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Goldhammer-Herzfeld ratio for graphene and black phosphorus
The Goldhammer-Herzfeld ratio for an element = R/V where R is the isolated atom’s molar refractivity and V is the molar volume for the bulk element. The ratio has no units. It is a simple measure of how metallic an element is, metals having values ≥ 1. It is proportional to density (Edwards & Sienko 1983).
Graphene
The ratio for carbon as diamond is ca. 0.62
The density of diamond is 3.514 g cm−3
It is known one square metre of graphene would weigh 0.77 mg
The C—C bond length in graphene is 1.4210 x 10-8 cm,^ which translates to the thickness of monolayer graphene. The volume involved is therefore 100 cm x 100 cm x 1.421 x 10−8 cm = 1.421 x 10-4 cm3
- ^ In stark contrast, the distance between each layer in graphite is 3.25 × 10-8 cm.
The density of graphene is therefore its weight divided by its volume = 0.77 mg/1.421 x 10-4 cm3 = 5.419 g cm−3
The GH ratio for a graphene layer, within which electron delocalisation occurs in graphite, is therefore (density graphene/density diamond) × ratio for diamond = (5.419/3.514) × 0.62 = ca. 0.95
Black phosphorus
The ratio for white P is ca. 0.57
The density of white P is 1.8232g cm−3
That for black P is 2.69
The ratio for black P is therefore (density black P/density white P) × ratio for white P = (2.6/1.8232) × 0.57 = ca. 0.84
Selenium
The ratio for Se8 is ca. 0.77
The density of Se8 is 4.4 g cm−3
That for gray Se is 4.802
The ratio for gray Se is therefore (density gray Se/density Se8) × ratio for Se8 = (4.802/4.4) × 0.77 = ca. 0.84
References
- Density values: Wiberg N 2001, Inorganic Chemistry, Academic Press, San Diego, pp. 575, 680, 785
- Ratio values: Edwards PP & Sienko MJ 1983, "On the occurrence of metallic character in the periodic table of the elements", Journal of Chemical Education, vol. 60, no. 9, pp. 692–693, doi:10.1021/ed060p691
- Weight of graphene: "Class for Physics of the Royal Swedish Academy of Sciences" 2010, "Graphene," The Royal Swedish Academy of Sciences, Stockholm, viewed August 13, 2021
- C—C bond length in graphene: Hill G & Holman J 2000, Chemistry in Context, 5th ed., Nelson Thornes, Cheltenham, p. 124
First sentence
MOS:FIRST suggests that:
- The first sentence should tell the nonspecialist reader what or who the subject is, and often when or where.
- It should be in plain English.
- If its subject is definable, then the first sentence should give a concise definition: where possible, one that puts the article in context for the nonspecialist.
In plain English, it's preferable to define things in terms of what they are rather than what they aren't.
So the Nonmetal first sentence now reads as follows:
- "In chemistry, a nonmetal is a chemical element that is lighter than iron, that is brittle or crumbly if solid or frozen, and that forms an acid or an oxide if it reacts with nitric acid."
I used "that" three times, in imitation of the definition of a planet in the lede of the article of the same name.
The definition first refers to the relative lightness of nonmetals since the heaviness of naturally occurring metals such as gold, copper, and iron may have been noticed in prehistory and, in light of their malleability, led to the first attempts to craft metal ornaments, tools, and weapons. All metals discovered from then until 1809 had relatively high densities; their heaviness was regarded as a singularly distinguishing criterion.
Among other nonmetallic elements, the definition accommodates the noble gases, the halogen gases F and Cl, the halogen liquid Br, and the residual nonmetallic gases H, N and O, since these are all crumbly if frozen. The definition further includes physical and chemical properties, as would seem to be appropriate in a chemistry context.
Note that noble gases do not react with nitric acid so that the last part of the definition does not apply to them. This is OK though since they're lighter than iron and crumbly when frozen.
"Acid", "oxide" and "nitric acid" could be said to be technical terms however these are allowed in plain English if there's no plainer equivalent. They're wikilinked in any event.
The word count of the lede paragraph has been reduced by about one-third.
Sandbh (talk) 00:12, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
- While I agree that a positive definition is generally better than a negative one, that preference is not found in MOS:FIRST. This sentence has one explicit AND, another implicit one, three ORs and two IFs. And I note that it requires an explanation on this talk page to convince the knowledgeable editor that the noble gases satisfy the description.
- This is not a definition but a complicated description that practically speaking requires boolean algebra analysis to apply in any specific situation. Compared to this the previous 1st sentence is simplicity itself.
- Plain English is not simply a matter of avoiding technical vocabulary. It also requires simple, easy to follow sentence structure. This sentence does not qualify as "plain English", and so does not meet the MOS.
- The example you cite planet is instructive. It gives the generic class and then says which things in that class do not qualify.
- A planet is a large astronomical body that is not a star or stellar remnant.
- The comparable lede would be
- A nonmetal is a chemical element that is not a metal or a metalloid.
- Simplicity itself. But because of the ambiguity with metallois I would prefer something like this:
- A nonmetal is a chemical element which does not have the properties common to metals.
- There is no commonly accepted definition of nonmetal. But everyone agrees that they are not metals.
- Please restore plain English to the first sentence.
- YBG (talk) 06:57, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
Arbitrary break
Thanks YBG. I appreciate your interest and taking the time to post your concerns. I note you concur that a positive definition is preferred.
MOS:FIRST provides that the first sentence “should be in plain English.”
In plain English, it's preferable to express things in terms of what they are rather than what they aren't. It also seems to me that defining a nonmetal as something that is a not a metal is a redundancy that is further inconsistent with the spirit of plain English. It further imparts nothing to the reader since it requires them to know what the (common) properties of a metal are. Probably most people do and since two of these properties are a shiny appearance and good electrical conductivity there is scope to erroneously conclude that graphite (carbon) is a metal.
Given the idea of a definition expressed in terms what a nonmetal is, the next task is to write it as plainly as possible.
I posted an explanation here as a matter of courtesy since the definition has been subject to some to’ing and fro’ing.
I’ve since simplified the definition, and made it less specific, so it now reads:
- A nonmetal is a relatively light chemical element that is brittle or crumbly if solid or frozen, and that forms an acid or an oxide if it reacts with nitric acid. (31 words)
- @Sandbh: I strongly suggest removing relatively light, as it is not accurate for all the nonmetals. At least, nobody would agree that iodine, xenon, or radon are relatively light, and relatively is subjective anyway (with respect to iron? tin? oxygen?). ComplexRational (talk) 15:55, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
- Thanks @ComplexRational: I feel it's relevant to note that ca. 80% of nonmetals have a density < 5 gm/cm3 and ca. 80% of metals have a density > 5 gm/cm3. The intended meaning of "light", given most metals are heavy, is "low density". In what sense were you saying no one would agree that I, Xe or Rn are relatively light? The "relatively" qualifier is there in the sense that there is no rigorous definition of a nonmetal. The situation is the same in chemistry with regard to what is a metal(?), there being no rigorous definition. Thus the topic sentence of the next paragraph in the nonmetal lede says, "While the term dates from at least 1708, it has no widely-agreed precise definition." OTOH metals have an average density of ca. 9.5 gm/cm3 whereas the nonmetal average is ca 1.8 gm/cm3, noting there are light metals such beryllium, magnesium and aluminium, and relatively heavier nonmetallic elements such as antimony, and tellurium. Sandbh (talk) 22:27, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
- When I read relatively light, I interpret it to mean "having relatively low mass" (i.e., low atomic mass, which I, Xe, and Rn certainly do not have). If "having relatively low density" was instead the intended meaning, I would suggest rewording or relocating. This ties in with YBG's comment: especially in the opening sentence, we want a definition that accurately describes an element if and only if it is a nonmetal – "relative" definitions can be fleshed out and clarified elsewhere in the article. ComplexRational (talk) 01:49, 31 January 2022 (UTC)
- Thanks @ComplexRational: I feel it's relevant to note that ca. 80% of nonmetals have a density < 5 gm/cm3 and ca. 80% of metals have a density > 5 gm/cm3. The intended meaning of "light", given most metals are heavy, is "low density". In what sense were you saying no one would agree that I, Xe or Rn are relatively light? The "relatively" qualifier is there in the sense that there is no rigorous definition of a nonmetal. The situation is the same in chemistry with regard to what is a metal(?), there being no rigorous definition. Thus the topic sentence of the next paragraph in the nonmetal lede says, "While the term dates from at least 1708, it has no widely-agreed precise definition." OTOH metals have an average density of ca. 9.5 gm/cm3 whereas the nonmetal average is ca 1.8 gm/cm3, noting there are light metals such beryllium, magnesium and aluminium, and relatively heavier nonmetallic elements such as antimony, and tellurium. Sandbh (talk) 22:27, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
- @ComplexRational: I've replaced "light" with low density, and further generalized and streamlined the definition. I hope the updated version works for you. Sandbh (talk) 23:37, 31 January 2022 (UTC)
- Better now. I'm also guessing that "where applicable" implies the exception of noble gases? ComplexRational (talk) 15:20, 1 February 2022 (UTC)
- @ComplexRational: Yes, that’s it. Sandbh (talk) 22:28, 1 February 2022 (UTC)
- Better now. I'm also guessing that "where applicable" implies the exception of noble gases? ComplexRational (talk) 15:20, 1 February 2022 (UTC)
- @Sandbh: I strongly suggest removing relatively light, as it is not accurate for all the nonmetals. At least, nobody would agree that iodine, xenon, or radon are relatively light, and relatively is subjective anyway (with respect to iron? tin? oxygen?). ComplexRational (talk) 15:55, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
Boolean algebra is not required. The definition (now) has a simple and relatively easy to follow sentence structure. It is written in plain English, noting that technical terms are permitted in plain English where there are no plainer equivalents. Since the subject matter itself is technical, a few technical terms ought to be less than controversial.
Regarding your concerns about the definition of a planet given at the planet article, here’s the definition I was comparing the nonmetal definition to:
- "A planet is a non-stellar body that is massive enough to be rounded by its own gravity, that directly orbits a star, and that has cleared its orbital zone of competing objects.” (32 words)
The question of what is a nonmetal is a complex area and I’ve tried to address this as plainly as possible, with a view to avoiding redundancy and minimising scope for unnecessary confusion.
Could you please consider my response and reconsider your request. Thank you Sandbh (talk) 09:35, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
Sandbh (talk) 09:35, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
- Note
- A description presents the characteristics and aspects of that which is being described in sufficient detail that the audience can form a mental picture, impression, or understa≥nding of it.
- A definition is a statement of the meaning of a term (a word, phrase, or other set of symbols).
- I remain convinced that a negative definition is vastly superior to a description that contains nested ANDs & ORs. YBG (talk) 16:19, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
Meaning of definition
YBG, on what fundamental basis are you saying there is a difference between "definition" and "description"?
Meanings of "definition" include mentions of "descriptions", for example:
- "…extensional definitions (which try to list the objects that a term describes)" – See "definition"
- "In mathematics, definitions are generally not used to describe existing terms, but to describe or characterize a concept." – See "definition"
- "a description of the features and limits of something" – Cambridge Dictionary
- "a statement that describes what something is" – Merriam Webster
- "a defining; a description of a thing according to its properties" – The Chambers Dictionary.
The nub of these meanings is to define what a thing is, according to its features, properties and limits, rather than what it is not.
In a similar descriptive manner, here's the IUPAC recommended definition of a hydrogen bond:
- "The hydrogen bond is an attractive interaction between a hydrogen atom from a molecule or a molecular fragment X–H in which X is more electronegative than H, and an atom or a group of atoms in the same or a different molecule, in which there is evidence of bond formation."
Curiously, the origin of definition is late Middle English: from Latin definitio(n- ), from the verb definire ‘set bounds to’ (see define). Thus, the nonmetal definition attempts to set bounds to what is a nonmetal.
Could you let me know what a "nested AND" is, and where the "nested ANDs" are?
1. There may be scope to remove one of the "ORs" as follows:
- "A nonmetal is a relatively light chemical element that is mechanically weak, and that forms an acid or an oxide if it reacts with nitric acid." (26 words)
I'm not sure if "mechanically" is quite the right term since the intending meaning is that nonmetals (normally) have no structural strength.
2. There may be scope to remove the other "OR" as follows:
- "A nonmetal is a relatively light chemical element that is mechanically weak, and that forms an acidic compound if it reacts with nitric acid." (23 words)
Sandbh (talk) 01:00, 31 January 2022 (UTC)
- The first sentence now reads:
- In chemistry, a nonmetal is a type of chemical element generally characterized by low density, low strength, and a tendency, where applicable, to form acidic compounds.
- I hope that works for you. Sandbh (talk) 23:37, 31 January 2022 (UTC)
- This is much better. I'm wondering if the final clause is even necessary in the lede sentence. Certainly the noble gasses are both low density and low strength. If that clause were placed later in the paragraph, you would avoid the "where applicable" language which seems a bit troublesome.
- As to the issue of definition vs. description (the topic of this section, from which the discussion has wandered): this is a meta-discussion which I think is no longer necessary here. We could, if you wish, continue it in user space or off-wiki.
- YBG (talk) 08:00, 2 February 2022 (UTC)
- Good to hear from you YBG. As you implied that final cause isn't necessary. So I removed it and added a sentence about the reactivity of the nonmetals, that addresses the noble gas question. I'll pass on the definition vs. description question. Sandbh (talk) 07:38, 4 February 2022 (UTC)
- I hope that works for you. Sandbh (talk) 23:37, 31 January 2022 (UTC)
New lead sentence, 19 March 2022
The lead sentence has been recently changed to read "a nonmetal is a chemical element that is typically a colorless or colored gas, such as oxygen or chlorine, and a poor conductor of heat and electricity." I see at least two major problems with this phrasing. First, nonmetals are a variety of elements of different states of matter, so we should not open by emphasizing gases, even if a majority are gases, because this is an incomplete and misleading definition of what a nonmetal is. Second, "colorless or colored" describes a set and its complement, so can be interpreted as "a nonmetal is a chemical element that is typically a gas", which is both a vague and inaccurate description. I haven't modified anything myself because of all the discussions regarding the lead; further discussion and suggestions are welcome. Pinging Sandbh and YBG. ComplexRational (talk) 16:13, 19 March 2022 (UTC)
- ComplexRational did you happen to view my first suggestion at Wikipedia:Peer review/Nonmetal/archive2#First paragraph again? I am concerned that I may be spinning my wheels as a non-chemist if others aren't also engaging at the peer review; I'll wait for this to be sorted before I continue at the PR. I was just preparing to start a line-by-line review ... SandyGeorgia (Talk) 16:23, 19 March 2022 (UTC)
- @SandyGeorgia: I didn't have the PR on my watchlist, so I don't think I saw your suggestion until just now. My thoughts are pretty much the same as yours: a broad statement qualifying what a nonmetal is. Should I copy-paste this comment to that page to keep the discussion in one place?
