User contributions for 1995hoo

2 January 2025

• 19:1519:15, 2 January 2025 diff hist +23 Roy Rogers Restaurants Various cleanup, particularly grammar and punctuation. This article demonstrated significant ignorance of MOS:GEOCOMMA. current

1 January 2025

• 21:3421:34, 1 January 2025 diff hist −291 Death and state funeral of Jimmy Carter Undid revision 1266699775 by Batong1930 (talk)—as the non-displaying note directly above what you added mentions, your edit violates MOS:NOTSEEALSO. Both of the articles you linked are already linked in the article's text and therefore do not belong in the "see also" section. Tag: Undo
• 19:3019:30, 1 January 2025 diff hist 0 m Death and state funeral of Jimmy Carter →Prayer services and pastoral statements: ok, got the right one this time.
• 19:3019:30, 1 January 2025 diff hist 0 Death and state funeral of Jimmy Carter self-revert. I edited the wrong instance of "day." Tag: Undo
• 19:2919:29, 1 January 2025 diff hist 0 m Death and state funeral of Jimmy Carter →Prayer services and pastoral statements: capitalization. Evidently they write this word with a lowercase "d," as seen in the linked article. Tag: Reverted
• 19:2819:28, 1 January 2025 diff hist −4 m Death and state funeral of Jimmy Carter →Prayer services and pastoral statements: removed spaces around em dashes per MOS:DASH.
• 18:2618:26, 1 January 2025 diff hist +1 Death and state funeral of Jimmy Carter The previous edit violated MOS:DATECOMMA.
• 15:1015:10, 1 January 2025 diff hist +3 m NHL Heritage Classic Spell out the ordinal when it’s used as a grammatical part of the sentence. current
• 15:0915:09, 1 January 2025 diff hist −11 m NHL Winter Classic "Eventually" implies something that happened over a relatively long period of time. The Winter Classic caught on very quickly.
• 14:0014:00, 1 January 2025 diff hist −20 Death and state funeral of Jimmy Carter Deleted unsourced reference to the vice president as a eulogist. The article also doesn’t mention her anywhere else.
• 13:5913:59, 1 January 2025 diff hist −70 m Death and state funeral of Jimmy Carter →Memorial service and state funeral: missing comma; various edits to reduce redundancy and repetition, both within the overall article and within the paragraph.
• 13:5713:57, 1 January 2025 diff hist +2 m Death and state funeral of Jimmy Carter →Prayer services and pastoral statements: missing commas.

31 December 2024

• 22:4922:49, 31 December 2024 diff hist 0 NHL Winter Classic Undid revision 1266492611 by Bigherdfan91 (talk)— it was correct the way it was. Tag: Undo
• 19:4519:45, 31 December 2024 diff hist 0 m Ilya Samsonov →Toronto Maple Leafs: not a proper noun. current
• 19:4119:41, 31 December 2024 diff hist −5 m Death and state funeral of Jimmy Carter →Death: more natural wording. "Of the" possessives are often unnecessarily awkward, as here.
• 19:3919:39, 31 December 2024 diff hist 0 m Death and state funeral of Jimmy Carter →Memorial service and state funeral: lowercase. This seems like unnecessary detail, but if so it’s harmless error.
• 18:5318:53, 31 December 2024 diff hist +3 m Bobby Gould (ice hockey) →Playing career: inconsistent date styles. current
• 18:5118:51, 31 December 2024 diff hist +1 m Bobby Gould (ice hockey) →Playing career: violation of MOS:DATECOMMA.
• 18:3118:31, 31 December 2024 diff hist +2 m Phoenix Shot Tower Violation of MOS:DATECOMMA; also an improper use of British date format. current
• 14:3714:37, 31 December 2024 diff hist +1 m Death and state funeral of Jimmy Carter →Memorial service and state funeral: missing comma.
• 02:4402:44, 31 December 2024 diff hist −28 The Gaslight Anthem →Reunion and History Books (2022–present): cleaned up atrocious writing and capitalization. current
• 02:4102:41, 31 December 2024 diff hist −1 m National day of mourning →State officials: the date didn’t remotely resemble a proper date format. MOS:BADDATEFORMAT and [MOS:DATECOMMA]]. current
• 02:3902:39, 31 December 2024 diff hist −105 Death and state funeral of Jimmy Carter →Memorial service and state funeral: clean up—removal of excessive redundancy (how many times in a row can you say "Carter's remains"?) and excessive piped links that apparently just included unnecessary periods. Also grammar cleanup where people didn’t even try to write in coherent English.

