User contributions for 200.120.204.192

1 January 2012

• 04:2504:25, 1 January 2012 diff hist −162 The Brittas Empire →Episodes: awful writing improved

31 December 2011

• 14:1114:11, 31 December 2011 diff hist +406 User talk:200.120.204.192 No edit summary
• 14:0814:08, 31 December 2011 diff hist −2 Kon-Tiki expedition I notice more and more than there is some kind of fetish for parenthesis these days. They are almost always unnecessary.
• 14:0614:06, 31 December 2011 diff hist −427 Thor Heyerdahl copying and pasting large chunks of text directly from sources is a) extremely lazy, and b) violation of copyright.
• 14:0414:04, 31 December 2011 diff hist −15 Thor Heyerdahl →The Kon-Tiki expedition: he's been dead for 9 years. He doesn't "admit" anything
• 14:0314:03, 31 December 2011 diff hist 0 Thor Heyerdahl →The Kon-Tiki expedition: and we can put this study in a more logical place
• 13:5913:59, 31 December 2011 diff hist −85 Thor Heyerdahl Disgustingly badly written paragraph, including bibliographic information in the text, unnecessary redlinks, unnecessary parenthesising and unnecessary and lazy cut-and-pasting
• 13:5213:52, 31 December 2011 diff hist −354 Easter Island irrelevant here. Tag: references removed
• 13:5113:51, 31 December 2011 diff hist 0 Easter Island put the reference after the fact, not in the middle of it

30 December 2011

• 13:4813:48, 30 December 2011 diff hist −524 Capgemini Utterly meaningless section, devoid of context or encyclopaedic interest. removed
• 13:4713:47, 30 December 2011 diff hist −109 Capgemini putting a citation after a number and before what the number actually is is fucking retarded Tag: references removed
• 13:2013:20, 30 December 2011 diff hist −196 Canon EOS 1000D →Trivia: rm trivia Tag: section blanking

29 December 2011

• 22:4122:41, 29 December 2011 diff hist −14 Clovelly →Entrance fee & controversy: People just love having sections called "controversy". It's almost never justified and it almost always violates NPOV
• 22:2022:20, 29 December 2011 diff hist −28 Ranulph Fiennes Doesn't matter where else this claim is made, it is POV as used here.
• 22:1722:17, 29 December 2011 diff hist −179 Audrey Mestre →Awards and accolades: rm promo
• 22:1222:12, 29 December 2011 diff hist −89 Freediving →Some famous competitive apnea divers: rm promo link and inappropriate interwiki links
• 19:5019:50, 29 December 2011 diff hist −28 Ranulph Fiennes "formidable" = the very definition of POV.
• 18:2418:24, 29 December 2011 diff hist −16 PH →History: horrifically bad writing improved
• 17:2117:21, 29 December 2011 diff hist −40 Ranulph Fiennes →Adventurer: rm more pov and lame writing
• 17:1917:19, 29 December 2011 diff hist −229 Ranulph Fiennes →Adventurer: amateurish, fanzine-style writing
• 15:5815:58, 29 December 2011 diff hist −30 Transglobe Expedition →Northwest Passage: Yeah, obviously. Otherwise you wouldn't have bothered writing it, would you?
• 15:3315:33, 29 December 2011 diff hist −45 Cloud storage →Cloud storage architecture: rm pov. Probably both the "examples" are promotional and should be replaced
• 15:1015:10, 29 December 2011 diff hist −45 Cloud storage 1. Give a reference, don't promote it; 2. put the bloody reference AFTER THE FACT IT'S SUPPORTING, NOT BEFORE!!
• 11:4211:42, 29 December 2011 diff hist +292 Talk:Blog →Citation problem
• 11:4011:40, 29 December 2011 diff hist −80 Chemotherapy →Occupational precautions: inappropriate "advice"
• 11:3411:34, 29 December 2011 diff hist −38 Chemotherapy It's always cancer chemotherapy
• 11:3211:32, 29 December 2011 diff hist −34 Karen Bowerman some idiot went mental with th bold there