- Also, as much as I'd like to engage, I don't expect to have any significant free time for the next two months, so my contributions there will likely only be a few isolated comments and responses. Moreover, I'm happy to offer a second opinion on more generic content (or some crossovers with physics), but I'm also a non-chemist with just a casual interest in the topic. ComplexRational (talk) 18:08, 19 March 2022 (UTC)
- ComplexRational Yes, it might be optimal to keep comments on the peer review, but now that this is here, copying it over would just create a jumble. It might be clearer if, once we get this sorted, I just add a link there back to this discussion here, so everything is included without the need to copy. I understand you're busy, but appreciate you keeping an eye on things as you are able; few science-minded editors have the clarity of prose that you do, and I have No Clue when it comes to Chemistry! I kind of liked my attempt at the first paragraph of the lead, but what do I know :) SandyGeorgia (Talk) 18:36, 19 March 2022 (UTC)
- I agree that the current led sentence is problematic for all the reasons you have mentioned. Exacerbating this is the presence of the word "typically". YBG (talk) 01:03, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
- @YBG and ComplexRational: does the version I first proposed here work, and if not, could you suggest improvements to it? SandyGeorgia (Talk) 01:09, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
- I agree that the current led sentence is problematic for all the reasons you have mentioned. Exacerbating this is the presence of the word "typically". YBG (talk) 01:03, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
- ComplexRational Yes, it might be optimal to keep comments on the peer review, but now that this is here, copying it over would just create a jumble. It might be clearer if, once we get this sorted, I just add a link there back to this discussion here, so everything is included without the need to copy. I understand you're busy, but appreciate you keeping an eye on things as you are able; few science-minded editors have the clarity of prose that you do, and I have No Clue when it comes to Chemistry! I kind of liked my attempt at the first paragraph of the lead, but what do I know :) SandyGeorgia (Talk) 18:36, 19 March 2022 (UTC)
@SandyGeorgia: Here's my tweak of your first suggestion:
- In chemistry, nonmetals are a type of chemical element are usually lower than metals in weight, structural strength, shininess, and ability to conduct heat and electricity. They don't have the characteristics of metals, which are typically shiny silvery-gray solids; moderate to good conductors; and can be molded, shaped or hammered into thin wires or threads without crumbling or shattering. Nonmetals may have a metallic, colorless or colored appearance, with about half being gases and half being brittle to crumbly solids. They are moderate to high in electronegativity; their atoms cannot easily attract electrons.
YBG (talk) 02:53, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
- The last clause should rather be "their atoms can easily attract electrons". :) Double sharp (talk) 04:38, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
- Oopsie ... my typo, that got propagated. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 04:41, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
- The last clause should rather be "their atoms can easily attract electrons". :) Double sharp (talk) 04:38, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
- YBG, a missing word that after element? Otherwise looks good to me. I know that Sandbh was concerned not to define nonmetals as what they are not, as the second sentence does, but that seems unavoidable. After all, their name is nonmetal. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 03:12, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
- The proposed adaption is unintentionally misleading where it says, "They don't have the characteristics of metals, which are typically shiny silvery-gray solids; moderate to good conductors." C, a nonmetal, is a shiny gray solid and a good conductor. H, a nonmetal, is a moderately good conductor of heat. These problems go away by distinguishing between typical and less typical nonmetals, consistent with the fact that nonmetals show a variation in the degree of their nonmetallic character. Describing nonmetals in terms of what they aren’t is not plain English, and should be mostly avoidable, in my view, with careful crafting. Sandbh (talk) 07:28, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
I intend to shortly post some thoughts on the background to the evolution of the lede. For now, please note that I’ve further refined the lede paragraph. Sandbh (talk) 02:38, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
- This lead paragraph is focused on some specific elements, without providing the broad and general definition as in YBG's more general adaptation of the lead I proposed. I don't understand it. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 03:54, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
- Initial (quick) thoughts:
- The most recent version of the lede is written for the lay reader per SandyGeorgia’s idea. It starts with the basics and then progressively fills in the rest of the details. The idea is to provide the lay reader with a tangible sense of what nonmetals are.
- I thought I had it down pat yesterday but changed my mind after reading it on my phone. I feel this current version, linked by SG, now does the job for the lay reader.
- YBG, the context for “typical” is that metals are typically solid, shiny, plastic, and good conductors. Conversely, the “typical” nonmetals (H, N, O, S, F, Cl, Br, He, Ne, Ar, Kr, Xe, Rn) are not solid, not shiny, not plastic, and poor conductors (of electricity).
- That just leaves the shiny nonmetals C, P, Se and I; and the part-time nonmetals err metalloids B, Si, Ge, As, Sb, Te. There are no poor conductors here: C, As, Sb are metallic conductors; the rest are semiconductors consistent with their shiny appearance. Sandbh (talk) 06:34, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
I don't like "Rounding out the field"; are nonmetals a field? It sounds odd. And aren't solids, liquids and gases states of matter rather than a fundamental characteristic? Graham Beards (talk) 06:42, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
- Thanks Graham. All metals we know of are solids apart from Hg. Conversely, the nonmetals that are not shiny are all gases, apart from Br and S. For the lay reader I feel that counts as a fundamental and characteristic difference. Your thoughts?. Sandbh (talk) 07:10, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
- They are not fundamental. In my view the fundamental difference is the metallic bond and the presence of the Fermi gas in metals. The tensile strength of metals, their high melting point , opacity, ductility and conductance are all because of that bond and an understanding of the metallic bond requires quantum theory. Non-metals (and the term is informal) show a broader variety of properties because of they way they are bonded and this is the fundamental difference. The Lead seems to be dodging this because it is deemed to be too technical perhaps? But I see no way round it. As it stand, the article is not accurate and this is a major problem. Don't dump accuracy in favour of simplicity or you might just as well say metals are made by elves and non-metals are made by pixies. Graham Beards (talk) 08:07, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
- Is it possible to jam a layperson-understandable explanation of Fermi gases and metallic bonds into a footnote? Think African humid period and TRAPPIST-1 as examples. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 11:02, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
- They are not fundamental. In my view the fundamental difference is the metallic bond and the presence of the Fermi gas in metals. The tensile strength of metals, their high melting point , opacity, ductility and conductance are all because of that bond and an understanding of the metallic bond requires quantum theory. Non-metals (and the term is informal) show a broader variety of properties because of they way they are bonded and this is the fundamental difference. The Lead seems to be dodging this because it is deemed to be too technical perhaps? But I see no way round it. As it stand, the article is not accurate and this is a major problem. Don't dump accuracy in favour of simplicity or you might just as well say metals are made by elves and non-metals are made by pixies. Graham Beards (talk) 08:07, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
Suggestion for the lede, based on what I wrote at Periodic table#Metallicity and what we currently have:
“ | A nonmetal is a chemical element that generally lacks metallic properties. Nonmetals are often liquids or gases at room temperature, and are brittle when solid. Many have low densities, poor thermal and electrical conductivity, and lack metallic lustre. Chemically, they usually have moderate to high electronegativity, i.e. a tendency to attract electrons: this rationalises their properties, as it makes it difficult for them to lose electrons and engage in metallic bonding. In the periodic table, nonmetallic character tends to increase as one goes from bottom to top and left to right; nonmetals are thus mostly clustered in the top-right corner.
Although the majority of elements are metals, many nonmetals are among the most common elements in Earth and the universe. Two nonmetals, hydrogen and helium, make up about 99% of ordinary matter in the observable universe by mass. Five nonmetallic elements, hydrogen, carbon, nitrogen, oxygen and silicon, largely make up the Earth's crust, atmosphere, oceans and biosphere. Most nonmetals have biological, technological or domestic roles or uses. Living organisms are composed almost entirely of the nonmetals hydrogen, oxygen, carbon, and nitrogen. Near-universal uses for nonmetals are in medicine and pharmaceuticals; lasers and lighting; and household items. While the term non-metallic dates from at least 1566, there is no widely-agreed precise definition of a nonmetal. Elements near the borderline between metals and nonmetals on the periodic table often have properties characteristic of both categories, so that different classifications can be justified by different criteria. Consequently, which elements are recognised as nonmetals depends on the classification criteria used by each author. Fourteen elements are effectively always included and up to about nine more elements are frequently to sometimes added, as shown in the accompanying periodic table extract. Some authors classify borderline elements into an intermediate category of metalloids or semimetals. |
” |
This is of course just a statement of "tendencies". Given all the edge cases everywhere, I think it's a better approach than listing individual cases. It can be argued that C, As, Sb, and Bi are only forming quasi-metallic structures anyway, since the atoms are not equivalently positioned and metallic conduction comes from interactions between the layers, so even the simplification has a grain of truth to it. (Though since Po is more metallic than Bi, it's still a simplification.) Double sharp (talk) 07:58, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
- Sigh. Is this still in there? First paragraph? Once more:
- Both state of matter (SoM) and color are, per the article itself, non-defining and even non-descriptive appearances. Their relation to being a nonmetal is not even described or based in the article body. It is not stated as classifying metal/nonmetal property (not in the body, so not in a source then). They are not listed in any of the § Chemical and § Suggested distinguishing criteria "some ..." (ouch) properties lists. Being science, still no predictions are (can be) made for lesser known elements. For edxample, what about the heavy halogens and nobles? How can they be excluded/included from these statements/claims/notes if there is no scientific base for these two properties?
- It has, by the authors Sandbh's own article writing, no place in the article, and so no reason to even be referred to in the lede. At all. The continuous wrangling with the writing is a prohibitive sign that it is not yet of encyclopedic level or GA stability. The fact that the lede is (still) problematic in this, is an issue for the current peer revieuw. -DePiep (talk) 08:41, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
- Colour is, indeed, irrelevant. Cu, Cs, and Au are clearly metals and equally clearly coloured.
- State of matter is slightly less irrelevant, because being a liquid/gas at r.t. usually means that a metallic state is thermodynamically unstable. Then again, it means that a large macromolecular structure is also thermodynamically unstable. And in any case this should be explained. Double sharp (talk) 08:55, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
- Re Double sharp's proposed text at 07:58, which I generally like (pending resolution of color), but some comments:
- See #"Near-universal" below.
- The first sentence is fine for a paragraph within the body of Periodic table. But for the first sentence of the lead here, it says nothing except a nonmetal is not a metal, which is not entirely helpful for what will be coughed up by Google. It could benefit from one more clause that gives a "such as" overview of the mentioned properties.
- Please avoid using i.e. in the lead (or in articles, for that matter).
- "Rationalizes their properties" will be lost on layreaders ... first paragraph for a concept taught in high school needs to be accessible.
- SandyGeorgia (Talk) 15:18, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
Thanks for all the comments, suggestions and ideas. Since nonmetals, in chemistry, are those judged to have a predominance of applicable properties, the lede sentence now simply says just that:
- "In chemistry, a nonmetal is a chemical element judged to have a predominance of characteristic properties such as being transparent or colored; having a low weight; low to no structural strength; poor thermal conductivity; poor electrical conductivity; low melting point; low boiling point; and a tendency to form acidic compounds."
This is an accurate statement of the situation, largely written in plain English, for the lay reader, in accordance with WP policy.
I’ve retained "colour" since 4 of 23 elements or 1 in 6 of elements within scope of the article are colored; conversely the fact that 3 of 95 or ca. 1 in 32 metals are known to be coloured is effectively meaningless. Color for nonmetals is significant in that the band gaps of the semiconducting elements P, Se, I, B, Si, Ge, and Te are less than the visible spectrum cut off of ca. 1.8 ev, hence their metallic appearance. Conversely the band gaps for red P and S (yellow), for example, are greater hence their coloured appearance.
For context, the rest of the lede’s first paragraph says:
- "Solid nonmetals, such as graphitic carbon and sulfur, are brittle to crumbly, and cannot be hammered into sheets or easily drawn into wires without shattering or breaking. Nonmetal atoms are moderate to high in electronegativity; they tend to easily attract electrons."
The “negative” reference to "not being hammered into sheets or easily drawn into wires" is not plain English, but this is probably unavoidable.
Other characteristic properties such as bonding types, oxidation numbers, and cation/ion formation are included later in the article.
Double sharp: I’ll later look closer, if I may, at your mention of elements close to the border between metals and nonmetals. Sandbh (talk) 12:09, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
- I’ve abandoned the idea of defying nonmetals in terms of what they are. Picking up on Double sharp’s suggestion, and SG’s comment, the lede paragraph now reads:
- “In chemistry, a nonmetal is a chemical element that generally lacks a predominance of metallic properties. They are nearly all gases or solids at room temperature, such as oxygen or sulfur. The only liquid nonmetal, bromine, is usually topped by a layer of its fumes. They typically lack the shiny appearance of metals, have low weight, and are poor thermal and electrical conductors. The solid nonmetals are brittle to crumbly, cannot be flattened into sheets or easily drawn into wires without shattering or breaking, and have low to no structural strength. Nonmetal atoms are moderately to highly electronegative; they tend to attract electrons in chemical reactions and to form acidic compounds.”
- — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sandbh (talk • contribs)
- I still feel that the topic should be defined before branching into specific examples or elements, which only confuses the layreader. At least move sentences two and three to the end, after the definition, but reading about a layer of fumes at the very beginning of the article is just odd. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 02:01, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
- SandyGeorgia: To some extent, as you alluded earlier, a nonmetal is something that is not a metal. The implication being that metals have so shaped civilisations over thousands of years that everyone, including lay readers, know that metals are shiny, usually heavy, and good conductors of heat (a hot car under the sun) and electricity (lightning rods, etc). So the term “nonmetal” just by itself conveys much information already. The Br mention is meant to suggest that while Br is the only liquid metal, it is so volatile that one usually encounters it together with its fumes i.e. gaseous vapours. So the nonmetals are almost all either gases or solids, unlike the metals which are all solids, bar one. Otherwise, having to account for Br as the only liquid nonmetal becomes rather exasperating in terms of prose construction. I’ll look at this some more along the lines of your suggestion, and maybe post, revert, and ping you a link, if something good comes of it (or not). Sandbh (talk) 03:37, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
- SandyGeorgia: I moved sentences 2 and 3 further down, reordered then, and joined some other sentences so there are now only four sentences left:
- In chemistry, a nonmetal is a chemical element that generally lacks a predominance of metallic properties; they are typically transparent or non-metallic in appearance, have low weight, and are poor thermal and electrical conductors.
- Solid nonmetals are brittle to crumbly, cannot be flattened into sheets or easily drawn into wires without shattering or breaking, and have low to no structural strength.
- The rest of the nonmetals are nearly all gases at room temperature (the only liquid nonmetal, bromine, is usually topped by a layer of its own fumes).
- Nonmetal atoms are moderately to highly electronegative; they tend to attract electrons in chemical reactions and to form acidic compounds.
- So the result is now a definition that is more than negative in expression, followed by the physical distinction between the solids and the rest, and closing with two chemical properties. I hope you like it. Sandbh (talk) 05:37, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
- I find this version digestible, clear, thorough and understandable as a non-chemist (although I still think the fumes are adding verbiage that is unnecessary and lost on a general audience). If others are satisfied, I'll continue tomorrow (doc app't today) my line-by-line, at the peer review, but wish others would be watching as well. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 14:50, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
- That’s beaut! I’ll remove mention of the fumes and see if this can be better placed in the nonmetal halogens section. Sandbh (talk) 23:03, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
- I find this version digestible, clear, thorough and understandable as a non-chemist (although I still think the fumes are adding verbiage that is unnecessary and lost on a general audience). If others are satisfied, I'll continue tomorrow (doc app't today) my line-by-line, at the peer review, but wish others would be watching as well. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 14:50, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
- I still feel that the topic should be defined before branching into specific examples or elements, which only confuses the layreader. At least move sentences two and three to the end, after the definition, but reading about a layer of fumes at the very beginning of the article is just odd. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 02:01, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
Arbitrary break
Double sharp, fyi that I’ve incorporated your good suggestions here to the extent that I feel is practical and appropriate. I’m reluctant to say something in the lede about "metalloids" as a sometimes third class (notwithstanding they behave chemically as nonmetals) given the lede is supposed to give the lay reader an overall impression of the subject matter, and it currently does that. In my view, more details about the pesky or mysterious metalloids can be left to the main body of the article, as is currently the case. Sandbh (talk) 03:57, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
"Near-universal"
While you all sort the ongoing issues with the definition in the lead, I will postpone my line-by-line at the peer review, where I had next planned to tackle clarity of prose. A good deal of progress has been made, but the article is yet a long ways from FAC ready.
But as long as we're looking at the lead, can this (as a sample of lacking prose clarity) be sorted:
Near-universal uses for nonmetals are in medicine and pharmaceuticals; lasers and lighting; and household items.
What does "near-universal" refer to? Does it mean almost every nonmetal is used in at least one of these applications, or does it mean that almost every one of these applications involves a nonmetal? The reader should not have to stop, in the lead, to sort out what a sentence is saying. As written, it is adding nothing but confusion to my layreader knowledge, and could be re-written in plainer language. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 15:09, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
- Oh! You thanked me :) before I’d gotten round to saying I’d fixed this. Nicely spotted BTW. Sandbh (talk) 03:14, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
"by each author"
which of these borderline cases are counted as nonmetals can vary depending on the classification criteria used by each author.
