2004 (UTC)
Berenger Sauniere - needs fact-checking and possibly NPOV. Google search suggests that he's controversial and/or surrounded by some conspiracy theories and legends.
More than a month old
April 20-25
Srila Vishnupada, H.D.G. Ramakrishnananda Swami - puff piece, profoundly POV.
Property damage - VfD voted to keep and list on cleanup, see Talk:Property damage. -- Graham :) | Talk
University of Kentucky - Needs a lot of help. Apparently nothing of consequence is taught there (I thought as much), so sports are its only focus. -- Smerdis of Tlön
Authorial intentionality - needs an English major to sort it out.
Tom Wisniewski, Yuri Ruley - just bulleted lists
Toaster museum author doesn't seem to know anything about it -[2] for your reference Ed Cormany
IO-APIC - incomprehensible to a layman, lacks links
- The topic is one which probably should be thus. Links to interrupt and API might be good. It's not bad (of its ilk) as of today. ww 15:18, 20 May 2004 (UTC)
April 17-19
Agent Cody Banks - outdated information, info on sequel needed. - MGM 07:43, Apr 20, 2004 (UTC)
RJ Sternberg - sub-stub, famous?
Velocette unwikified, in timeline format
Concupiscence - Extant request from 2002 for theologically trained Catholic & Protestant to review this article.
Marine aquarium fish species - Subedit, tone of voice
Remote concentrator - Some sort of telephone exchange multiplexor?
Soundhog - unwikified, needs a lot of work.
Bread and Roses - not sure if it's a copyvio, but it is POV. Rick
Patient empowerment -- unresolved factual dispute
ARY Group grammar, POV
Cyprus Mines Corporation - not written like a encyclopedia article
April 14-16
Scenario planning - interesting but unsure about reliability of "A step-by-step guide to scenario planning" (contained in article)
Venedes - uh? Can anyone make sense of this? About Wends, no? Good idea to merge and save anything useable about the historic names for them.
SMDS - incomprehensible sub stub.
Max and Moritz should be on wikisource, no?
Mnemonic link system - needs major rework, doesn't give definition, mainly list of links currently.
Liberalism and conservatism in Latin America - needs context/merging, unwikified
Tomb of Shah Jamal - unwikified sub-stub
Precising definition - lacks precision, definition and much else Charles Matthews
April 13
K. M. Peyton unresolved comment in article.
QR algorithm - seems to be a topic, but needs better context and info.
Sonata da chiesa - no context, unwikified
The Garden of Cyrus - PoV (& copyvio?): Not copyvio; see talk page. (Smerdis of Tlön)
Iraqi National Accord Iraqi anti-Saddam group, article has not been updated since 2002
Abbotsford Saints - Regina Storm - Kamloops Critters - Nanaimo Navigators - Red Deer Outlaws - Lethbridge Dust Devils - All are said to be a part of the Canadian Baseball League, but that league no longer exists. +They were supposed to play there in 2002 season but I'm not sure if the 2002 season actually took place. Andris
Sanctification - messy, unwikfied only from a Christian POV
April 10-12
Johannes Brahms early life all wrong; needs better external source.
Cometbus, unwikified, POV
Dragon Ball Z Live Action Movie needs wikif. and definition early in article. Data needs to be rearranged.
Iraqi Revolution Command Council - very little information - needs expansion, wikification
List of postal codes in Poland — All the Polish characters are broken; might need introductory paragraph; should probably all be wikified
Eye_surgery - format, slight copyvio potential, wikify
List of radio stations in Serbia and Montenegro moved from VfD, organize, copyedit, expand
Boiler Efficiency: taken straight from technical paper (possible copyvio?) - Vardion
Caliculation Routines: same as above - Vardion
April 4-9
Walo is it Walo or Wala?, wikify, expand
Casablanca class escort carrier - Majority of carriers on this list have empty information tables.
