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User:Rvsuvarna/Black_Dot_Vodka

I need help with getting this article to Wikipedia's standards and to push it live. Any help will be greatly appreciated.

Rvsuvarna (talk) 03:42, 22 August 2011 (UTC)

User:Mecheng761/Zishan_Engineers

I have made changes and added a few sources. Could you please let me know if the article is good enough to be posted on the main wikipedia page?

Mecheng761 (talk) 09:34, 22 August 2011 (UTC)

Im not seeing too many changes from my view and dont know fully if it addressing the previous editors concerns over the page. For further back ground for other editors, various concerns in the past can be found from this discussion here which endorsed deletion; Wikipedia:Deletion_review/Log/2010_December_10. Ottawa4ever (talk) 13:35, 22 August 2011 (UTC)

In fact it appears the only added addition was that the company is on the winsim list of users since this deletion review took place. Ottawa4ever (talk) 13:42, 22 August 2011 (UTC)

User:AJonwiki/FDI Intelligence

Please could you let me know if this article is ok?

AJonwiki (talk) 11:33, 22 August 2011 (UTC)

User:Jjbellawan/EduProfiles_Inc.

More editing is welcome!

Jjbellawan (talk) 13:59, 22 August 2011 (UTC)

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Hi there, I need help with these 3 things, as I would like to give Davina credit and write a Wikipedia page on her achievements:

Any assistance would be much appreciated. Thank you.

Davina Reichman is an Australian Fashion Entrepreneur. She has a "fashion/marketing portfolio with a presence that has had international coverage".

Fashion Entrepreneurship

Davina founded and is the Managing Director of iClothing which is iPad compatible clothing t-shirts and dresses with kangaroo pouches store iPads inand the annual Being Born Again Couture Fashion Show, a couture show in different cities globally with renowned and emerging fashion designers and artists creating a haute couture garment each with music, theatrical performances, dancing and film.

The inaugural show in 2010 in Sydney, Australia show collaborated Australian fashion designers including Akira Isogawa, Nicola Finetti, Marnie Skillings and Michael Lo Sordo and Australian artists including Tracey Moffatt, Lindy Lee and Christopher Horder.

The 2011 show in New York City, Manhattan, features fashion designers including BCBC Max Azria, Calvin Klein, Anna Sui, Donna Karan, Michael Kors collaborating with artists from MoMA and P.S.1. including Michele Abeles and Tauba Auerbach.

Style

"High-fashion and experimental, Davina's sense of personal style can only be described as eclectic". Davina creates "styles that are whimsical, contradictory, yet confident with appealing feminine aesthetics", according to her 'D&Em by Davina' label . The focus is on "the crazy, yet the beautiful; the obsessive, yet the controlled".

Davina was interviewed by Fashion_One TV and NDTV China during Australian Fashion Week. In addition, Davina was interviewed by ABC_News_(USA) and Fashion.Maga-Zine.com for her PR and Event Director position at Couture Fashion Week in New York City in 2011, her iClothing iPad clothing range and assisting famous and emerging fashion talents develop .

Domenico.y (talk) 15:10, 22 August 2011 (UTC)

User:Jean_yury/Gamigo_ag

I am looking to create a page for the gaming publisher gamigo AG. I have chosen this topic as I am a fan of the f2p industry and noted that in every game licensed to gamigo, that their name was listed "red" which meant a link to a dead wiki page. It seemed to me that an article should be created on the company in order to help people learn about this publisher.

This is my first article on wikipedia and I would appreciate feedback on whether or not my article fulfills the wikipedia requirements.

Jean yury (talk) 16:01, 22 August 2011 (UTC)

Origin of the phrase "The truth is hard to swallow."

I am searching for the origins and basis for certain phrases and sayings I've heard. "The truth is hard to swallow" is one I can find no history on. Anyone who can provide me with the circumstances, what the "truth" was that was mentioned, and any additional information would be appreciated. Thank You.

TUSCANYINDUS (talk) 16:49, 22 August 2011 (UTC)

The Legion Academy

I rewrote this article, which was previously deleted as being unsourced and insignificant. I think the topic, which has been an ongoing theme in its fictive universe since 1968, is notable and worthy of inclusion in the Wikipedia Comics Project, and have tried to explain why in the new article.

Erikacornia (talk) 17:18, 22 August 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JackBridgestone/Ashraf_Ghori

Article on 'Ashraf Ghori' is written. Please provide with necessary feedback and I will be happy to do the changes and resubmit. Thank you.

JackBridgestone (talk) 17:59, 22 August 2011 (UTC)

Yatin Patel

Spent a good deal of time on this page; there are as many references as I could find, as well as a few images. The profile picture of the artist, however, has a weird code on top and bottom. I obviously did something wrong, but cannot find what it was in any help articles.

Any extra links, grammatical help, etc, would be greatly appreciated.

Emreksd (talk) 18:02, 22 August 2011 (UTC)