User contributions for 135.180.193.96

20 June 2023

• 17:4317:43, 20 June 2023 diff hist −8 Drop shipping →In China
• 17:4217:42, 20 June 2023 diff hist +3 Drop shipping →In China: grammar

15 June 2023

• 19:3319:33, 15 June 2023 diff hist +10 Sodom and Gomorrah →Biblical narrative

5 June 2023

• 01:0101:01, 5 June 2023 diff hist +173 Uvalde school shooting →Account by Pedro Arredondo

4 June 2023

• 16:2716:27, 4 June 2023 diff hist +612 Talk:Martial law in the United States →The subject is never defined, and examples do not elucidate: new section Tag: New topic

6 May 2023

• 00:0700:07, 6 May 2023 diff hist +25 Action 14f13 Fixed dangling modifier in 2nd sentence

5 May 2023

• 21:1621:16, 5 May 2023 diff hist +363 Mohsen Fakhrizadeh →Ambush attack: Cleaned up incoherent sentence ordering

20 February 2023

• 04:5604:56, 20 February 2023 diff hist +431 Talk:Columbine High School massacre →Verb Error: new section Tag: New topic

19 February 2023

• 23:4023:40, 19 February 2023 diff hist −7 Divinity: Original Sin II →Gameplay: Grammar cleanups

14 February 2023

• 23:3823:38, 14 February 2023 diff hist +1,478 Talk:Industrial Revolution →Grammar/Syntax Issue in Causes: new section Tag: New topic

12 February 2023

• 22:0122:01, 12 February 2023 diff hist +419 Talk:Helen Keller →Grammar problems: new section Tag: New topic

9 February 2023

• 20:4620:46, 9 February 2023 diff hist −243 America's Got Talent: The Champions →Format: Fixed non-parallel comparisons, wordiness, awkward phrasings
• 20:1420:14, 9 February 2023 diff hist −3 Shin Lim →Personal life
• 20:1420:14, 9 February 2023 diff hist −5 Shin Lim →Personal life: Fixed awkward phrasing
• 20:0520:05, 9 February 2023 diff hist +20 Shin Lim Removed awkward relative clause

25 January 2023

• 21:3421:34, 25 January 2023 diff hist +240 Talk:Shooting of Abby Zwerner →Wikipedia is not a newspaper
• 21:3121:31, 25 January 2023 diff hist +532 Talk:Shooting of Abby Zwerner →New info: teacher texted someone about lax administration: new section Tag: New topic

15 January 2023

• 19:3519:35, 15 January 2023 diff hist +232 Talk:Paddy Jackson →How on earth is one of the most important Irish trials in recent memory condensed into this?: new section Tag: New topic

13 December 2022

• 16:4316:43, 13 December 2022 diff hist +201 Talk:Tenet (film) →What on earth is a Hitchcockian double?: new section Tag: New topic

2 August 2022

• 01:3001:30, 2 August 2022 diff hist +510 Talk:Patrick Rothfuss →Criticism/Fan Backlash: new section Tag: New topic

1 August 2022

• 17:0017:00, 1 August 2022 diff hist +6 1973–1975 recession No edit summary

14 July 2022

• 02:4602:46, 14 July 2022 diff hist +338 Uvalde school shooting →Account by Pedro Arredondo
• 02:2202:22, 14 July 2022 diff hist −2 Uvalde school shooting →Account by Pedro Arredondo: Fixed misplaced modifiers