Is "by each author" redundant ? Other than that, I'm satisfied with the readability of the lead and will move on to the body starting tomorrow. I am still concerned about the "always, frequently, sometimes" construct, as it may still feel too synth-y to get by FAC, but I will propose a way to fix that on the peer review page. Sorry to be working so piecemeal, but that is the luxury that peer review affords, over FAC, and is a good thing. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 00:36, 22 March 2022 (UTC)
- Trimmed. Agree about PR v FAC. Sandbh (talk) 23:26, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
Lede suggestions: Trim, poor conductor first, and "Nonmetal element"
As a first-time reader, the lede is clear and well-crafted, but the following things jump out:
- In the first sentence, stating the poor electrical and thermal conductivity would be much more helpful than the rather technical mention of tending to form acidic compounds, which makes the noble gasses and ammonia feel unwelcome. The pure semiconductors are poor conductors compared to metals, and carbon's exceptional behavior shouldn't take away from beginning the article with the main idea for a general audience.
- I mention a tendency to form acidic compounds as I feel it's important to say something about the chemistry of the nonmetals. I haven't included poor electrical conductivity in the first sentence of the lede since graphite is a rather good electrical conductor, and arsenic and antimony, which are sometimes counted as nonmetals, are rather OK such conductors. For thermal conductivity, metals range from 6.3 W m−1 K−1 to 429 for silver. The thermal conductivities of the following nonmetallic elements fall within this range: B, C, Si, Ge, P, As, Sb. The third sentence in the lede does say however, "Unlike metals, most nonmetals are poor conductors of heat and electricity."
- This lede sentence is more distracting than helpful:
"This is so even though the number of nonmetal elements is several times lower than the number of metal elements"
Simply cutting it would make the paragraph stronger. The brief discussion that precedes it makes very clear the overwhelming importance of the four named nonmetals.- That sentence no longer exists.
- Changing the article title to "Nonmetal element" would be helpful. The first sentence of the lede makes clear that this is specifically about elements, but then abandons any readers who are looking to learn about materials that are non-metals in general; they have to scan the whole article to find out that compounds and molecular materials are simply not covered, and then begin a hunt for another article. Metal covers all metallic materials, elemental or not, and the change in scope between that and Nonmetal is puzzling.
- The first sentence of the lede makes its scope clear: "In chemistry, a nonmetal is a type of chemical element..." My feeling is that the most popular use of the term nonmetal is in the sense of chemical elements. I don't know of a field of study that is devoted to "nonmetal(lic) materials" which would presumably cover e.g. ceramics and glasses, plastics, composites, foams, textiles and presumably nonmetallic liquids and gases. Sandbh (talk) 05:16, 23 February 2022 (UTC)
I made no edits to the article because I note that the solicitation for FAC nomination for this article has begun. If suggestions are not helpful at this time because they disrupt that process, then please ignore for now. –MadeOfAtoms (talk) 10:48, 4 February 2022 (UTC)
Withdrawn by the nominator, as the editor requested to have comments at the talk page. CactiStaccingCrane (talk) 00:05, 10 February 2022 (UTC)
GA Reassessment
- This discussion is transcluded from Talk:Nonmetal/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the reassessment.
Notifying @Sandbh:.
Look, I know that you have worked on an article so hard, yet the article gets reassessed and it seems like no one cares about you. But, I really do understand your stress, and thus I don't nominate Nonmetal for community assessment, because surely the FAC people will batch you into death. I want this article to be way better than this now. And you are not alone, I also has SpaceX Starship being culled for review even after so many months of work.
Anyways, the primary reason I want to reassess the article is at criteria 1a (the prose is clear, concise...), 1b (complies with the manual of style guidelines...) and 3a (it addresses the main aspects of the topic) at here. I have a feeling that this article is written in a way that break the prose badly, shown one example below (criteria 1a + 1b):
The distinction between metals and nonmetals arose, in a convoluted manner, from a crude recognition of natural kinds of matter. Thus:
- matter could be divided into pure substances and mixtures;
- pure substances eventually could be distinguished as compounds and elements;
- "metallic" elements seemed to have broadly distinguishable attributes that other elements did not...
I also has concerns at the comprehensiveness of the article. What are the enormous uses of the nonmetals? How does nonmetals are discovered since the ancient times? Why do the nonmetal criteria is so convoluted? How about bio-compatibility? There's much to discuss. (criterion 3a)
I want to mention accessibility and layout problems as well, but that's for another time. There's a ton of work to do already :) CactiStaccingCrane (talk) 16:16, 9 February 2022 (UTC)
Speedy keep and close this GAR
I see no reasons for a GAR on this article at all. I don't think CactiStaccingCrane is capable of appraising the prose given the gibberish they have written on this page. What on Earth does "How does nonmetals are discovered since the ancient times?" mean? The question is totally incomprehensible. The review of SpaceX Starship has absolutely nothing to do with this article or its GA status. This nomination just comes across as some sort of convoluted tit for tat and is disruptive editing. Graham Beards (talk) 18:51, 9 February 2022 (UTC)
- Ok, whatever. If you guys don't like it, then there's no reason for me to continue further. CactiStaccingCrane (talk) 00:04, 10 February 2022 (UTC)
Speedy keep and close this WP:IGF GAR
I intend to edit the article in light of feedback rec’d at FAC #4, and to then list it for the second time at PR. Concerns of the kind raised above, if still outstanding, can be listed in that forum. Sandbh (talk) 23:04, 9 February 2022 (UTC)
Peer review
- The article is in Peer review since 22 February 2022. -DePiep (talk) 07:04, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
FAC5 (27 August 2022)
This article is WP:FAC per 27 August 27, 2022. See Wikipedia:Featured_article_candidates/Nonmetal/archive5. DePiep (talk) 05:38, 3 September 2022 (UTC)
Copyedit
Following the FAC which closed without consensus to promote, Sandbh has asked me to take a look at the prose. I am delighted to accept; this is an important article on a subject I am fascinated by and which is dear to me. Could I ask regular editors to watch what I am doing; even though I have read the FAC and this talk page, I might inadvertently change the meaning in a way which leaves it untrue to the sources, which in most cases I will not have read. (I doubt it, but you never know.) I might start in the next day or two. Just keep me right, ok? John (talk) 16:08, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
- @John: I'll be happy to keep an eye out for factual accuracy in the background, but I can't promise a solid time commitment at the moment. Complex/Rational 19:38, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
Many thanks to User:John for your gracious acceptance, and to User:ComplexRational for your offer to maintain a watch on factual accuracy. Sandbh (talk) 04:30, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
- @John: While I am happy to learn (the language) from your edits, I want to note that other longer term issues regarding this article are of encyclopedic nature, and probably cannot be resolved by improving language. -DePiep (talk) 15:46, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
- Thank you. Yes, I am getting a feeling for that as I start to trim at it. Is there anything particular that you have in mind? John (talk) 15:50, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
- No nothing particular. I note that after this June 2021 version, the article has undergone a full rewrite, as in: from scratch. Also, there are multiple FAC and similar targeted discussions since. Well, one piece de resistance I know of: while color and state of matter are not defining nor distinguisihing for nonmetals, and not analysed as related to nonmetal-ness in the body, these properties keep appearing in the first sentence. This does not seem like an incident, but a pattern (the property–classification setup). Alas, maybe we'll meet again over this. DePiep (talk) 16:52, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
- Interesting. Here is a first sample batch of copyedits. Somewhat of a feeling of déjà vu as I remember copyediting metalloid back in the day, I think, and it had similar problems to this. Is this an article about the concept of nonmetallicity? Or a survey of the various nonmetals and their chemical and physical properties? To what extent should we try to carry along the general reader into tricky ideas like electronegativity? I need to have a long, hard think about this one. Luckily there is no deadline. John (talk) 16:25, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
- No nothing particular. I note that after this June 2021 version, the article has undergone a full rewrite, as in: from scratch. Also, there are multiple FAC and similar targeted discussions since. Well, one piece de resistance I know of: while color and state of matter are not defining nor distinguisihing for nonmetals, and not analysed as related to nonmetal-ness in the body, these properties keep appearing in the first sentence. This does not seem like an incident, but a pattern (the property–classification setup). Alas, maybe we'll meet again over this. DePiep (talk) 16:52, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
- Thank you. Yes, I am getting a feeling for that as I start to trim at it. Is there anything particular that you have in mind? John (talk) 15:50, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
Thanks John.
It may help to change the article name to Nonmetal (chemical element). This would set out the scope of the article better e.g. plastics, woods and stones, all of which are "nonmetals" in a broad sense, are excluded. This problem doesn't arise with "metalloid" because of the strong association of that word with silicon and germanium etc.
For EN, Jensen (1996, p. 11) asserted that "no concept more thoroughly pervades the fabric of modern chemistry". I'd add, "aside from the periodic table and probably the concepts of acids and bases, and metals and nonmetals". The simple EN rubric is that metals have low EN and nonmetals have high EN. While there is some overlap between the two zones, as tends to be the case for all single criteria, it works well enough for most purposes. Sandbh (talk) 00:41, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
Some comments about the sample batch of copy edits to follow. Sandbh (talk) 00:41, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
Sample batch of copy edits
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Before:
In chemistry, a nonmetal is a chemical element that generally lacks a predominance of metallic properties...
After:
A nonmetal is a chemical element that lacks a predominance of metallic properties...
- I think that exclusion of
In chemistry, aworks only if the name of the article becomes "Nonmetal (chemical element)". I included thegenerallyqualifier to indicate that this was a qualitative judgement. Sandbh (talk) 01:01, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
Before:
Nearly all nonmetals have individual uses in medicine and pharmaceuticals; lighting and lasers; and household items.
After:
Nearly all nonmetals have uses in medicine and pharmaceuticals; lighting and lasers; and household items.
- I included "individual" as not all nonmetals have uses in all three areas. Sandbh (talk) 01:01, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
Before:
Some elements have a marked mixture of metallic and nonmetallic properties;
After:
Some elements have a mixture of metallic and nonmetallic properties;
- Virtually all elements, to varying degrees, have a mixture of metallic and nonmetallic properties. Only a few have such a mixture to a marked extent. Sandbh (talk) 01:01, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
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Before:
A nonmetal is a chemical element that has, among other properties, a relatively low density and moderate to high electronegativity. More generally, they lack a preponderance of more metallic attributes such as luster, deformability, good thermal and electrical conductivity, and low electronegativity.
After:
A nonmetal is a chemical element that has low density and moderate to high electronegativity. They also lack metallic attributes such as luster, deformability, good thermal and electrical conductivity, and low electronegativity.
- Tricky. The "after" version does not quite work, since quite a few nonmetals have luster (e.g. C, black P, Se and I) and C, As, Sb are pretty good electrical and thermal conductors. Sandbh (talk) 02:35, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
Before:
Fourteen effectively always recognized as such are hydrogen, oxygen, nitrogen, and sulfur; the corrosive halogens fluorine, chlorine, bromine, and iodine; and the noble gases helium, neon, argon, krypton, xenon, and radon (see e.g. Larrañaga et al).
After:
Fourteen almost always recognized are hydrogen, oxygen, nitrogen, and sulfur; the reactive halogens fluorine, chlorine, bromine, and iodine; and the noble gases helium, neon, argon, krypton, xenon, and radon (see e.g. Larrañaga et al)
- Suggest replacing "reactive" with "highly reactive" (in order to distinguish them from H, O, N and S. Sandbh (talk) 02:33, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
Before:
Vernon had earlier reported that these three elements were instead sometimes counted as metalloids.
After:
Vernon had earlier reported that these three elements were counted as metalloids.
- Suggest this ce be reverted since the before version is accurate whereas the after version is not. Sandbh (talk) 02:40, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
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Before:
Outwardly, about half of nonmetallic elements are colored or colorless gases; most of the rest are shiny solids. Bromine, the only liquid, is so volatile that it is usually topped by a layer of its fumes; sulfur is the only colored solid nonmetal.
After:
About half of nonmetallic elements are gases; most of the rest are shiny solids. Bromine, the only liquid, is so volatile that it is usually topped by a layer of its fumes; sulfur is the only colored solid nonmetal.
- Suggest this ce be reverted given the reference to S being colored. Sandbh (talk) 02:48, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
- Surely this needs some sort of disclaimer about allotropy, given phosphorus. Double sharp (talk) 22:37, 9 October 2022 (UTC)
- I think a hatnote would address this: "Physical properties apply to elements in their most stable forms in ambient conditions." Sandbh (talk) 01:57, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
- Surely this needs some sort of disclaimer about allotropy, given phosphorus. Double sharp (talk) 22:37, 9 October 2022 (UTC)
The remaining copy edits are right on target. Sandbh (talk) 02:50, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
Proposed edits
I propose to change this...
- Definition and applicable elements
- A nonmetal is a chemical element that has low density and moderate to high electronegativity. They also lack metallic attributes such as luster, deformability, good thermal and electrical conductivity, and low electronegativity.[11] Since there is no rigorous definition of a nonmetal,[10][12][13] some variation exists among sources as to which elements are classified as such. The decisions involved depend on which property or properties are regarded as most indicative of nonmetallic or metallic character.[14]
...to this:
- Definition and applicable elements
- A nonmetal is a chemical element deemed to lack a preponderance of metallic properties such as luster, deformability, good thermal and electrical conductivity, and the capacity to form a basic (rather than acidic) oxide.[11] Since there is no rigorous definition of a nonmetal,[10][12][13] some variation exists among sources as to which elements are classified as such. The decisions involved depend on which properties are regarded as most indicative of metallic or nonmetallic character.[14]
The "after" version is less prescriptive and more in keeping with the literature, which tends to focus on what nonmetals aren't rather that what they are. It also removes the reference to electronegativity. I cannot see any easy alternative place in the article for the accompanying density v EN image, so it seems like it'll have to go, at least for now.
@John: I suspect this proposal may go a long way to resolving your concerns. How does it look to you? Sandbh (talk) 05:28, 13 October 2022 (UTC)
- As the lede (including 1st sentence) is based upon/derived from the article body, the bodytext as discussed in § Copyedit (16:52) § Color and state of matter should be resolved first. Otherwise, this is breaking good (encyclopedic) logic; it is not a textual issue. To be clear: as long as lede and abody do not match in this sense, I oppose this incidental edit. Also, it is useless to push this change in as a matter of John's language quest. btw, I think ";" should be ",". DePiep (talk) 06:33, 13 October 2022 (UTC)
- The first sentence of the lede says:
- "A nonmetal is a chemical element that lacks a predominance of metallic properties; they range from colorless gases (like hydrogen) to shiny and high-melting point solids (like boron)."
- The latter part, which I wrote with the general reader in mind, is derived from later in the article where it says:
- General properties
- Physical
- About half of nonmetallic elements are gases; most of the rest are shiny solids. Bromine, the only liquid, is so volatile that it is usually topped by a layer of its fumes; sulfur is the only colored solid nonmetal...Nonmetals that form giant structures...(e.g. silicon), have higher melting and boiling points, as it takes more energy to overcome their stronger covalent bonds, so they are all solids.
- The accompanying image shows the variety in form and colour of the nonmetals.
- John noted that his copyediting needs to remain true to the sources. My proposed incidental edit is designed to facilitate this.
- Thanks for the suggestion; I've replaced the ; with commas. Sandbh (talk) 05:25, 14 October 2022 (UTC)
Color and state of matter
DePiep raises an interesting point.
Obviously all metals are shiny and all bar Hg are solid. I know a little about the shininess; visible light gets scattered by the delocalised surface electrons.
The nonmetals are shiny (B, Si, Ge, As, Sb, Te; C, black P, Se, I), colored (S, F, Cl, Br) or colorless (H, N, O, and the noble gases).
The mechanism of shininess for the semimetals C, As and Sb is the same as that for the metals.
The mechanism for the rest of the shiny nonmetals, which are all semiconductors, arises from their band gaps being less than equal to the visible spectrum cut off of 1.8 eV. S has a bigger band gap, giving rise to its yellow color.
The mechanism for the remaining colored and colorless nonmetals, has to do with the permitted energy levels that their individual electrons occupy.
