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27 December 2024

• 15:2915:29, 27 December 2024 diff hist +5 Volney V. Ashford →Ashford and Annexation of Hawaii: clarity current
• 14:4614:46, 27 December 2024 diff hist 0 Willard Richards →Marriage and family: Fawn Brodie, in No Man Knows My History, says it's Nancy Marinda on page 439 of the first edition, 1945. current
• 14:3914:39, 27 December 2024 diff hist +9 Willard Richards →Early church service: Even though it's the England section, it should be specified that it's not Manchester, Vermont, or Manchester, Connecticut, for example.

20 December 2024

• 04:4904:49, 20 December 2024 diff hist +1 Industrial Cape Breton →BESCO: close quote needed. current
• 04:4804:48, 20 December 2024 diff hist +1 Industrial Cape Breton →BESCO: period at end of sentence.
• 04:4604:46, 20 December 2024 diff hist +1 Industrial Cape Breton →Early mining: environmental degradation AND economic ruin WERE...

19 December 2024

• 20:2920:29, 19 December 2024 diff hist +11 Captain Corelli's Mandolin →Synopsis: It couldn't be right that the communists would attack other partisans from being different from their mutual enemy. So, "for being ideologically NO different than the Axis's occupying forces." Because the mandolin isn't human, the quotations marks make that clear. English as second language for Wikipedia author of this article mean that clauses are written out of common English order. current
• 13:5313:53, 19 December 2024 diff hist +10 Wicked (musical) →Act Two: “The couple” isn’t clear. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

9 December 2024

• 08:5608:56, 9 December 2024 diff hist −3 Banquet of Chestnuts →Burchard's account: What was meant, not what was euphemized. Tag: Reverted
• 08:2408:24, 9 December 2024 diff hist +5 Carl Rogers →Biography: It's a quotation, not a "line."
• 07:5707:57, 9 December 2024 diff hist +4 Albert Ellis →Personal life: Below twenty (or 11), spell out.
• 07:5607:56, 9 December 2024 diff hist +2 Albert Ellis →Personal life: Missed that.
• 07:5507:55, 9 December 2024 diff hist +8 Albert Ellis →Personal life: Edited for sense.
• 07:5207:52, 9 December 2024 diff hist +1 Albert Ellis →Public appearance: It's always , i.e., (that's comma space i.e. comma space).
• 07:4007:40, 9 December 2024 diff hist +1 Albert Ellis →Early life: Copious isn't the proper word to enumerate or characterize the subject. If enumerating, numerous; if characterizing, egregious.
• 07:3307:33, 9 December 2024 diff hist 0 Cradle of Erotica →Background: The is part of the title. current
• 07:3207:32, 9 December 2024 diff hist −10 Cradle of Erotica →Critical reception: Imprecise English clarified.
• 07:2107:21, 9 December 2024 diff hist +6 Cradle of Erotica →Promiscuity: Wrong word, philosophy.
• 07:1707:17, 9 December 2024 diff hist +2 Cradle of Erotica →Genital intercourse: it's the translated term.
• 07:1007:10, 9 December 2024 diff hist 0 Sankt Wendel →History: Pretty sure you meant plunderers (see preceding text). Maybe "opportunists" would be better. current
• 06:0406:04, 9 December 2024 diff hist +3 A Promenade of the Hearts Need the comma. current
• 05:5505:55, 9 December 2024 diff hist +2 The Perfumed Garden →Chapter 6: Sexual Technique: Good form, those commas with i.e. current
• 05:5105:51, 9 December 2024 diff hist −1 The Perfumed Garden →History: A tortured English sentence, no longer....

6 December 2024

• 07:4707:47, 6 December 2024 diff hist 0 Elizabeth Báthory →Popular culture: Chronological order of music references
• 07:3407:34, 6 December 2024 diff hist +24 Elizabeth Báthory →Marriage and land-ownership: I'm pretty sure that this is what is intended: Her husband bought the castle, which she maintained, etc.
• 07:2907:29, 6 December 2024 diff hist −4 Elizabeth Báthory →Marriage and land-ownership: his name, so no "the."
• 05:0505:05, 6 December 2024 diff hist 0 Bathory (film) →Preceding Film
• 05:0205:02, 6 December 2024 diff hist +73 Bathory (film) →Preceding Film
• 04:5804:58, 6 December 2024 diff hist +28 Bathory (film) →Preceding Film
• 04:5604:56, 6 December 2024 diff hist +4 Bathory (film) Important to note preceding cinematic presentation/version.
• 04:5504:55, 6 December 2024 diff hist +337 Bathory (film) Important to note preceding cinematic presentation/version. Tag: Disambiguation links added

2 December 2024

• 03:4003:40, 2 December 2024 diff hist +4 Albanian Americans we don't say United States except adjectivally, and then with a possessive 's; we say the United States.

29 November 2024

• 04:0904:09, 29 November 2024 diff hist −1 Chagos Archipelago →16th to 19th century: Waterloo, 18 June 1815.

28 November 2024

• 20:1920:19, 28 November 2024 diff hist +59 Chet Baker →Legacy: This paragraph has a pronounced "Baker bias," which is unnecessary and disingenuous. Baker's talent and musicianship speak for themselves, as he himself does on camera, (subjectively, maybe) not to his advantage. Then Baker died: He was indeed "in his later year(s)."