User contributions for 148.75.167.151

13 October 2021

• 06:1906:19, 13 October 2021 diff hist −149 Shams Charania →Career: remove puffery; not a fan page Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

12 October 2021

• 03:3603:36, 12 October 2021 diff hist −12 In My Life it makes no sense that Lennon disagreed; Lennon and McCartney disagreed; and "respective" adds nothing

9 October 2021

• 02:3702:37, 9 October 2021 diff hist −16 Jason Varitek →Red Sox milestones and achievements: "in team history" = redundant Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

24 September 2021

• 02:0002:00, 24 September 2021 diff hist −8 Harry Kalas He didn't say, "We lost Harry [today]." He said, "We lost Harry." Tag: Reverted

19 September 2021

• 19:4619:46, 19 September 2021 diff hist +24 German nuclear program during World War II →Comparison to the Manhattan Project: there is no 1,000 times less; one one-thousandth Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:1719:17, 19 September 2021 diff hist −35 Lou Dobbs unclear what "deep state outings" refers to Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

8 September 2021

• 07:1507:15, 8 September 2021 diff hist +1 Bob Guccione →Illness and death: comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

6 September 2021

• 12:2712:27, 6 September 2021 diff hist +1 Gotha comma
• 10:0510:05, 6 September 2021 diff hist −15 There Will Be Blood deleting the unnecessary "would go on to"
• 10:0110:01, 6 September 2021 diff hist −51 Robert Altman Based on her filmography, it is false to say, "Patricia Resnick often wrote his screenplays." "Often" doesn't hold up.
• 09:5809:58, 6 September 2021 diff hist −16 Robert Altman yes, of course "for other films"
• 09:5409:54, 6 September 2021 diff hist 0 Robert Altman He said -- we have no idea what he felt
• 09:4009:40, 6 September 2021 diff hist −3 Robert Altman "the latter's" -- sheesh
• 00:1400:14, 6 September 2021 diff hist +1 M*A*S*H (film) →Box office: comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

5 September 2021

• 23:4823:48, 5 September 2021 diff hist +1 Gosford Park appositive comma
• 17:4117:41, 5 September 2021 diff hist −62 Corey Kluber Removing description of "overuse" by his high school coach -- nothing about that supposition is mentioned in the article in the reference.
• 02:4702:47, 5 September 2021 diff hist +1 Paul René Gauguin comma
• 02:4502:45, 5 September 2021 diff hist +1 Jean René Gauguin comma
• 02:3402:34, 5 September 2021 diff hist −2 Brown Publishing Company eliminate false range
• 02:3202:32, 5 September 2021 diff hist +1 Brown Publishing Company comma
• 02:3202:32, 5 September 2021 diff hist +1 Brown Publishing Company comma
• 01:5001:50, 5 September 2021 diff hist +1 Nina Arianda comma

3 September 2021

• 19:2319:23, 3 September 2021 diff hist +1 Lou Grant (TV series) comma

31 August 2021

• 00:1800:18, 31 August 2021 diff hist +1 Frank McHugh comma

29 August 2021

• 22:2022:20, 29 August 2021 diff hist +1 Merderet appositive comma

30 July 2021

• 06:2706:27, 30 July 2021 diff hist −4 Goodnight Moon He said that. We don't know whether he believed that.
• 05:3405:34, 30 July 2021 diff hist −4 The West Wing centers on, not around
• 05:3005:30, 30 July 2021 diff hist −4 The West Wing He said this. He didn't "believe" this. We have no idea what he believed. "Said" is correct.

16 July 2021

• 21:4721:47, 16 July 2021 diff hist 0 Larry Klayman no hyphen in -ly constructions

13 July 2021

• 03:1203:12, 13 July 2021 diff hist +1 William Gates (basketball) comma in date
• 03:0903:09, 13 July 2021 diff hist +525 Talk:Hoop Dreams can you make any sense of this paragraph?

28 June 2021

• 02:4002:40, 28 June 2021 diff hist −13 Paris Blues The word "respectively" has no work to do here.

16 June 2021

• 05:5905:59, 16 June 2021 diff hist −12 Mike Bianco remove garble Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:5702:57, 16 June 2021 diff hist −1 Arizona Complex League →Champions: spelling: canceled Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

13 June 2021

• 23:2323:23, 13 June 2021 diff hist +33 Super Bowl LI avoiding jargon "pick six"

7 June 2021

• 00:3900:39, 7 June 2021 diff hist −23 Paganini Quartet remove puffery "virtuoso"

6 June 2021

• 05:4205:42, 6 June 2021 diff hist +890 Paganini Quartet Added references. The story of the founding of the quartet is told in the quartet's publications (reference added again), and in the book about the quartet's patron, describing Maas, not Temianka, as the founder who had the idea and secured the funding and the instruments, then joined up with Temianka and the others. I'll leave them both as co-founders in the first paragraph, for now. Temianka is not removed from the article. He is no longer listed, incorrectly, as the founder.

4 June 2021

• 18:1118:11, 4 June 2021 diff hist +3 Henri Temianka →The Paganini Quartet: founder was Maas, as identified in quartet materials at https://digitalcommons.chapman.edu/temianka_ephemera/162/
• 18:0918:09, 4 June 2021 diff hist +133 Paganini Quartet Adding info on founding of the quartet by Maas, with document from the quartet Tag: Reverted
• 07:1007:10, 4 June 2021 diff hist +56 Paganini Quartet As the history explains, it was Maas, not Temianka, who formed the quartet and secured the funding and the instruments from Mrs. W.A. Clark. He is at least a co-founder, if not the founder.

2 June 2021

• 04:4404:44, 2 June 2021 diff hist −2 Fortunio Bonanova typo
• 04:4204:42, 2 June 2021 diff hist −23 Dan Dailey Wiki page on Meet Me in Las Vegas says that it made money, not lost money.

23 May 2021

• 22:5222:52, 23 May 2021 diff hist +1 Some Came Running (film) →Plot: comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

21 May 2021

• 05:1705:17, 21 May 2021 diff hist −2 The Boxer Rolling Stone is an it, not a they

20 May 2021

• 04:3904:39, 20 May 2021 diff hist −4 Île-de-France Centered on -- or circled around -- choose one, but centered around makes no sense

16 May 2021

• 22:4022:40, 16 May 2021 diff hist +499 Pam Belluck →Career Tag: possible unreferenced addition to BLP
• 21:5421:54, 16 May 2021 diff hist 0 Josh Hader →Twitter controversy: fix "wore given" Tags: Manual revert Mobile edit Mobile web edit

15 May 2021

• 14:0314:03, 15 May 2021 diff hist +6 Percy W. Griffiths missing word Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

3 May 2021

• 23:2123:21, 3 May 2021 diff hist +1 Mr. Moonlight (song) comma
• 23:1923:19, 3 May 2021 diff hist +1 Mr. Moonlight (song) That would be Willie Perryman, an albino black blues pianist, -- see the comma there? That's for an appositive.