Why metals are nearly all solid whereas nonmetals cover all three bases is something I'll need to look further into. I do know that Hg is liquid on account of relativistic effects.
Par for the course, there is a little bit of overlap going on here in that C, As, Sb have the electronic structure of semimetals, as does Bi. Yet the chemistry of C, As, Sb is largely nonmetallic whereas Bi is regarded as having just enough metallic character to merit being admitted to the metal club. Frex, nitric acid gives carbon dioxide with C, arsenic acid with As, antimony trioxide with Sb, and bismuth nitrate with Bi.
I intend doing this work as a stand alone exercise from John's copyediting, and will post the results here. Sandbh (talk) 05:18, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
- TL;DR. If this is the missing encyclopedic link, it should be in the article. Then, I don't think it has the right proportions. As talkpage post, it doesn't solve the question. DePiep (talk) 06:50, 7 October 2022 (UTC)
- Well in my favourite counterexample to that, sulfuric acid already gives the sulfate with Sb as well as Bi (but not As). To some extent it can be national-traditional variation: from what I remember, Russian authors are likelier to call Sb a metal than English authors (though this may be because Russian authors often don't recognise a "metalloid" category).
- Metals are nearly all solid because the metallic bond is strong and, crucially, extends over the whole network. You really need special circumstances to have a liquid metal: few electrons to share (Rb, Cs, Fr), relativistic pseudo-closed shell configurations (Hg, maybe Cn and Fl), or some weird molecular-like thing going on (Ga). (And here I am assuming 40°C weather to define "liquid".) When the covalent bonds extend over the whole network, we always get a solid, too (B, C, black P, Si, Ge, Se, Te), and sometimes we even get one where it doesn't when van der Waals forces are strong enough (the big ones: white P, S, yellow As, red Se, I). So it's not a metal vs nonmetal thing; it's closer to a giant-structure vs molecular thing (blurring as the molecule gets heavier). Double sharp (talk) 22:36, 9 October 2022 (UTC)
Antimony does not really give a sulfate. Solid antimony sulfate contains infinite ladders of SO4 tetrahedra and SbO3 pyramids sharing corners. It is often described as a mixed oxide, Sb2O3.3SO3. Sandbh (talk) 03:00, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
- If this is your objection to Double sharp's post, that means the rest is a good replacement for the color & phase topic in the article, starters. IOW, this is the encyclopedic approach (some ce todo allright). It also leads to the conclusion that it is not 1st-sentence-worthy. DePiep (talk) 08:19, 12 October 2022 (UTC)
- This is a bad draft of the colour paragraph:
- "Nonmetallic elements are either shiny, colored, or colorless. For graphitic carbon, black phosphorus, arsenic, antimony, selenium and iodine their structures feature varying degrees of delocalised electrons that scatter incoming visible light, resulting in a shiny appearance (Wiberg 2001, p. 416). The colored nonmetals (sulfur, fluorine, chlorine, bromine) absorb some colours (wavelengths) and transmit the complementary colours. For chlorine, its "familiar yellow-green colour...is due to a broad region of absorption in the violet and blue regions of the spectrum" (Elliot 1929, p. 629).^ For the colorless nonmetals (hydrogen, nitrogen, oxygen, and the noble gases) their electrons are held sufficiently strongly such that no absorption occurs in the visible region of the spectrum, and all visible light is transmitted.”
- This is a bad draft of the colour paragraph:
- ^ The absorbed light may be converted to heat or re-emitted in all directions so that the emission spectrum is thousands of times weaker than the incident light radiation.
- Elliot A 1929, "The absorption band spectrum of chlorine", Proceedings of the Royal Society A, vol. 123, no. 792, pp. 629–644
- Wiberg N 2001, Inorganic Chemistry, Academic Press, San Diego. Wiberg is here referring specifically to iodine.
- The difference in solid, liquid or gaseous forms of nonmetals is addressed in the Physical properties section, i.e. "The internal structures and bonding arrangements of the nonmetals explain their differences in form...".
@Double sharp: I've added a paragraph to the Physical section on the colours of nonmetallic elements. Could you please check to see if that looks OK? (The accompanying footnote needs a citation but the rest should be OK.) Thank you, Sandbh (talk) 12:33, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
- It looks pretty much alright to me, based on what I could find in the literature. Double sharp (talk) 19:42, 29 October 2022 (UTC)
RfC on the Classification of elements
Over at WT:ELEMENTS an RfC is opened on the topic highly relevant on the nonmetals too. See § Request for comment on the classification of chemical elements. You are invited to participate. DePiep (talk) 07:23, 17 February 2023 (UTC)
Astatine
Isn't astatine a metalloid? Here it says astatine is a metal, but most other sources say it's a metalloid or nonmetal? 2603:6000:8740:54B1:21BE:C597:B635:6023 (talk) 17:33, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
- In lists of metalloids, astatine appears about 40% of the time.
- The bulk properties of astatine remain unknown as a visible quantity of it would immediately self-vaporize from the heat generated by its radioactivity. It remains to be seen if, with sufficient cooling, a macroscopic quantity could be deposited as a thin film. Historically, "since elements in heavier periods often resemble their n+1 and n−1 neighbours more than their lighter congeners, astatine…was expected to be radioactive and metallic like polonium."[1]
- Qualitative and quantitative assessments of its status, including having regard to relativistic effects, have been consistent with it being a metal:
- 1940. Astatine was judged to be a metal when it was first synthesized.[2] That assessment was consistent with some metallic character seen in iodine,[3] its lighter halogen congener.
- 1972. Batsanov calculated astatine would have a band gap of 0.7 eV[4] (but see the 2013 entry)
- 1983. Edwards and Sienko speculated that, on the basis of the non-relativistic Goldhammer-Herzfeld criterion for metallicity, astatine was probably a metalloid.[5] As the ratio is based on classical arguments[6] it does not accommodate the finding that polonium (cf. 2006 entry following) adopts a metallic (rather than covalent) crystalline structure, on relativistic grounds.[7] Even so it offers a first order rationalization for the occurrence of metallic character amongst the elements.[8]
- 2002. Siekierski and Burgess presumed astatine would be a metal in the context of some of the properties of iodine.[9]
- 2006. Restrepo et al., on the basis of a comparative study of 128 known and interpolated physiochemical, geochemical and chemical properties of 72 of the elements, reported that astatine appeared to share more in common with polonium (a metal) than it did with the established halogens and that, “At should not be considered as a halogen."[10] In so doing they echoed the 1940 observation that, "The chemical properties of the unknown substance are very close to those of polonium."[11]
- 2010. Thornton and Burdette observed that "Since elements in heavier periods often resemble their n+1 and n-1 neighbours more than their lighter congeners, eka-iodine [astatine]...was expected to be radioactive and metallic like polonium." [12]
- 2013. Hermann, Hoffmann, and Ashcroft predicted At would be an fcc metal, once all relativistic effects are taken into account, and that it would have a band gap of 0.68 eV (cf. Batsanov) if only some of these effects were taken into account.[13]
- While astatine could reasonably be presumed to be a metalloid based on ordinary periodic trends, relativistic effects—as seen in gold, mercury, and the heavier p-block elements—are expected to result in condensed astatine being a ductile FCC metal. It could also be expected to show significant nonmetallic character, as is normally the case for metals in, or in the vicinity of, the p-block.
- The suggested distinguishing criteria for metals and nonmetals place At in a metal quadrant.
- References
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- 2. Vasáros L & Berei K 1985, General properties of astatine, in Kugler HK & Keller C (eds), Gmelin Handbook of Inorganic and Organometallic chemistry, 8th ed., At, Astatine, system no. 8a, Springer-Verlag, pp. 107–28 (109)
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- — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sandbh (talk • contribs) 03:22, 25 April 2023 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dhtwiki (talk • contribs)
- @Dhtwiki and Sandbh: To deconfuse. Currently this article makes this top level distinction: Metal-Nonmetal only. So, no major class Metalloids in there. The Metalloids appear as subdivision of class Nonmetals. The article is rewritten this way by Sandbh, with the pre-overhaul GA-icon kept undiscussed.
- So the OP
Isn't astatine a metalloid?
(i.e., not a Metal), in this class scheme requires redefinition of At as a Nonmetal first before it can be subclassified Metalloid. Recent complication: same author (Sandbh) appears to have changed the article object (ie, everything) as "chemically" only [1] while not changing anything to article body, title, TOC or setup???. This is disputable, in various ways, and is disputed. DePiep (talk) 08:41, 25 April 2023 (UTC)
Thank you DePiep.
Yes, the two great classes are (i) metals and (ii) nonmetals. This is a universal distinction. "Metalloids" is only a sometimes classification.
The treatment of elements occupying the frontier territory where the metals meet the nonmetals varies from author to author. Some consider them separate from both metals and nonmetals (and refer to them as metalloids); some regard them as nonmetals or as a sub-class of nonmetals. Other authors count some of them as metals, for example arsenic and antimony, due to their similarities to heavy metals. It has been known for over 100 years that the elements commonly recognised as metalloids (B, Si, Ge, As, Sb, Te) behave chemically like nonmetals. The article treats them as "metalloid nonmetals" in light of their chemical behavior, and for comparative purposes. The metalloids further meet the criteria for nonmetals of low density and relatively high electronegativity.
Astatine has at various times been counted as a metal, metalloid, or nonmetal.
It isn't included in the article since it has been counted as a (post-transition) metal. The article says:
- "Astatine, the fifth halogen, is often ignored on account of its rarity and intense radioactivity;[17] theory and experimental evidence suggest it is a metal."[18]
The edit in question changed the opening sentence from:
- "In chemistry, a nonmetal (or non-metal) is a chemical element..."
- TO
- "A nonmetal (or non-metal) is a chemical element..."
There was no change to the article object, since nonmetals are still referred to in terms of physical and chemical properties. Sandbh (talk) 06:39, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
Article could be revised and renamed: Main Group Chemistry
The article is nice, although the topic called Main Group chemistry might be more appropriate. Has that idea been discussed? --Smokefoot (talk) 22:25, 11 April 2023 (UTC)
- Ealier discussion: WT:CHEM § Nonmetal: Help with copyediting?. Could be that Main Group is a valid topic, but I do not see how it would be an alternative for this topic. That is, replacing nonmetal chemistry. (Incidentally, does it differ from main group?) DePiep (talk) 06:29, 12 April 2023 (UTC)
- Good point. You are correct: Nonmetal is a thing. The article is essential. But the chemistry stuff (reactions, structures, minerals) should mostl be in Main Group Chemistry.
- Yes, I realize that I am discussing this issue in two places, but I dont think that anyone at the Chem Project cares.--Smokefoot (talk) 20:08, 12 April 2023 (UTC)
- No problem, Smokefoot, I only added the link to keep the arguments, already made, at hand. I assume this talkpage is best place. DePiep (talk) 06:19, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
Hatnote "In chemistry"
Added hatnoting "This article is about nonmetal elements in chemistry" [2] is confusing, sloppy and not correct.
For starters, the body and the TOC say otherwise (eg "Physics"); this distinction is not made. Further hatnote specs (astronomy, metallicity, nonmetallic substances, in physics, valence and conduction bands) add to the confusion/mistake. If article content is changed into this, the article should be moved. But morte likely this is inappropriate application of {{hatnote}}; more like trying to fit topic description (lede issue) in a WP:HATNOTE.
I request and expect Sandbh starts a talk on this page proposing all desired changes coherently. DePiep (talk) 06:27, 24 April 2023 (UTC)
- Thanks DePiep for your interest. I followed WP:HAT in adding the hatnote.
- The only other mention of "physics" is in the Discovery section of the main body of the article, which says:
- "Chemistry- or physics-based techniques used in the isolation efforts were spectroscopy, fractional distillation, radiation detection, electrolysis, ore acidification, displacement reactions, combustion and heating; a few nonmetals occurred naturally as free elements."
- This does not have anything do with the concept of a nonmetal in physics.
- Astronomy and materials science are not mentioned in the main body.
--- Sandbh (talk) 07:14, 24 April 2023 (UTC)
- Name change I'm inclined to change the name of the article to "Nonmetal (chemistry)" and to create disambiguation links for:
- Nonmetal (astronomy) --> Metallicity
- Nonmetal (physics) --> Valence and conduction bands
- The hatnote would be reduced to "For nonmetallic substances see Materials science."
- Sandbh (talk) 01:13, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
I've renamed the article to Nonmetal (chemistry) and trimmed the hatnote, after setting up redirects for Nonmetal (astronomy) and Nonmetal (physics). --- Sandbh (talk) 07:26, 30 April 2023 (UTC)
Nonmetal halogen, halogen nonmetal
Both terms are found in the literature.
Since there are alkali metals, alkaline earth metals, and transition metals, i.e. the convention is to put "metals" last, I've replaced mentions of "nonmetal halogens" with "halogen nonmetals". --- Sandbh (talk) 08:24, 24 April 2023 (UTC)
First paragraph of lede
The first paragraph of the lede starts by explaining what nonmetals are not:
- "A nonmetal (or non-metal) is a chemical element that generally lacks a predominance of metallic properties; they range from colorless gases (like hydrogen) to shiny solids (like carbon, as graphite). They are usually poor conductors of heat and electricity, and brittle or crumbly when solid, due to their electrons having low mobility. In contrast, metals are good conductors and most are easily flattened into sheets and drawn into wires since their electrons are generally free-moving. Nonmetal atoms tend to attract electrons in chemical reactions and to form acidic compounds."
I am thinking about changing this so that nonmetals are instead explained in terms of what they are:
- "A nonmetal is a type of chemical element that is a poor electrical conductor or is a mechanically weak and brittle solid the most stable oxide of which is acidic. They range from colorless gases (like hydrogen) to shiny substances (like carbon, as graphite). Their electrons have low mobility. In contrast, metals are good conductors and most are easily flattened into sheets and drawn into wires since their electrons are generally free-moving. Nonmetal atoms tend to attract electrons in chemical reactions and and to form acidic compounds."
The reference to poor electrical conductivity applies to nearly all nonmetals. Carbon, as graphite, is an exception. But it is a mechanically weak and brittle substance, and CO2 is an acidic oxide.
Among the metals, and semimetals (in a physics-based sense), gallium, arsenic, antimony and bismuth are brittle and mechanically weak. Gallium trioxide is amphoteric; aqueous solutions of arsenic trioxide are weakly acidic; antimony trioxide is amphoteric, but has acidic properties predominating; and bismuth trioxide is basic.
--- Sandbh (talk) 02:23, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
- Well, how do the sources typically define things?
- It seems to me that nonmetallicity is more correlated with keeping one's own electrons than attracting others', i.e. electronegativity rather than electron affinity. The noble gases are a clear example. Also, Cs has a higher electron affinity than B. Electronegativity is also not perfect considering that Au beats Si by this measure, but at least it doesn't have literally alkali metals beating nonmetals, but the noble metals. Double sharp (talk) 10:41, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
The sources are about 50:50 between defining nonmetals as (i) elements either not having the properties of a metal or (ii) in terms of more specific properties as per following 20 examples from the literature:
- …a substance that conducts heat and electricity poorly, is brittle or waxy or gaseous, and cannot be hammered into sheets or drawn into wire. Nonmetals gain electrons easily to form anions.
- A nonmetal is an element whose atoms tend to gain (or share) electrons.
- A nonmetal is a chemical element that is mechanically weak in its most stable form, brittle if solid, and usually gains or shares electrons in chemical reactions.
- As a result of the free electron, graphite, though a nonmetal, is able to conduct electricity while diamond cannot.
- The distinctive chemical property of a nonmetal is the ability to gain electrons to form an anion when reacting with a metal. The nonmetals have large ionization energies and most have negative electron affinities.
- If the oxide of a nonmetal is placed in water, the mixture will be acid.
- The simplest way to tell a metal from a nonmetal is that most nonmetals do not conduct thermal energy or electricity.
- nonmetals are insulators, with a few rare exceptions.
- A nonmetal is an element that gains or shares electrons when it combines chemically. There is no set of physical properties that applies to all nonmetals, there is for the metals.
- A metal is a lustrous malleable element that is a good conductor of heat and electricity; a nonmetal is an element that is a poor conductor.