Kino no Tabi - needs some NPOV-ing, wikification
H. Irving Hancock unformated, unwikified, copyvio?
Morios - unwikified
Disambiguate the 2 dozens links at Prussian. --Menchi
Chanco - almost fine but states that he was born ca. 1624 and participiated in events that took place in 1622. One of those must be wrong.
The Fever - The Twilight Zone episode, needs making clear what it is at start. Also may need structure tweaking.
Incompetence - copyed, expand. Could be fun. Denni
April 1-3
THC Ministry - POV, famous?
Maîtresse Hounon'gon is another stub. Information? -- Slowking Man
Security camera, unwikified, language
Patient- care, unwikified, language
Nurse assistant skills, only partially wikified
Preschool education has a rewrite, but needs more.
Wachovia Bank of Georgia - the building or the company?
Wikipedia talk:Make only links relevant to the context - conversation too long and convoluted, needs cleanup, but is rightfully POV --rs2
Particle_velocity_level - goes through the motions of describing a physics? term and its use w/o any clarity or understanding
Ito Noriko - sub-stub, famous?
March 26-31
Symbolics seems to repeat itself; also some overlap with Lisp machine.
Wilderness first aid Needs either serious professional attention or serious deletions.
Half Caste - poem explanation needs expanding, poem itself should be cut to a small quote or moved to wikisource
Lea Bridge and Lea Bridge road currently only the location, can anything else be added?
Rohan Gavaskar - lacking content, poor format, sub-stub
Cobra probe - obscure -- Khym Chanur
Quantum brain dynamics - long but hard to understand, pseudo-science
E-Work - marketing-speak -- Khym Chanur
More than two months old
March 21-25
Ambassadors from Germany to Burkina Faso 1 redlink does not a list make -- Graham :) | Talk pen
Vassula Ryden About a 'modern era prophet'. Very POV at the moment.
Sarah Gordon expand, wikify, format, famous?
Toll-like receptor - need a lot more context, sub-stub
Geodesy for the layman - needs rewrite to sound encyclopedic
- nonononono it needs to be moved to Wikibooks, which was made for things like it. -- EmperorBMA / ブライアン 22:27, 10 Apr 2004 (UTC)
Copyright Act of 1976 sub-stub, needs huge help from someone who knows anything about the act
[[Communes_of_the_Calvados_d%E9partement]] - many articles need the empty sections commented out, and the stub message added
Tintin and the Golden Fleece - sub-stub
Alexandrov topology - please edit this so a numbskull like me can actually understand it... -- Graham :) | Talk
March 17-20
Imperial College Electrical and Electronic Engineering Society - wikify and NPOV
Layer 4 router - context, expand
Al Gore's views - Needs copyed for tense
Midwest POV
Cao Cao Unification of the North - Wikify, context, (re)unification?, maybe better title
March 14-16
Messali Hadj - needs explanation of TLAs, unwikified
Richard Lyons - sub-stub
Media coverage of the Israeli-Palestinian conflict - amateurish, merge elsewhere, VfD
Muhammad Thakurufar Al-Azam needs fact checking.
King Zhuangxiang of Qin - NPOV, wikify Muriel
Jesuit High School - should be a disambiguation page; needs to address that there are multiple Jesuit High Schools, and what they are.
Islamic views of homosexuality - questionable material about same-sex marriage
March 12-13
Technology acceptance model mostly unwikified, orphan, copyvio?
Computer numbering formats - very long article, lots un-wikified. Much info needs redistributed to constituent topics Binary numeral system, Integer (computer science), Floating point, ASCII, Binary coded decimal and Data type. Removed a request to merge with Integer (computer science). See Talk page. Zoney
MediaWiki:Cults - POV and inaccurate
Intellectual property education Probably needs self promotion removed as does perhaps presumed autobio Shaheen Lakhan; Human memory process by same IP (noted at #February 4, 11th item), and those labelled "(Top)" at Contribs of (surely) the same person are also not yet edited by others, and may (or not!) still deserve scrutiny