30 December 2024

• 17:1717:17, 30 December 2024 diff hist −1 m Death and state funeral of Jimmy Carter →Death: "coverage of," not "coverage on." Also fixed the nondisplaying text about Delta just in case it’s ever made visible (the possessive form is "its" with no apostrophe).
• 17:1617:16, 30 December 2024 diff hist −18 m Death and state funeral of Jimmy Carter →Memorial service: his remains can’t very well be interred before their arrival…..
• 04:3404:34, 30 December 2024 diff hist −29 Death and state funeral of Jimmy Carter →State funeral: "House" is not a last name. This is an institutional release. No author needed.
• 04:2704:27, 30 December 2024 diff hist −79 Death and state funeral of Jimmy Carter →Death: a eulogy is not "published." It’s essentially a speech that’s delivered either during or just before or after a funeral service.
• 04:2604:26, 30 December 2024 diff hist −52 Death and state funeral of Jimmy Carter →Memorial service: as is shown in a different citation, it’ll continue at least thru January 9, the National Day of Mourning. This is why you don’t rush to add stuff based solely on media speculation.
• 02:1902:19, 30 December 2024 diff hist −1 m Death and state funeral of Jimmy Carter →Condolences: remove comma that didn’t belong.
• 02:1902:19, 30 December 2024 diff hist −23 Death and state funeral of Jimmy Carter →Condolences: use correct grammar.

29 December 2024

• 22:0822:08, 29 December 2024 diff hist +1 m Death and state funeral of Jimmy Carter →Death: violation of MOS:GEOCOMMA.
• 21:3221:32, 29 December 2024 diff hist −22 m Death and state funeral of Jimmy Carter Removed ungrammatical sentence fragment that made no sense.
• 16:5416:54, 29 December 2024 diff hist −4 m Arlington National Cemetery →Burial criteria: removed unnecessary "the."
• 14:1314:13, 29 December 2024 diff hist +1 m Gateway Program (Northeast Corridor) →Trans-Hudson crossings: violation of MOS:GEOCOMMA. current
• 14:0714:07, 29 December 2024 diff hist −5 m Outerbridge Crossing →Tolls: replaced nonbreaking space (wrong) with hyphen (correct for a compound adjective of this sort). current
• 14:0514:05, 29 December 2024 diff hist 0 m Outerbridge Crossing Moved closing parenthesis for consistency with the other part of the same sentence.
• 14:0414:04, 29 December 2024 diff hist +6 m Arthur Kill →Tributaries and islands: missing conjunction and comma. current
• 14:0314:03, 29 December 2024 diff hist +3 m Arthur Kill →Course: replaced hyphen (wrong) with en dash (correct). Also fixed missing comma.
• 14:0214:02, 29 December 2024 diff hist +1 m Arthur Kill Missing comma.
• 14:0014:00, 29 December 2024 diff hist −23 m George Washington Goethals →Legacy and tributes: cleaned up various sloppiness and incorrect punctuation.
• 02:2202:22, 29 December 2024 diff hist 0 m Irv Gordon Spelling (don’t use British spellings in an article about an American). current

28 December 2024

• 21:3121:31, 28 December 2024 diff hist −1 m The Zambonis Multiple violations of MOS:THEMUSIC (don’t capitalize "the" in band names midsentence, though I left one that appears in a quotation); also various punctuation fixes. current

27 December 2024

• 22:5322:53, 27 December 2024 diff hist 0 m Greg Gumbel →Personal life: word order.

26 December 2024

• 20:3320:33, 26 December 2024 diff hist −3 m Boom Overture Previous edit was ungrammatical as to the first sentence.

25 December 2024

• 23:3323:33, 25 December 2024 diff hist 0 National Hockey League Undid revision 1265245111 by 211.235.64.240 (talk)—it was correct the way it was. In French they don’t capitalize the same as in English. Tags: Undo Reverted

23 December 2024

• 16:1816:18, 23 December 2024 diff hist +680 User talk:Theparties →Please stop asking for college and university articles to be moved: comment to agree with the other users saying to please stop.
• 02:4602:46, 23 December 2024 diff hist +1 m Panama Canal →Recent developments (2024): "rates was exorbitant"? Fixed grammar.

22 December 2024

• 19:2619:26, 22 December 2024 diff hist +744 Talk:University of Virginia →Requested move 22 December 2024: a further comment. Tag: Reply
• 15:4515:45, 22 December 2024 diff hist +923 Talk:University of Virginia →Requested move 22 December 2024: oppose.
• 13:3113:31, 22 December 2024 diff hist −12 Boom Overture Undid revision 1264362169 by 103.103.57.143 (talk)—not sure what you meant to do, but it introduced an error message. Tag: Undo