- A nonmetal is an element that tends to gain valence electrons in chemical reactions, becoming an anion in the process.
- Chemically, the property of an element that makes it a nonmetal is the element's ability to gain electrons.
- A nonmetal is an element that usually has a low density, a low melting point, and is a poor conductor of heat and electricity.
- A nonmetal is an element that is relatively easily reduced.
- A nonmetal is a kind of matter that does not have a metallic luster, is a poor conductor of heat and electricity, and when solid, is a brittle material that cannot be pounded or pulled into new shapes.
- A nonmetal is one of a number of elements, including gases, liquids and solids, which are grouped together because they do not conduct heat or electricity well, are not ductile and malleable, and do not reflect light well. Chemically, nonmetal atoms form negative ions.
- Bands in metals In terms of the band theory, the distinction between a metal and a non-metal is that in the former there are incompletely filled bands.
- the principal chemical property of a non-metal is its ability to form a negatively charged anion by accepting electrons from a metal.
- A non-metal is an element which ionizes by electron gain.
- A non-metal is an element that has four or more valence electrons.
The properties include poor conductivity; brittle and mechanically weak if solid; usually low density and mp; large ionization energy; gain or share electrons; usually negative EA; form negative ions; acidic oxides. --- Sandbh (talk) 02:54, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
I've updated the lede paragraph to refer to what nonmetals are, rather than what they are not. Sandbh (talk) 07:22, 30 April 2023 (UTC)
I found a hybrid nonmetal entry by Read J 1965, in JR Newman (ed.), The International Encyclopedia of Science, Thomas Nelson and Sons, London, p. 832:
- "NONMETALS stand apart from METALS in many ways, both physically and chemically, although these two classes of elements merge into one another. Physically, nonmetals do not exhibit luster or polish; they are poor conductors of heat and electricity; if solid, they are often brittle, they are not ductile, and they possess poor tensile strength. At ordinary temperatures some are solid, some liquid, and some gaseous: their melting points range from −272°C(−457.6°F), under 26 atm pressure, for helium, to above 3550°C (6422°F) for carbon. Their values for specific gravity are low, compared with those for metals. Chemically, their oxides usually react with water to form acids, and their chlorides are often decomposed by water."
It is a good effort but not without errors.
That "nonmetals do not exhibit luster or polish" is contradicted by graphitic C, black P, gray Se, and I. That they are, "if solid...often brittle" is not quite true since all solid nonmetals are brittle, unless he had white P in mind which can be cut with a knife however black P, which is brittle, is the most stable form. That they are "poor conductors of heat and electricity" is contradicted by graphitic C. While Read says that "some" are liquid, bromine is the only liquid nonmetal.
--- Sandbh (talk) 02:39, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
I restored the lede paragraph back to saying what nonmetals aren't since there is no agreement as to what they are. Sandbh (talk) 07:49, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
- Perhaps you could say "Nonmetal is a classification of elements. It commonly refers either to <foo> or <fab>"? If there is more than one common definition of nonmetal, mentioning all of them would be better than implying there is only one accepted definition. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:58, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
Simplifying the lede
I've adjusted the lede paragraph, and made associated edits later in the article, to make things easier to follow in terms of what is a nonmetal in the broadest sense of the term.
While there is no common rigorous definition of a nonmetal in terms of the precise properties involved, a broad definition based on relatively low density (a physical property) and relatively high electronegativity (chemical) encompasses:
- the 23 elements within the scope of the article; and therefore
- the other varying conceptions of nonmetals and the resulting sets of of nonmetallic elements
Mention of the relatively low density and relatively high EN of nonmetals is set out in Hein M & Arena S 2013, Foundations of College Chemistry, 14th ed., John Wiley & Sons, pp. 226, G-6.
Here are extracts from a dozen sources corroborating the low density of nonmetals (#2 also refers to high EN):
- A nonmetal is an element that usually has a low density
- Unlike metals, solid non-metals are dull, brittle and not malleable. They also tend to be less dense than metals, and have lower melting and boiling points (apart from carbon). With high electronegativity (see here) non-metal elements ...
- Nonmetals include gases , liquids , and solids . They are generally dull instead of shiny , and they do not conduct heat or electricity very well . They cannot be shaped into wires or thin sheets , and they tend to have a low density .
- Nonmetals have a low density .
- Nonmetals are characterized by lack of luster , lack of conductivity , brittleness , and low density .
- Nonmetals appear on the right side of the periodic table a . These elements usually have a low density
- Dull , reflecting light poorly or absorbing strongly Low density
- Have low density
- Nonmetals are usually lighter in weight than metals ,
- Non- metals are generally lighter in weight than metals
- Non - metals are usually lighter than metals
- Most nonmetals have no luster , are soft , are poor conductors , and have a low density.
And a dozen referring to high(er) electronegativity:
- With high electronegativity (see here) non-metal elements ..
- Table 11.5 shows that the relative electronegativity of the nonmetals is high and that of the metals is low.
- The Allred Rochow electronegativities of the nonmetals are larger than 1.8, those of the metals are smaller than 1.5
- Metals, in the lower left corner of the table, have low electronegativities and nonmetals, in the upper right
- These two trends result in nonmetals generally having higher electronegativities than metals
- The electronegativities of metals are small while those of nonmetals are large. These data are useful in the classification of metals from non-metals
- Elements with high electronegativity (such as nonmetals) have a greater ability to attract electrons
- Metals are the least electronegative elements (they are electropositive) and nonmetals the most electronegative.
- Some of the elements have high values of electronegativity and some have lower values. Those with low electronegativity values are called metals and those with high electronegativity values are categorized as nonmetals
- Nonmetals are much more electronegative than metal.
- The most electronegative elements are the nonmetals on the far right of the periodic table
- Nonmetals have high electronegativities.
--- Sandbh (talk) 07:04, 24 May 2023 (UTC)
List of miscellaneous items
So, taking a dive in this article, specifically this version:
- "largely make up the" I know this is shortest, but would "make up most of the" be a bit sounder grammatically? Done
- "namely boron; silicon and germanium; arsenic and antimony; and tellurium" might work better as a parenthetical. Done
- Footnote 6 I think "both metals" is better than "metals both" Done
- I know, hypocritical from me but the "Physical" section could benefit from less instances of "occurs" Done
- "as used in non-stick coatings for pans and other cookware." is unreferenced. Done
- "From right to left in periodic table terms, three or four kinds of nonmetals are more or less commonly discerned. These are: the relatively inert noble gases;" are also unreferenced. Done
- "Metalloids are here treated as nonmetals in light of their chemical behavior, and for comparative purposes." is unreferenced. Done
- "In 2014 it was reported that the Earth's core" sounds a bit like a WP:PROSELINE thing; can it be reworded to be less time-dependent? Done
- "Dingle explains the situation this way:" who is this Dingle? Done
- "Oxygen is found in the atmosphere; in the oceans as a component of water; and in the crust as oxide minerals." lacks a reference. Done
- I don't think that having a "daily cost" item is a good idea. I doubt that such prices are stable enough that they could be kept up-to-date with reasonable effort.
- I rechecked the costs as at April 2023 since I did this originally as at August 2022. In the ensuing eight months there was hardly any variation, in relative terms. I suspect that an annual check would suffice, an idea I got from you. Sandbh (talk) 08:20, 3 May 2023 (UTC)
- "Chemistry- or physics-based techniques used in the isolation efforts were spectroscopy, fractional distillation, radiation detection, electrolysis, ore acidification, displacement reactions, combustion, and heating; a few nonmetals occurred naturally as free elements." lacks a reference. Done
- "Physical properties apply to elements in their most stable forms under ambient conditions, and are listed in loose order of ease of determination. Chemical properties are listed from general to descriptive, and then to specific. The dashed line around the metalloids denotes that, depending on the author, the elements involved may or may not be recognized as a distinct class or subclass of elements. Metals are included as a reference point." lacks a reference. Done
- What is the source for the ionization energies in the comparison table? Done
- Footnotes 4, 12, 13, 26 need a source Not applicable
- Note 4 does not need a cite since it is only listing the grayed-out elements in the parent image; ditto note 12 sets out the first row elements in the parent image; note 13 as per note 4; note 26 is a meta-explanation of what is going on in the sentence.
- Footnote 14 lacks a reference for one sentence Not applicable
- That is an introductory and explanatory sentence; the cites are in the following three sentences/paras.
- Footnote 23 has the somewhat mysterious "combined with sulfur" Done
I can do a source spot-check if so desired. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:30, 2 May 2023 (UTC)
- Tx JJ for this impressive list. I count 17 items, nine of which are for missing references. More refs should be no problem. The remaining eight items should be OK to address.
- A source spot check was completed in one of the more recent FAC nominations by, as I recall, Complex rational.
- --- Sandbh (talk) 07:35, 3 May 2023 (UTC)
- All items have now been addressed. Sandbh (talk) 13:32, 3 May 2023 (UTC)
Merge or split?
It seems that it would be much better if either the history section is split and merged with Discovery of the nonmetals, or the opposite, merge the discovery article here. It is short enough to go both ways. ReyHahn (talk) 14:12, 26 July 2023 (UTC)
Astatine and Polonium
Isn't astatine a metalloid (sometimes considered) ? I've even seen polonium considered a metalloid. 2603:6000:8740:54B1:98C0:1879:4C99:365D (talk) 02:08, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
- Both have been classified as metalloids by some authors, though the consensus isn't as clear as for the main ones (B, Si, Ge, As, Sb, Te). See lists of metalloids for a more in-depth analysis. Complex/Rational 11:15, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
- Thanks. I've usually seen astatine regarded as a nonmetal or metalloid; occasionally as a metal. Polonium I've seen regarded as a metalloid, though usually a metal. 2600:1008:B18F:94F7:495F:FB73:818D:885A (talk) 17:53, 31 August 2023 (UTC)
Astatine has an unusual history in that when it was first syntheized it was considered to be a metal. Experimental evidence and recent theory suggests it may indeed be a metal. In-between it seems to have suffered from its association with the halogens. Ergo it must be a nonmetal, ignoring trends of increased metallicity going down the group. Non-relativitic calcuations pointed to it being a semiconductor and hence a metalloid candidate. Relativity points to it being a post-transition metal.
Polonium is soluble in acids, forming the rose-coloured Po2+ cation and displacing hydrogen: Po + 2 H+ → Po2+ + H2. It has no band gap and no semiconducting allotropes. Hence it's a metal. Sandbh (talk) 05:46, 19 September 2023 (UTC)
- Polonium is further down in the electrochemical series than hydrogen, and appears in about the same place as ruthenium. Hence, a caveat must be added: polonium often gets oxidised by media that electrochemically should not oxidise it, because of radiolytic decay products. Double sharp (talk) 15:37, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
Outstanding items from FAC7 nomination
@Graham Beards, YBG, and Double sharp: Please see below. @Michael D. Turnbull, Mirokado, and Jo-Jo Eumerus: fyi.
I understand that the following items had still to be checked off:
A small mention of metalloid outliers (Double sharp)
- "If you like, there may be room for an "Outliers" sub-sub-section at the end of the Metalloids section. This could address Po, Al, C, Bi, Be, Sn, Ga and Pb, all of which have been identified as metalloids in at least one source, per the Lists of metalloids article".
- @Double sharp: Done. I've added such a (condensed) section. --- Sandbh (talk) 06:35, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
- @Sandbh: Thanks, I like it. I feel it nicely illustrates the continuum between metals and nonmetals. Double sharp (talk) 08:56, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
- @Double sharp: Done. I've added such a (condensed) section. --- Sandbh (talk) 06:35, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
Complementary pairs (YBG)
Please see the new section about this, hereunder.
More tendency speak (Double sharp)
- "@Double sharp: I suspect there is agreement between the sources in the sense that they all draw on (prioritise?) a few or several properties from the same big set of all properties associated with nonmetals. There are of course differences in just which few or several properties each author chooses. Does the question then become which few properties can do a reasonable job of more or less encompassing the big set? --- Sandbh (talk) 04:05, 22 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- @Sandbh: I don't think we should be the ones making that decision. I think we should rather give the list, which is mostly agreed on (modulo what exactly people make of metalloids), and then mention tendencies that people have used as criteria. Double sharp (talk) 04:07, 22 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- @Double sharp: OK; if you feel there's a need for more tendency-speak in the article, that should be doable. --- Sandbh (talk) 04:26, 22 October 2023 (UTC)"
- @Sandbh: I don't think we should be the ones making that decision. I think we should rather give the list, which is mostly agreed on (modulo what exactly people make of metalloids), and then mention tendencies that people have used as criteria. Double sharp (talk) 04:07, 22 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
An extraction periodic table (YBG)
- "This would be a fun place to insert another PT extract, with five colors (for the five sources) and two shadings (solid for exclusively, striped for mainly)"
- @YBG: Done: Thanks; I've now added such an extract. --- Sandbh (talk) 04:03, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
Double up (Graeme Beards)
- "It some instances it's getting worse. See this in the Lead for example: "There is no universally agreed definition of the term... there is no universally accepted definition of a nonmetal". How many times do the readers need to be told?"
- Done. This has been fixed. Sandbh (talk) 07:11, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
--- Sandbh (talk) 23:37, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
- @Double sharp, @Graham Beards: I believe everything in this section has been resolved, but I hesitate to collapse it as it contains issues you folks raised, not me. I do expect we would benefit from another read through to reduce or eliminate tendency speak, but that, imho is a project for another day and another section. YBG (talk) 05:50, 29 November 2023 (UTC)
- @Double sharp/Sandbh/Graham Beards There’s been nothing new said in over a month; I’ll wait another week and mark this section resolved. YBG (talk) 03:41, 7 January 2024 (UTC)
Complementary pairs (follow-on from previous section)
resolved
YBG (talk) 05:40, 29 November 2023 (UTC) Continued in Pairs again. YBG (talk) 01:06, 17 December 2023 (UTC) |
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My biggest concern [about the Nonmetal article] is related to the pairing of nonmetal classes with a “complementing” set of metals.
The pairings of nonmetal categories with metal categories appears to be this same sort of synthesis, and so I say, no matter how beautiful and symmetrical this is, it does not belong in a WP article. I would be very interested to know what other reviewers think of this concern. YBG (talk) 06:22, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
I agree with your concern. Not only is each comparison cited to a different source, but the last one (unclassified to transition) is straightforwardly SYNTH (see ref. 158; neither source quoted actually spells out the connexion). Double sharp (talk) 14:11, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
Thanks YBG. I'll start by removing the image pairs. --- Sandbh (talk) 06:04, 23 October 2023 (UTC) @YBG: Could you kindly clarify what you meant by "the system as a whole ...[being] too novel to be prominently displayed"? At no time has the article displayed the system as a whole. Instead the parallels have been mentioned on a type by type basis. While this is an article about nonmetals, many nonmetallic elements are said to have some metallic aspects; and many metallic elements have some nonmetallic aspects. Hence the comparison with metals is relevant and fruitful. I've removed all the paired images except for the alkali metal-halogen image since this is Chemistry 101. Please note that the text for each of the four types of nonmetals includes a reference to geographic analogies, which I've listed hereunder for convenience:
Could you please advise me if you have any concerns about any of these paragraphs? --- Sandbh (talk) 07:09, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
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Pairs again
@YBG: Earlier, you wrote:
@Double sharp: Earlier you wrote:
My understanding is that it does not matter that the sources "are different for each one." The whole article is an encyclopedic compilation drawing on multiple sources. No single source captures all of the information set out in the article. That said, the status of the image pairs is now that there are only two such pairs left: noble gas/noble metal; and halogen/alkali metal. For the noble gases/noble metals image and paragraph I've added three further cites, and copy-edited the topic sentence for the paragraph. For halogen/alkali metal, I earlier noted in this thread that I retained "the alkali metal-halogen image since this is Chemistry 101." For the unclassified/transition metals paragraph I've further copy edited this and it now relies on a single source, rather than two separate sources. Could your please review my responses to your concerns? All going well, I'm aiming to relist nonmetal on Monday Nov 6, my time. thanks, --- Sandbh (talk) 06:38, 26 October 2023 (UTC)
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More thoughts
The sub-sub sections below mostly relate to the paired comparisons. I’ve added some stuff to the first paragraphs of the group 17 and 18 sections. Feel free to copy edit and add refs. (Thanks for the wiki link, @ Sandbh!)
