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10 October 2014

• 14:2814:28, 10 October 2014 diff hist +77 Whaling Added source for environmental group opposition to lifting ban.
• 14:2614:26, 10 October 2014 diff hist +59 Whaling Added source for Norway and Japan stance.
• 14:2214:22, 10 October 2014 diff hist −232 Whaling Cleaned up text to reflect informative aspects without subjective aspects. There are other articles on the whaling debate. This article informs on whaling in general, not the morality or sustainability.
• 14:1814:18, 10 October 2014 diff hist −65 Whaling Reworded to convey informative/neutral tone. This change reflects the original factual statements but not conclusion statements.
• 14:1514:15, 10 October 2014 diff hist −124 Whaling Removed subjective conclusion about whaling because this is an informative article. There are other articles that explore the ongoing debate about whaling.
• 14:1014:10, 10 October 2014 diff hist −1 The Inner Reaches of Outer Space Although both words convey the same meaning, the author writing the book is less awkward than the author creating a book.
• 13:5713:57, 10 October 2014 diff hist +1 Druid Broke the first paragraph up and re-arranged wording in-order to flow better. The original block paragraph was uncomfortable to read due to size.
• 13:4913:49, 10 October 2014 diff hist +4 1885 in Wales →Sport: [[ ]]
• 13:4513:45, 10 October 2014 diff hist +7 Micromelo undatus →Distribution: Consistency
• 13:4213:42, 10 October 2014 diff hist +1 Jean Pierre Capron Ed to ing
• 13:3313:33, 10 October 2014 diff hist −224 Fundamentals of Engineering exam →U.S. Patent Office: Deleted text unrelated to topic. The topic is the engineering exam and not the typical way that individuals pass the patent exam.

30 September 2014

• 15:4215:42, 30 September 2014 diff hist +11 John Bellers →About the Improvement of Physick (1714): Added named link
• 15:3815:38, 30 September 2014 diff hist −12 John Bellers →Life: Removed unnecessary and confusing word.

25 September 2014

• 20:1820:18, 25 September 2014 diff hist +93 Thomas R. Kline School of Law Added another source for the name change.
• 19:0019:00, 25 September 2014 diff hist +73 Associate attorney →Types: Added language
• 18:5618:56, 25 September 2014 diff hist +196 Thomas R. Kline School of Law Updated name of law school and added source for recent (9/17/2014) change in name of the law school.

18 September 2014

• 19:2419:24, 18 September 2014 diff hist +72 Hillsdale College →Founding and early history: Added source

4 June 2014

• 13:1313:13, 4 June 2014 diff hist −12 Associate attorney Removed traditional to avoid misleading language that could confuse. If I am missing something then start a discussion in the talk section or include a detailed explanation in your edit summary.

28 May 2014

• 18:2818:28, 28 May 2014 diff hist +16 2014 United States Senate election in Texas Added brackets for candidate

7 November 2013

• 23:0123:01, 7 November 2013 diff hist +342 Pat Toomey →LGBT issues: Organized language to accurately reflect text of source. Source states that hope of a filibuster was broken when the act earned the votes of all present Democrats and seven Republicans.

29 October 2013

• 20:1820:18, 29 October 2013 diff hist 0 Ken Howard →Personal life: Meaning
• 20:1620:16, 29 October 2013 diff hist +31 Ken Howard →Personal life: Order
• 20:1520:15, 29 October 2013 diff hist −2 Ken Howard →Personal life: Organization

28 October 2013

• 20:2320:23, 28 October 2013 diff hist +7 Single-8 Wording
• 17:3817:38, 28 October 2013 diff hist −45 Ang Lee →Life after graduation: Although descriptive, this is a subjective statement that should be substantiated.
• 17:3517:35, 28 October 2013 diff hist +6 2013 Cannes Film Festival A source needs to be added for this.
• 17:3117:31, 28 October 2013 diff hist −4 2013 Cannes Film Festival Removed unneeded word that made sentence awkward.

24 October 2013

• 20:1220:12, 24 October 2013 diff hist 0 SAG-AFTRA Arranged order to reflect founding of SAG-AFTRA because this article is about SAG-AFTRA and not its defunct historical predecessors.
• 19:5019:50, 24 October 2013 diff hist +38 SAG-AFTRA SAG-AFTRA represents the categories added.
• 19:4119:41, 24 October 2013 diff hist 0 SAG-AFTRA Updated
• 16:2316:23, 24 October 2013 diff hist +7 Cameron Douglas →Early life and family: Improved
• 16:2216:22, 24 October 2013 diff hist +5 Cameron Douglas →Drug dealing and conviction: Added missing word.
• 16:1916:19, 24 October 2013 diff hist +3 Six Degrees of Separation (film) →Synopsis
• 16:1816:18, 24 October 2013 diff hist −1 Six Degrees of Separation (film) Wording
• 16:1316:13, 24 October 2013 diff hist +13 Wonder Boys (film) Tightened structure.
• 16:1116:11, 24 October 2013 diff hist −43 Wonder Boys Improved wording to sound less advertorial and more descriptive. We could probably improve this further.
• 16:0816:08, 24 October 2013 diff hist −8 Hillsdale College →Non-discrimination and affirmative action: Good point Orlady. I did not even think of the verbatim repetition nature of the change. I am glad that you caught that. My objective was just to neutralize the language of the paragraph.

23 October 2013

• 22:2922:29, 23 October 2013 diff hist +12 Doctor of Fine Arts Added for clarity.
• 22:2722:27, 23 October 2013 diff hist +12 Law school Corrected because this is not a charity anymore.
• 22:2122:21, 23 October 2013 diff hist −6 The Walking Dead (1995 film) Such a large number should be in numerical format and not written out.
• 22:2022:20, 23 October 2013 diff hist −10 The Walking Dead (1936 film) Shortened wording and combined for better meaning and understandability.
• 22:1722:17, 23 October 2013 diff hist −1 Hillsdale College →Non-discrimination and affirmative action: Corrected error in edit.
• 22:1622:16, 23 October 2013 diff hist +86 Hillsdale College →Non-discrimination and affirmative action: Conformed language to the text of the source and not an interpretation of the text.

21 October 2013

• 16:0916:09, 21 October 2013 diff hist +569 Lake Erie College Undid intentional blanking of text that was masked with a few pseudo improvements.

17 October 2013

• 15:1915:19, 17 October 2013 diff hist +9 Four Corners (Australian TV program) No edit summary

16 October 2013

• 15:4015:40, 16 October 2013 diff hist +8 The Walking Dead (TV series) →Season 2 (2011–12): Wording
• 15:3415:34, 16 October 2013 diff hist +1 We Are Men No edit summary
• 15:3415:34, 16 October 2013 diff hist +2 We Are Men Changed to was because of cancellation.
• 15:3315:33, 16 October 2013 diff hist +1 Lucky 7 (TV series) Updated because this was canceled.

10 October 2013

• 14:3514:35, 10 October 2013 diff hist +381 Talk:Hillsdale College →Publications / Imprimis: Agreed