Another detail … looking at the section headings above, I see several that include “FAC”. If someone has the time, it would ge good to append a number (FAC7 or FAC6 or whatever) before the sections get archived. |
- @YBG: Thanks for listing items of concern in an organised manner; @Double sharp: thanks for chiming in. --- Sandbh (talk) 05:34, 28 October 2023 (UTC)
NG/NM comparisons
YBG (talk) 06:24, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
In my opinion, incidentally, the mention of Xe intermetallics is misplaced here. It is not really about the noble gases, but rather it is about how metallicity, or lack thereof, inherently depends on pressure. So it should rather be part of a general discussion of what happens at high pressure, like we have that deep down. Yes, all elements eventually become metals, but there is sometimes weirdness along the way (Na first de-metallises before re-metallising). Double sharp (talk) 16:09, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
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Group 17/1 comparisons
YBG (talk) 06:24, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
@YBG and Double sharp: Thanks. I've previously addressed the 1st para. issue, and mentioned the removal of all the image pairs. Regarding −1 alkalide anions, the context is:
--- Sandbh (talk) 05:43, 29 October 2023 (UTC)
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Quote boxes
YBG (talk) 06:24, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
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Metalloid outliers
YBG (talk) 06:24, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
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Unclassified nonmetals
Just wondering … would it be good to change Unclassified nonmetals to Thoughts? YBG (talk) 15:44, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
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More re complementary pairs
Metalloid / PTM comparison
The penultimate paragraph with block quote amounts to saying “The metalloids and PTM are in the middle of the periodic table, one is weakly metallic, the other weakly nonmetallic”. This is not really a fact about the M-oids and PTM, but rather a fact about the general strongly-metallic-to-strongly-nonmetallic PT trend. The text admits that the comparison is only occasionally made. Unlike the group 17 and 18 comparisons, I don't think this paragraph has anything substantial enough here to be included in the 1st paragraph of the section as I added in the now reverted edits. Best to simply delete this paragraph. YBG (talk) 15:39, 30 October 2023 (UTC)
Done. --- Sandbh (talk) 12:48, 15 November 2023 (UTC) |
Unclassified NM / TM comparison
The penultimate “In terms of PT geography...” paragraph essentially says both classes are between more reactive elements and less reactive elements. This is not really a fact about the UNM and TM, but rather a fact about the general strongly-metallic-to-strongly-nonmetallic PT trend. Unlike the group 17 and 18 comparisons, I don't think this paragraph has anything substantial enough here to be included in the 1st paragraph of the section as I added in the now reverted edits. Best to simply delete this paragraph. YBG (talk) 15:39, 30 October 2023 (UTC)
Done. --- Sandbh (talk) 12:48, 15 November 2023 (UTC) |
Comparisons in general
If you are willing to delete all four comparison paragraphs, I would entertain the addition at the end of the introduction to Types, a general statement describing NM L-R trend, mentioning that it mostly mirrors the L-R trend in metals. If this seems a good idea, let me know and once all four comparison paragraphs are removed, I'll add it from my offline draft. YBG (talk) 15:39, 30 October 2023 (UTC)
Sandbh’s analysis of YBG’s alternative
Discussion of YBG’s alternative@Sandbh: Your longish post seems to me to have three main objections, which I would like to discuss individually. I would appreciate your effort to keep your responses brief. YBG (talk) 21:41, 17 November 2023 (UTC) (1) You object to
(2) You object to
(3) You object to how my paragraph fits into the section flow. I need to think about this more. Let’s wait until after we discuss the other two issues. YBG (talk) 21:41, 17 November 2023 (UTC)
@YBG: It’s not clear to me why there is so much ado over a single paragraph that takes up ca. 1% of the article’s size. I’m currently time-challenged and hope to be able to add some further comments later on. Sandbh (talk) 21:59, 23 November 2023 (UTC) The citation is to Parish's book, The Metallic Elements. He surveys the s-block metals; the f-block metals (a chapter each on Ln and An); the d-block metals (a chapter each on the 3d metals, and the 4d-5d metals (including the noble metals); and the p-block metals. The relevant paragraph in the nonmetal article is accompanied by a table showing EN ranges for the elements. The pattern of electronegativity is plain to see. For the types of nonmetals, there is a progression from less electronegative to more electronegative. A similar progression occurs among the metals. Metallicity is broadly related to EN and to reactivity. So, the s- and f-block metals are the most EN/metallic, the ordinary TM are next, then follow the p-block metals, and the noble metals. Among the metals a similar pattern is seen in the melting point v EN chart in the post-transition metals article. Sandbh (talk) 23:54, 23 November 2023 (UTC)
I may as well gently add, once again, it is well known that both metals and nonmetals range from highly to less reactive (even noble). The paragraph under discussion says just that. Sandbh (talk) 01:25, 24 November 2023 (UTC) |
Restating YBG’s questions
Restating and expanding my questions above in hopes of getting direct answers to each, especially from @Double sharp. YBG (talk) 18:57, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
YBG Q 1(1) Is it helpful to mention the broad PT trend (L/metal-to-R/nonmetal) when discussing the 4-fold divisions of metals and of nonmetals (and their comparisons) ? YBG (talk) 18:57, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
YBG Q 2(2) How does § Parish (1977, p. 37, 112, 115, 145, 163, 182) present these metal-category-to-nonmetal-category comparisons? Do they reference one another (eg, ‘we see that these p-block metals correspond to metalloids in the same way that noble metals correspond to noble gasses’)? Or are they isolated comparisons without reference to one another? YBG (talk) 18:57, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
YBG Q 3(3) Other than @Sandbh’s own work, how much RS support exists for this 4-fold division of metals? YBG (talk) 18:57, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
Further discussion re refining edits
Sources gathered from elsewhere on this TPAdditional source #1 moved from here in § YBG Q 4 to here in § YBG Q 3 by YBG (talk) 07:06, 20 December 2023 (UTC)
Additional source #2 moved from here in § YBG Q 4 to here in § YBG Q 3 by YBG (talk) 07:06, 20 December 2023 (UTC)
Additional source #3 moved from here in § YBG Q 4 to here in § YBG Q 3 by YBG (talk) 07:06, 20 December 2023 (UTC)
YBG Q 4(4) Would this article about nonmetals be better without a reference to this 4-fold division of metals? YBG (talk) 18:57, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
More re YBG Qs(5) (Editors are invited to replace this placeholder text with additional questions.) Thank you! YBG (talk) 18:57, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
I think this long but fruitful discussion has now reached its natural end; I can’t think of any significant changes needed to this section now. YBG (talk)< — Preceding undated comment added 03:34, 7 January 2024 (UTC) YBG (talk) 03:25, 12 January 2024 (UTC) |
Lead section & paragraph length
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Whither now (post FAC7)
@Sandbh: Thank you for taking the initiative to resolve the outstanding issues in FAC-7. I wonder if it might be wise to see how many of the reviewers would be willing to become co-nominators? I would be willing to do this under certain circumstances, and I think others might also. Convincing previous reviewers to become co-nominators will improve (but delay) the FAC-8 nomination. For me to be willing to do this, I would need to engage with the FA criteria in a way I have not yet done. For each criterion, I would wish to state the extent to which I reviewed it and list any outstanding issues that need to be addressed before I'm willing to become a co-nominator. Potential problems with this:
Is there any interest in pursuing such a process? Is anyone else willing to consider becoming a co-nominator? YBG (talk) 09:34, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
@YBG: The plan is to not renominate until all the discusssion on this page has been concluded. --- Sandbh (talk) 02:11, 31 October 2023 (UTC)
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Further comments (because at the FAC7 I stopped at Physical properties)
Double sharp (talk) 07:35, 30 October 2023 (UTC)
--- Sandbh (talk) 01:11, 16 November 2023 (UTC)
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Halogen pic
How would something like this work for the picture at Nonmetal § Halogen nonmetals?
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Sources pic
I’m experimenting here with a table to replace the one at § Abundance, extraction, and uses
References Differences from the status quo:
YBG (talk) 15:00, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
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Abundance, sources, uses
@Sandbh, @Double sharp: What do you think of putting each graphic in its proper section? Check out special:permalink/1183897347 § Abundance, sources, and uses in both desktop and mobile views. YBG (talk) 04:40, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
It looks good. --- Sandbh (talk) 12:12, 18 November 2023 (UTC) |
First row anomaly pic
The pic at § First row anomaly has a lot of detail not related to the first row anomaly. This makes the picture cluttered and confusing. I've included here an outline of what could be an alternative. YBG (talk) 13:02, 8 November 2023 (UTC) @YBG: Please proceed, with the exception that the first rows of the d and f blocks do not need to be shaded. --- Sandbh (talk) 12:45, 15 November 2023 (UTC)
@YBG: They do. The degree to which the anomalies standout is s >> p > d >f. It doesn't really matter if the d- and f- anomalies are included. Perhaps something like attached image. --- Sandbh (talk) 11:31, 18 November 2023 (UTC)
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Property comparisons
Why is § Comparison of selected properties in the § History, background, and taxonomy section? These tables that compare the chemical and physical properties of metals and the 3+1 types of nonmetals would seem to be more appropriate either in the Chemical and Physical subsections of § General properties or else at the end of § Types. Thoughts? YBG (talk) 04:58, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
- @YBG: It's at the end of the artice as feedback from a previous FAC or review was that the table represent too much "clutter" midway through the article, or words to that effect. --- Sandbh (talk) 04:50, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
- That makes sense. My concern is that including them there makes that section seem like a coat rack of marginally related topics. But I don’t have a good alternative right now. YBG (talk) 05:08, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
- Yes. In another sense, the article tends to flow from basic definitions and properties to more specific information about types, abundance, and historical background, in just five sections. This approach may help the reader see how current understanding and typology are rooted in historical developments and empirical comparisons. --- Sandbh (talk) 04:05, 20 December 2023 (UTC)
- That makes sense. My concern is that including them there makes that section seem like a coat rack of marginally related topics. But I don’t have a good alternative right now. YBG (talk) 05:08, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
More re types
@Sandbh: I’ve trimmed the descriptions in the list that also serves as a legend. In particular I’ve tried to eliminate the clumsy X-to-Y descriptions. I restored “chemically strong”, it is much crisper than “highly to moderately reactive” and seems supported in the literature. I eliminated “high to low reactivity” which seems to the casual reader (eg FAC evaluators) to be tantamount to meaningless. YBG (talk) 06:07, 31 December 2023 (UTC)
- @YBG: I removed the nos. of each type as: after the intro referring to 4 types, there were too many numbers; it isn't necessary to keep track; and the accompanying image does that job. I’ve reinstated mention of the H to M reactive nature of the halogens for 2 main reasons: source-text integrity (regardless how clumsy, not all the halogens are vanilla); and the fact that, as it happens, “chemically strong” is not well-defined in the literature. I reinstated mention of metalloids as "not particularly reactive" as this provides more wriggle room than "relatively unreactive" (As can be a little like Al). This paragraph touches on the heart of the article so I’m particularly invested in it. Sandbh (talk) 11:00, 31 December 2023 (UTC)
- @Sandbh: a couple of questions.
- If having the same absolute level of reactivity isn’t what characterizes the halogens, what does? Can we say they are corrosive? Highly (or relatively) electronegative? Relatively reactive? Very reactive? There must be something they have in common.
- Can we say that the metalloids are “generally unreactive”?
- YBG (talk) 12:02, 31 December 2023 (UTC)
- Lifting some descriptions from the subsections, I come up with this:
- relatively inert noble gases
- notably reactive halogen nonmetals —OR— corrosive halogen nonmetals
- less reactive unclassified nonmetals
- generally unreactive metalloids
- Thiughts? YBG (talk) 12:19, 31 December 2023 (UTC)
- Ok, I’ve implemented these nicely parallel 2-word reactivity descriptions. I’m uncertain whether G17 should be “notably reactive” or “corrosive”; I can live with either. The leftovers are “less reactive” compared to G17, on a period-by-period basis; perhaps that needs a clarifying note but I don’t think so. “Generally unreactive” I think captures the subtleties of the metalloids. YBG (talk) 13:18, 31 December 2023 (UTC)
- @YBG: Thanks. *Collectively*, the halogen NM represent the epitome of reactivity. The difficulty is I. It's reactive, sure, but only e.g. a weak oxidising agent, outclassed by O. Among the unclassified NM, O is highly reactive. In c. 2007 the US was losing more than $10 billion each year to corrosion, much due to rusting of iron and steel. The oxidizing agent causing all this is usually O. It further produces molecules of peroxide (O22–) and superoxide (O2–), after it reacts during respiration to produce water. These highly reactive forms of O would damage the delicate biological structures within a cell. Consequently, most organisms that breathe air have evolved enzymes to deal with these dangers. "Generally unreactive" works OK for the metalloids. "Notably reactive" works OK for the halogen NM. However, for the UN one would have to say, "notably to less reactive" i.e. that overlap thing is evident again. --- Sandbh (talk) 06:54, 1 January 2024 (UTC)
- What about “variably reactive”? YBG (talk) 05:17, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Sandbh?? YBG (talk) 05:18, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
- @YBG: Thank you. “Variably" reactive sounds like each of the UN are individually variably reactive, which is not so. How about "mixed reactivity”? Then we would have:
- relatively inert noble gases
- notably reactive halogen nonmetals
- mixed reactivity unclassified nonmetals
- generally unreactive metalloids
- I like it so much I’ll go ahead and do the edit.
- — Sandbh (talk) 10:03, 3 January 2024 (UTC)
- Great. I think we’ve resolved all the major issues in this section. YBG (talk) 03:31, 7 January 2024 (UTC)
- @YBG: Thank you. “Variably" reactive sounds like each of the UN are individually variably reactive, which is not so. How about "mixed reactivity”? Then we would have:
- @YBG: Thanks. *Collectively*, the halogen NM represent the epitome of reactivity. The difficulty is I. It's reactive, sure, but only e.g. a weak oxidising agent, outclassed by O. Among the unclassified NM, O is highly reactive. In c. 2007 the US was losing more than $10 billion each year to corrosion, much due to rusting of iron and steel. The oxidizing agent causing all this is usually O. It further produces molecules of peroxide (O22–) and superoxide (O2–), after it reacts during respiration to produce water. These highly reactive forms of O would damage the delicate biological structures within a cell. Consequently, most organisms that breathe air have evolved enzymes to deal with these dangers. "Generally unreactive" works OK for the metalloids. "Notably reactive" works OK for the halogen NM. However, for the UN one would have to say, "notably to less reactive" i.e. that overlap thing is evident again. --- Sandbh (talk) 06:54, 1 January 2024 (UTC)
Single distinguishing properties table
resolved YBG (talk) 03:29, 7 January 2024 (UTC)
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As the table cells are advertised as being ordered by date, why not put the year at the beginning of each line, with a different hanging indent so that the year can function as a bullet without needing a bullet icon. YBG (talk) 02:29, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
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Peer review or FAC
@YBG: I feel this article is now good to go to PR or FAC. Do you concur? --- Sandbh (talk) 07:36, 4 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Sandbh: Perhaps. Let me take a global look first to see if anything jumps out. YBG (talk) 15:09, 4 January 2024 (UTC)
Types
@Double sharp: after a very long discussion between @Sandbh and me, I think we’ve come about as far as we can. Would you please read the last paragraph of § Types, the one just before § Noble gases dealing with metal reactivity. Is it acceptable in its current form? If not, what changes do you think are necessary? Is the article better with this paragraph or without it? Thanks! YBG (talk) 03:25, 7 January 2024 (UTC)
- Personally, I still do not see the point of having this paragraph in the main text. Nonetheless, it is fairly short, and I would be fine with it as a note. Since it is this short, I would also accept leaving it as it stands, although this is not something I would consider ideal. Double sharp (talk) 04:28, 7 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Double sharp and YBG: Thanks. I'll look more closely about moving the paragraph into a footnote. Sandbh (talk) 00:49, 8 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Double sharp and YBG: I've moved the paragraph into a footnote, at the end of the four bullet points setting out the four types of nonmetals. Sandbh (talk) 05:33, 8 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Sandbh, thank you for accommodating this. I think it works as a footnote, but I wonder about the placement and its relevance as it’s current position makes it look as though it is just related to the metalloids.
- Currently the lead-in to the four bullets says:
... four types of nonmetallic elements can be discerned:
- I’m wondering if it would be better like this:
- ... four types of nonmetallic elements of varying degrees of reactivity[n 24] can be discerned:
- @Double sharp, before Sandbh
itor I make any changes, I’d appreciate knowing, Do you agree with my concern about placement of the note? - Also, @Sandbh and @Double sharp, what is your preference order for these seven options (and why?):
- The separate paragraph as it was before Sandbh converted it to a footnote. -- see special:permalink/1194284385#Types
- The footnote as Sandbh placed it at the end of the metalloid bullet. -- see special:permalink/1194284904#Types
- The same footnote placed in the lead-in to the bullets, with the added text 'of varying degrees of reactivity' as I showef above.
- The same footnote in the lead-in but without the added text.
- Not including the information, neither as a paragraph nor as a note.
- Remove the reactivity descriptions from the bullet list of nonmetal types and add this sentence separate from the bullets: The halogen nonmetals are notably reactive, the unclassified nonmetals vary widely in reactivity, the metalloids are generally unreactive,note and the noble gases are generally inert.note This could be added to the fuzziness paragraph, either as its first or last sentence, or as a one-sentence paragraph between the bullets and the fuzziness.
- In a separate paragraph just before § Noble gasses, as special:permalink/1195032848#Types.
- Some other idea (what?).
- I can see advantages and disadvantages to the idea I’ve shown above, so I certainly don’t want to propose it until I’ve heard what others think. Thanks in advance for your input. YBG (talk) 06:33, 8 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Sandbh and @Double sharp, I’ve added another option to my list. I’m still interested to know your preference order of these options, and whether you share my concern about the placement of the note. YBG (talk) 14:48, 8 January 2024 (UTC)
- @YBG: I feel the way the paragraph reads now works well (#2). I like the reactivity descriptors. They give the reader mental markers. --- Sandbh (talk) 11:33, 9 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Sandbh How do you prioritize the other options? YBG (talk) 19:24, 9 January 2024 (UTC)
- @YBG: I've changed the footnote back to main body text, and added it the end of the section. I feel that the new intro to the resulting para. i.e., "For context", works very nicely. Of the other options my priority list would be 1 (as modified); and then 2 (as modified). None of the other options work for me: 3. because there's more to the types than reactivity; 4. because talking about metals in the lead-in is out of place; 5. because it's inconsistent (the article mentions other comparisons with metals) and non-encyclopedia; 6. because it removes the mental hooks for the reader. So, I guess what I've now done matches 7. --- Sandbh (talk) 00:39, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Sandbh - I was hoping you'd wait for @Double sharp to weigh in before making changes. DS, I'd really appreciate knowing how you'd prioritize the options, including the newly added #7? YBG (talk) 03:45, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
- @YBG: Personally, I favour a hybrid of what Sandbh has done and #2. I think the wording is fine and good, but my first preference is still for that paragraph to be a footnote, as it is an addition for context that is not directly related to the article's subject. My second preference is to leave things as they currently stand. Double sharp (talk) 03:53, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Double sharp: If it is a footnote, what are your preferences for where to place it? YBG (talk) 03:56, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
- @YBG: In the same place it would have been as a paragraph, i.e. as a note attached to the previous paragraph. Double sharp (talk) 03:58, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Double sharp. OK, you like the present wording, and you prefer footnote > body text. How do you rank omitting it entirely? (a) footnote > body > omit, (b) footnote > omit > body, or (c) omit > footnote > body? YBG (talk) 16:44, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
- @YBG and Double sharp: I like Double sharp's solution. YBG: I'm not sure what the basis for the "omit" option is. The article compares nonmetals and nonmetals at four points in the Physical properties section; the same in the Chemical properties section; and comparisons are again made in the Suggested distinguishing criteria section, and the Comparison of selected properties. An article whose name derives from the "metal" word, would presumably include coverage of the contrasts, overlaps, and similarities. --- Sandbh (talk) 07:02, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Sandbh, at one time @Double sharp expressed the opinion that the article would be better without what was then a paragraph. I am inquiring to determine to what extent he still might hold that opinion and how that stacks up against the other two options. As to word derivation, I asked your opinion about this fascinating philosophical issue on my talk page. YBG (talk) 18:03, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Double sharp. OK, you like the present wording, and you prefer footnote > body text. How do you rank omitting it entirely? (a) footnote > body > omit, (b) footnote > omit > body, or (c) omit > footnote > body? YBG (talk) 16:44, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
- @YBG: In the same place it would have been as a paragraph, i.e. as a note attached to the previous paragraph. Double sharp (talk) 03:58, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Double sharp: If it is a footnote, what are your preferences for where to place it? YBG (talk) 03:56, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
- @YBG: Personally, I favour a hybrid of what Sandbh has done and #2. I think the wording is fine and good, but my first preference is still for that paragraph to be a footnote, as it is an addition for context that is not directly related to the article's subject. My second preference is to leave things as they currently stand. Double sharp (talk) 03:53, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Sandbh - I was hoping you'd wait for @Double sharp to weigh in before making changes. DS, I'd really appreciate knowing how you'd prioritize the options, including the newly added #7? YBG (talk) 03:45, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
- @YBG: I've changed the footnote back to main body text, and added it the end of the section. I feel that the new intro to the resulting para. i.e., "For context", works very nicely. Of the other options my priority list would be 1 (as modified); and then 2 (as modified). None of the other options work for me: 3. because there's more to the types than reactivity; 4. because talking about metals in the lead-in is out of place; 5. because it's inconsistent (the article mentions other comparisons with metals) and non-encyclopedia; 6. because it removes the mental hooks for the reader. So, I guess what I've now done matches 7. --- Sandbh (talk) 00:39, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Sandbh How do you prioritize the other options? YBG (talk) 19:24, 9 January 2024 (UTC)
- @YBG: I feel the way the paragraph reads now works well (#2). I like the reactivity descriptors. They give the reader mental markers. --- Sandbh (talk) 11:33, 9 January 2024 (UTC)
Lead-in to types bullets
@YBG: I've changed the mention of number of types to read "three or four types of nonmetallic elements can be most commonly discerned". This is more consistent with the opening paragraph of the section. It also clarifies why "three to four" in that these are the most common approaches. I've used "discerned" rather "seen", as "seen" often refers to the act of visual perception, whereas "discerned" implies a deeper process of understanding, interpreting, or making out something that might not be immediately obvious. I feel this is especially appropriate given the subject matter, including the "are they?/aren't they" nature of the metalloids. --- Sandbh (talk) 00:23, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Sandbh What do you think of how it is now? YBG (talk) 18:20, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
- I thought this: "In the periodic table, above and to the right of the metals, four types of elements are commonly recognized, from right to left:" was clumsy with its reference to nonmetals being "above" the metals, and the two mentions of "to the right" and "right to left". I've ce'd it to read, "In the periodic table, to the right of the metals, four types of nonmetallic elements can be recognized (proceeding from most to least nonmetallic):" I hope that works. --- Sandbh (talk) 01:00, 14 January 2024 (UTC)
- Yea, I think you're right about the clumsiness of my wording. Yours is definitely better.
- I am surprised you restored "nonmetallic"; I thought it was the reason for saying "3 or 4" instead of "4". YBG (talk) 01:24, 14 January 2024 (UTC)
- I thought this: "In the periodic table, above and to the right of the metals, four types of elements are commonly recognized, from right to left:" was clumsy with its reference to nonmetals being "above" the metals, and the two mentions of "to the right" and "right to left". I've ce'd it to read, "In the periodic table, to the right of the metals, four types of nonmetallic elements can be recognized (proceeding from most to least nonmetallic):" I hope that works. --- Sandbh (talk) 01:00, 14 January 2024 (UTC)
A thought on the history
It occurs to me that there must be a missing link between Dupasquier and Dumas on the one hand, and the modern idea on the other, because they consider B and Si to be nonmetals but are not agreed on the more metalloidal elements. Dumas includes As but not Se, and Dupasquier includes Se but not As; neither include Ge, Sb, or Te. The 1911 Britannica article on chemistry thinks that B, Si, Se, and Te are nonmetals, but not Ge, As, and Sb. I assume this changed when people started using "metalloid" for an intermediate set instead, but in that case the inclusion of such elements as primarily nonmetals gets somewhat iffy, since mostly people talk about them as intermediate between metals and nonmetals. Back when there were only two categories and no intermediate ones, it does not seem as though Ge, As, and Sb were considered nonmetals that often. Double sharp (talk) 04:27, 7 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Double sharp: Thanks. I've added a paragraph about the metalloids.
- Early on the article says, "Nonmetallic chemical elements generally have low density and high electronegativity" and "The six most commonly recognized metalloids have relatively low densities and predominantly nonmetallic chemistry and are typically seen as intermediate between metals and nonmetals;[10] they are included in this article for comparison: B, Si, Ge, As, Sb, Te." The comparison of properties section adds, "The dashed lines around the columns for metalloids signify that the treatment of these elements as a distinct type can vary depending on the author, or classification scheme in use." --- Sandbh (talk) 05:16, 8 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Sandbh: Regarding the paragraph: what elements do Newth and Friend consider to be metalloids?
- P.S. The discoverers of tellurium certainly thought it was a metal. So did Berzelius, per what Weeks quotes of him in doi:10.1021/ed009p474. So they presumably cannot have thought that it had a "predominantly nonmetallic chemistry": that view must have come later. Speaking a lot earlier, Agricola considered Sb to be as metallic as Pb in De natura fossilium (quoted in Metal#The Renaissance), which makes sense when one considers that Pliny confused the two. J. R. Glauber likewise thought Sb was a metal on a par with Co, Zn, and Bi: Weeks' Discovery of the Elements (p. 144) quotes him as writing
And if we nevertheless maintain that each planet gives birth to its own metal, to which star should one assign bismuth, cobalt, antimony, and zinc?
On the other hand, on p. 261 of the same book we find a quote of Scheele calling Mo a "half-metal". Double sharp (talk) 06:02, 8 January 2024 (UTC)- @Double sharp: Newth says the following elements encompass metalloid and nonmetals: As, B, Br, C, Cl, F, H, I, N, O, P, Se, Si, S, Te.
- Friend says:
- "The difficulty of drawing a dividing line between metals and non-metals is clearly shown by the existence of an alternative method of classifying the elements, which divides them into three groups, namely, non-metals, metalloids, and metals. A metalloid is an element which, although it resembles a metal in most characteristics, yet lacks some one or more of the features which typical metals generally present. Usually, the metalloids possess the form or appearance of metals, but are more closely allied to the non-metals in their chemical behaviour. The following elements are included in the metalloids: H, Te, Ge, Sn, Ti, Zr, As, Sb, Bi, V, Cb, Ta, Mo, W, and U."
- Berzelius, in 1818, also thought Se was a metal due to its lustre. He subdivided the metals into two classes, those that are capable of forming acids, and those that act as bases: "I place selenium among the acidifiable metals near arsenic." (Trofast J 2011, Berzelius' discovery of selenium, Chemistry International, 33(5), p.16) I guess Dumas (1828) was still going by Berzelius's classification, and that by 1844, Dupasquier (among others) had worked it out.
- Agricola (1546) may have considered Sb to a metal on the grounds that "when smelted, a certain portion be added to tin, a bookseller's alloy is produced from which the type is made that is used by those who print books on paper."
- I don't know on what basis Pliny confused Sb and Pb. I believe he knew the first was brittle and the second malleable.
- In 1658, when Glauber wrote that passage in Opera Chymica (1658), Co, Zn, Sb, and Bi were all considered to be semi-metals, due to being brittle. The ides of associating each of these imperfect "metals" to a planet was, alchemically speaking ... err ... daft.
- "Half-metals or semi-metals were substances which resembled the "old" metals in color and density but which had differences in formability. After Georg Brandt's dissertation on the half-metals in 1735 and his discovery of cobalt, six semi-metals were known: mercury, bismuth, zinc, antimony, cobalt and arsenic. When new metals like molybdenum were discovered and prepared, they were often not malleable owing to the presence of impurities and because of that were called semi-metals." Enghag P 2008, Encyclopedia of the Elements, John Wiley & Sons, p. 596.
- Sandbh (talk) 12:53, 8 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Sandbh: Thanks for the lists: I see Friend is on the Internet Archive. I see Newth does not include Ge and Sb, and it's interesting that Friend considers many of the group IVB through VIB metals as "metalloids" on the grounds of their chemical behaviour. As you know, I would agree with Friend on that (especially for highly electronegative W, which doesn't even manage to form ionic halides). On the other hand, this rather seems to mean that the general idea of "metalloid" among pre-WW2 authors is not the same as the one we have now, and that it was by no means agreed that Ge, As, Sb, and Te were nonmetals then, although people thought B and Si were. Which raises my questions: did most people think Ge, As, Sb, Te were nonmetals around 1900, when it was more common to have only two categories (metals vs nonmetals)? And since the post-WW2 era is when three categories becomes common, is it really justified to consider most of these as nonmetals by default, when most authors nowadays would say that metalloids are something different from both metals and nonmetals? Moreover, doesn't the idea about "relatively low densities and predominantly nonmetallic chemistry" raise questions about Ti, V, and Zr that are all less dense than Sb? (All three are mentioned by Friend as being "more closely allied to the nonmetals" chemically; considering that TiCl4 and VCl4 are covalent molecular liquids at room temperature like SiCl4, and that the Zr4+ aqua cation is so easily hydrolysed, he has a point!) On these grounds I think I'd be much happier if metalloids were given as a "sometimes" inclusion for comparison rather than as a default fourth category of nonmetals, more like the way elements like C, Al, and Se are treated in metalloid.
- Regarding Pliny and Dioscorides, see the passages here. On the one hand Pliny distinguishes "male" and "female" antimony (probably stibnite and metallic antimony respectively); on the other hand, when describing the processing of stibnite, he calls the metallic reduction product lead (faex plumbosissima). Double sharp (talk) 13:32, 8 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Double sharp: Thanks. I don’t know where the idea of "relatively low densities and predominantly nonmetallic chemistry" came from. The article refers to including metalloids for comparative purposes and due to their "relatively low densities, high electronegativity, and (nonmetallic) chemical behavior." Ti, V, and Zr have low EN. I’ve changed the text in the Types section so that it now refers to "three to four types", rather than "four". Is that OK? The article otherwise elsewhere mentions the sometimes nature of metalloids as nonmetals, at several points.
- I don't know enough about the situation c. 1900.
- Germanium has a record of being regarded as a poorly conducting metal, with its conductivity arising from impurities. AFAIK its status as a nonmetallic element was not sorted out until the 1930s(?) when the physics of semiconductors emerged. OTOH there is this:
- "Germanium, Ge, a new nonmetallic[sic] element…" (Winkler 1886)
- --- Winkler C (1886), Berichte der Deutschen Chemischen Gesellschaft, vol. 19, pp. 210–211
- Arsenic and antimony have a long history of causing difficulties for classification science. The oldest quote I have for As is:
- "Arsenic is in the main, however, an acid-forming element and plays the part of a non-metal in its compounds."
- --- Schrader FC, Stone RW & Sanford S 1917, Useful minerals of the United States, Bulletin 624, United States Geological Survey, Washington
- The oldest quote I have for Sb is:
- "Antimony…is of more metallic appearance than arsenic, but, although it has some of the properties of the metals (lustre, electrical and thermal conductivity), in its chemical behaviour it is closely connected with arsenic and phosphorus…Bismuth…has no[sic] non-metallic characters and may be considered as a metal, as it forms no gaseous hydrogen derivative and its oxide has basic characteristics." (Molinari 1920, pp. 426, 792)
- --- Molinari E 1920, Treatise on general and industrial inorganic chemistry, 2nd ed., J & A Churchill, London.
- Mendeleev, however, regarded both As and Sb to be metals.
- I suspect Te may have ended up with an "-ium" suffix due to it appearing to Müller (1783) to form a metallic alloy with gold, as AuTe2, bearing in mind the limited understanding of time as to the distinction between metals and nonmetals.
- Te was described by Mendeleev as forming a transition between metals and nonmetals.
- The Pliny link seems reasonably clear as to the distinction between Sb and Pb: "The lees are recognized by being full of lead and they settle to the bottom of the mortars and are thrown away...But above all, it is essential to limit the amount of heat applied to it, so that it may not be turned into lead."
- Stibnite can occur with galena (PbS) and that's what appears to be going on.
- --- Sandbh (talk) 12:15, 9 January 2024 (UTC)
- Let me rephrase my concern so that it's perhaps clearer. :) In metalloid, we have a clear break between elements that are considered metalloids nearly all the time, versus elements that are so considered only sometimes: the most often included among the "sometimes" elements is polonium at 49%. Well, you didn't consider it alongside the others, okay. But my question is: could you get even 49% of chemists to agree that metalloids are nonmetals? Note that I'm not asking "could you get them to agree that metalloids generally have nonmetallic chemical properties and all that". I'm asking "could you get them to agree that metalloids are a subcategory of nonmetals, and not a third category on the border zone that are neither metal nor nonmetal"? My impression of the literature is that you could not. Considering the precedent of metalloid, that suggests that metalloids should not be considered by the article as a normal inclusion into the nonmetals category, but as a sidelined "sometimes", something like how polonium or selenium is treated in Metalloid. So, I would much prefer the number of nonmetal categories to be three, with a caveat that metalloids are sometimes considered nonmetals as a whole, and that since people disagree about where exactly the metalloids end, even authors who think metalloids are an in-between class might annex some (but not all) of usual six into the nonmetals, e.g. Hawkes with metalloids = Ge-As-Se-Te and nonmetals including B and Si. And sure, it would probably be good to know when people stopped calling new metals "semi-metals". :) (At least, Lavoisier in 1789 was happy to list As and Sb among metals, but B as radical boracique is with the nonmetals, and Si is there as an earth alongside what would be Mg, Al, Ca, and Ba.)
- I agree that our current understanding of metallicity is better than the past one, but if we are going to give some history, we should at least state how it evolved with greater completeness. No doubt, the understanding of semiconducting behaviour played a large role in figuring out what was going on with Ge and maybe Te.
- Pliny seems to think that heating stibnite produces only Pb (and Dioscorides thought the same, according to the link I gave); Sb is not mentioned in this context. Note that in the process he describes, one is not actually trying to get the metal. Indeed, that's exactly what is not wanted:
But above all, it is essential to limit the amount of heat applied to it, so that it may not be turned into lead
. I think it's reasonable that he'd make a mistake identifying something he considered an unwanted waste product and hence did not really care about. Double sharp (talk) 09:25, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
@Double sharp: Thank you.
I don't know if 49% of chemists would agree metalloids are nonmetals. OTOH, I presume > 49% know that metalloids have a predominately nonmetallic chemistry. Per your suggestion, the article clarifies the "sometimes" nature of metalloids, in the following places:
Places in the nonmetal article re the odd nature of metalloids
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I count ten places in which the peculiar treatment of the metalloids is mentioned. The overall emphasis is on the seventeen elements generally recognised as nonmetals, with the six metalloids being mentioned as appropriate.
The metalloid article and nonmetal article work side-by-side. The first has a much narrower focus; the second has a broader focus due to the overlap of the predominately nonmetallic chemistry of the metalloids.
In response to your concerns I've add a paragraph to the Development of types section, explaining the status of B and Si, and what happened to Ge, As, Sn and Te.
How is the article now looking? --- Sandbh (talk) 05:52, 22 January 2024 (UTC)
Nonmetal(s) vs. Nonmetallic (chemical) element(s)
@Sandbh, do you use these terms synonymously?
- nonmetal(s)
- nonmetallic element(s)
- nonmetallic chemical element(s)
When I read this article, I cannot tell whether these are used synonymously or if they are intended to convey some slight distinction. YBG (talk) 05:42, 8 January 2024 (UTC)
- @YBG: I use "nonmetallic" in preference to "nonmetal", as the first has more wriggle room i.e. it better accomodates the metalloids. What Oderberg said about nonmetals relates i.e. if something is not a metal than it must be a nonmetal. But I don't want to go to too far down that rabbit hole. --- Sandbh (talk) 07:07, 8 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Sandbh: since you prefer nonmetallic, I wonder, where just plain nonmetal is used, does it mean the same thing? Or something slightly different? YBG (talk) 14:19, 8 January 2024 (UTC)
- My intention is to use "nonmetallic" when referring to anything including a metalloid, and "nonmetal" otherwise. I haven't however checked for my consistency of usage. --- Sandbh (talk) 11:36, 9 January 2024 (UTC)
- I think this is a good rule. Now that I know it, I will try to enforce it when it is needed. After we do a thorough review, it might be good to explicitly state this someplace in the article. YBG (talk) 19:18, 9 January 2024 (UTC)
regarding "Types, metalloids"
AFAIK, semiconducting Sb is only stable as a very thin film (doi:10.1039/D3NR03536K). If we're going to include this sort of thing, then we'd presumably have to also note that B can metallise under such conditions (see borophene). Graphene also counts, though C is placed under unclassified nonmetals. Double sharp (talk) 13:54, 9 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Double sharp: Thanks; I've added "Single-layer materials" to the Allotropes hatnote. The metallisation of some of these materials is accommodated in the way the topic sentence in the nonmetal article is composed i.e., "each with distinct physical properties that may vary between metallic and nonmetallic." --- Sandbh (talk) 00:00, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
- I agree with this addition, but I do think that the difference should be put in context in "Types, metalloids". The single-layer situation is quite different from the bulk situation: B and C can metallise, whereas Sn, Sb, and Bi either demetallise (fully or partially, considering topological insulators as partial demetallisation) or are theoretically expected to do so. To my mind, this is a rather similar situation to changes under pressure, in which for example Na can demetallise (and then remetallise at extremely high pressures) and Xe can metallise. I think that if you're going to put semiconducting Sb in the main text, then some kind of context is needed to make it clear that unlike semiconducting As, this is not a form that exists in quite usual conditions. At least, if something was only true of graphene and not graphite, I'd feel the need to spell it out specifically, as probably the 2D structure is then related to why it only works in that case.
- The way I'd deal with this myself would be to add to the "Allotropes" section a sentence reading "Additional allotropes may occur in more exotic conditions, such as in single-layer materials or under high pressure. The allotropes formed may have unexpected properties: for example, sodium transforms from a metal to a glass-like insulator at ~200 GPa (ref), and oxygen becomes a metallic conductor at 96 GPa (ref). Bulk boron is a semiconductor, but boron nanotubes have metallic properties (ref); contrariwise, single-layer bismuth is a topological insulator, with electrons only free to move along the surface and not the interior (ref). As these properties are quite distinct from bulk behaviour at standard conditions, the remainder of the article will not consider them." And then simply fix the sentence under "Types, metalloids" so that it only lists As and not Sb as having a stable semiconducting form (which is correct under this reasonable assumption). Double sharp (talk) 03:56, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
- P.S. regarding high-pressure electrides: more are expected to do it, but only for Li and Na has it actually been seen so far. Double sharp (talk) 09:29, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Double sharp: Thank you. The context in "Types, metalloids" is given by the following two sentences: "They [metalloids] are brittle and poor-to-good conductors of heat and electricity. Specifically, boron, silicon, germanium, and tellurium are semiconductors." In this context, it follows that, "Arsenic and antimony have the electronic structures of semimetals, although both have less stable semiconducting forms.[9]" The semiconducting properties of the metalloids are mentioned due to the strong association of the two concepts. The single layer situation is not relevant here although it is in the Allotropes section. I've nevertheless added a footnote about Sb forming a semiconducting allotrope only in thin film form.
- I've adjusted the allotropes section to refer to "less stable" allotropic forms. There is no need for further detail given the hatnote says, "For a more comprehensive list, see Allotropy § Non-metals, and Single-layer materials." --- Sandbh (talk) 06:44, 22 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Sandbh: By the logic that the "single layer situation is not relevant here", it seems to me that single-layer allotropes ought not to be included in the "Metalloids" section at all. It is exactly the same kind of thing as including metallic Xe at high pressure under the "noble gas" section: cool, but not really having anything to do with the usual classification. Similarly, it seems to me that allotropes of halogens are also misleading inclusions in the "Allotropes" section without a mention that they are exotic high-pressure phenomena, not something like O3. To my mind, some kind of context is needed to make it clear what happens at normal conditions and what does not – especially when it gets at the heart at what a nonmetal is. Will anyone call Na a nonmetal? No, but it starts insulating at high pressure. So it seems that a statement about standard conditions is absolutely needed.
- P.S. Sn also has an amorphous semiconducting form at low temperature.
- P.P.S. The facts that (1) "metalloid" and "semiconductor" are strongly associated concepts and (2) Sb has no bulk semiconducting allotrope suggests something about Sb, especially when that puts it in the same boat as Bi. ;) I wonder if confusion about its allotropes had something to do with antimony's inclusion, perhaps regarding the stability of the black allotrope in bulk, or the existence of the yellow "allotrope" (thought to be Sb4, but probably is not a real allotrope). Double sharp (talk) 08:33, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
How many types
@Sandbh, we had previously agreed on the wording, but you just now changed “four” to “three to four”. The list following the colon is a list of four items, no more and no less, and so imo the number in the paragraph should be four. One of my previous suggestions had been “four types of elements”, to which you inserted the word “nonmetallic”, but you can remove it if that makes the number four more acceptable. Just please don’t change it back to “3 to 4” without a discussion and agreement to change our previously agreed wording. Thank you! YBG (talk) 06:42, 22 January 2024 (UTC)
- @YBG: Thank you. It hadn't occured to me that the adjective "nonmetallic" could in fact accomodate "four types" at the same time as addressing Double sharp's request to refer to three types of nonmetals. I remember the discussion about why I use "nonmetallic". I don't recall having a discussion specificlaly about agreering on either "four" or "three to four" although I know the article has used either expression at varying times.
- @Double sharp: Since you expressed a preference for three types of nonmetals, does "four types of nonmetallic elements" works for you?
- BTW YBG are there any other remaining concerns you have about the article? Sandbh (talk) 23:19, 22 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Double sharp: Does either of these work: four types of nonmetallic elements or else four types of elements? YBG (talk) 04:04, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Sandbh: I do not agree with "four types of nonmetallic elements". That outright implies that metalloids are nonmetallic. They are so in some salient chemical properties, but (noting Friend) so are some early transition metals like Mo and W (whose oxides are glass formers, like those of metalloids), and no one would call molybdenum a "nonmetallic element" without a lot of context. And in various other properties, metalloids cluster better with metals. Their thermal conductivity tends to be within the range of metals, and their electronegativity and ionisation energy ranges completely overlap those of metals. And as you already agreed, you could not find a majority of chemists who consider metalloids to be outright nonmetals, so it stands to reason that they should not be emphasised to a greater extent than polonium in metalloid (where you equally well cannot find a majority considering it a metalloid). I would be a lot more comfortable with putting the metalloids as something apart, included for comparison as some of their properties are nonmetallic, but others are not. (Chemically weak metals with a tendency towards amphoterism or worse, like Pb or Mo, may equally well be mentioned briefly.) Double sharp (talk) 08:39, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Double sharp. Is a bare four types of elements acceptable? The bullet list itself says metalloids are
sometimes instead considered a third category distinct from metals and nonmetals
. If that is not strong enough, perhaps we should change “sometimes” to “often”? - Note: the question being addressed in this section is primarily the text of the lead-in to the bullet list. I am trying to avoid the clumsiness of saying “three or four” to introduce a list of four items. YBG (talk) 15:02, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Double sharp. Is a bare four types of elements acceptable? The bullet list itself says metalloids are
- @Sandbh: I do not agree with "four types of nonmetallic elements". That outright implies that metalloids are nonmetallic. They are so in some salient chemical properties, but (noting Friend) so are some early transition metals like Mo and W (whose oxides are glass formers, like those of metalloids), and no one would call molybdenum a "nonmetallic element" without a lot of context. And in various other properties, metalloids cluster better with metals. Their thermal conductivity tends to be within the range of metals, and their electronegativity and ionisation energy ranges completely overlap those of metals. And as you already agreed, you could not find a majority of chemists who consider metalloids to be outright nonmetals, so it stands to reason that they should not be emphasised to a greater extent than polonium in metalloid (where you equally well cannot find a majority considering it a metalloid). I would be a lot more comfortable with putting the metalloids as something apart, included for comparison as some of their properties are nonmetallic, but others are not. (Chemically weak metals with a tendency towards amphoterism or worse, like Pb or Mo, may equally well be mentioned briefly.) Double sharp (talk) 08:39, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Double sharp: Does either of these work: four types of nonmetallic elements or else four types of elements? YBG (talk) 04:04, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
Scope
List article ledes often include a clear statement of the scope of the list, that is, the inclusion criteria. This is not a list article, but it seems it might benefit from a clear scope statement early in the article. This should at minimum include the exclusion of astatine because its bulk properties are not well attested and inclusion of the metalloids for comparative purposes. Another possible addition would be explaining the use of “nonmetal” vs “nonmetallic element” if we decide to use these terms consistently. I’ve thought a bit about where to put this, and it seems there are three good choices: (1) as the last sentence of the first paragraph (2) as a new paragraph inserted between the first and second (3) as a new paragraph at the end of the top section. There are certainly other choices too. I don’t feel strongly about the location except that the earlier the better and that it should be in the top section. As it currently stands, the scope dt at statement comes much later. Thoughts anyone? YBG (talk) 06:56, 22 January 2024 (UTC)
- This could largely be accommodated by showing the start of the article as follows (bold = new):
- This article is about a class of up to two dozen or so nonmetallic chemical elements. For the use of the term nonmetal in astronomy, see nonmetal (astrophysics). For nonmetallic substances, see materials science.
- A nonmetal is a chemical element that mostly lacks metallic properties. Seventeen elements are generally considered nonmetals, though some authors recognize more or fewer depending on the properties considered most representative of metallic or nonmetallic character. Elements on the borderline, which are sometimes instead referred to as metalloids, further complicate the situation. They are included for comparative purposes, given their predominately nonmetallic[footnote] chemistry.
- Footnote: The term "nonmetallic" generally encompasses nonmetals and metalloids; "nonmetal" generally excludes metalloids. Sandbh (talk) 00:12, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
- @YBG: --- Sandbh (talk) 00:13, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
- Suggestions
- Hat note: Can we avoid saying both up to and or so? Maybe just up to NNN or else about MMM to NNN?
- Last sentence para 1: Complicating the situation, the borderline metalloids are sometimes considered a category separate from metals and nonmetals.
- New para 1.5: This article includes metalloids for comparative purposes, given their predominately nonmetallic chemistry. The term "nonmetallic" is used to include both nonmetals and metalloids; "nonmetal" excludes metalloids. Astatine is only mentioned briefly due to uncertainty over its bulk properties.
- Thoughts? YBG (talk) 04:00, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
Density and electronegativity chart
I’ve added a periodic table to the chart. I’m far from satisfied with the result; suggestions are more than welcome. Things I’ve thought about:
- Changing the colors scheme
- Coloring the NG/HN/ON/Md the same in both parts of the chart, a lighter version of the lower right quadrant.
- Coloring the NG/HN/ON/Md the same in the PT and adding it as a sidebar to the existing four colors in the upper right quadrant
- Eliminating the element lists in the four-quadrants so it becomes just a legend
- Removing the PT completely
I added the PT mostly because a color coded PT has much more meaning and context for me than long lists of elements. I suspect this might be so also for the general reader.
I am not wedded to this idea; if it seems distracting or cluttered and you can’t figure out a way to improve it, feel free to revert it completely. YBG (talk) 15:51, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
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