User contributions for 78.34.42.21

27 December 2022

• 15:4615:46, 27 December 2022 diff hist −2 Charles Sylvester People are generally "who", not "which".

26 December 2022

• 11:5511:55, 26 December 2022 diff hist −132 Police (Detention and Bail) Act 2011 Complete misinterpretation of https://www.bailii.org/ew/cases/EWHC/Admin/2011/1578.html - nothing to do with the maximum time a suspect could be released for. current
• 11:2411:24, 26 December 2022 diff hist +17 Police and Criminal Evidence Act 1984 Add verb to sentence, improve puntuation.

25 December 2022

• 10:4810:48, 25 December 2022 diff hist +28 Peripheral Component Interconnect That bracket is not low-profile (but the card is).

23 December 2022

• 20:4520:45, 23 December 2022 diff hist +1 John of Palermo Typo.

21 December 2022

• 19:2019:20, 21 December 2022 diff hist 0 Craft beer →Sri Lanka
• 18:5518:55, 21 December 2022 diff hist +22 Micropub Clarification that the 2003 Act is a UK law.

20 November 2022

• 19:5619:56, 20 November 2022 diff hist −5 Focal dystonia "effect" as a verb means to make something happen - not what's being conveyed here.

15 November 2022

• 13:0913:09, 15 November 2022 diff hist 0 Pilatus Railway Corrected punctuation typo.
• 13:0813:08, 15 November 2022 diff hist 0 Pilatus Railway No reason to hyphenate "four hundred".

9 November 2022

• 21:4421:44, 9 November 2022 diff hist +5 Wroxeter I think "children" is a better term than "kids" for this context, and "a club" is singular (therefore "competes").

5 November 2022

• 13:4313:43, 5 November 2022 diff hist −2 Tabby cat "Analyses" are plural.
• 13:4113:41, 5 November 2022 diff hist −3 Tabby cat Remove redundant "in".

24 October 2022

• 13:3413:34, 24 October 2022 diff hist +8 Drive letter assignment Dot was missing from the 8.3 description.
• 11:3011:30, 24 October 2022 diff hist +80 Drive mapping Linux / Unix doesn't use drive letters - clarification.
• 11:2711:27, 24 October 2022 diff hist +122 Drive mapping Clarification of how Windows generally treated the first four drive letters.

23 October 2022

• 20:1320:13, 23 October 2022 diff hist −14 History of hard disk drives Removed repetition of "diameter".
• 19:3419:34, 23 October 2022 diff hist 0 Self-Monitoring, Analysis and Reporting Technology Capital letter at start of sentence.

21 October 2022

• 09:4609:46, 21 October 2022 diff hist −4 ESIM Removed redundant "the".

19 October 2022

• 10:5210:52, 19 October 2022 diff hist −13 Erlang (unit) No point in having different links to the same resource on one page.

15 October 2022

• 22:1122:11, 15 October 2022 diff hist −1 Sara Dallin A "group" is singular.
• 22:0822:08, 15 October 2022 diff hist +4 The Bluebells Might as well make it a link.
• 10:5910:59, 15 October 2022 diff hist −3 The Floating Admiral No need for two "of"s in one phrase.

29 August 2022

• 14:5114:51, 29 August 2022 diff hist +3 Cologne Grammatical improvements.

26 July 2022

• 11:2911:29, 26 July 2022 diff hist −2 Erlangen Spelling corrections.

25 July 2022

• 15:2915:29, 25 July 2022 diff hist −8 Computer network naming scheme A number does not need to be described as "numeric".

22 July 2022

• 22:5422:54, 22 July 2022 diff hist −4 Gary Howard One does NOT start a sentence with 'and'.

14 July 2022

• 11:2411:24, 14 July 2022 diff hist −1 Devuan Apostrophe incorrect in plural.

2 July 2022

• 14:1114:11, 2 July 2022 diff hist +3 Socket 7 Added missing word.

27 June 2022

• 20:4820:48, 27 June 2022 diff hist +1 Chesney Hawkes Added punctuation.
• 20:3120:31, 27 June 2022 diff hist +1 Billie Jean King A racket is a noisy din. Tennis is played with a racquet.
• 20:2120:21, 27 June 2022 diff hist 0 Billie Jean King Punctuation improvement.
• 20:1720:17, 27 June 2022 diff hist 0 Billie Jean King A racket is a noisy din. Tennis is played with a raquet.

24 June 2022

• 21:3321:33, 24 June 2022 diff hist −1 Kraftwerk "Are" is plural. "A band" is singular, therefore "is" is correct. Tag: Reverted

9 May 2022

• 22:1322:13, 9 May 2022 diff hist −1 Data General Correct plural in the first paragraph; no need for an inappropriate apostrophe in the second.

7 March 2022

• 19:3119:31, 7 March 2022 diff hist +11 Gateway AnyKey I do not for a moment believe that 3 pounds is equivalent to 400 grams, but I cannot say what the correct weight of this keyboard is.

7 February 2022

• 21:0921:09, 7 February 2022 diff hist +8 Banana Pi This model has 5 ethernet ports.

30 January 2022

• 12:2712:27, 30 January 2022 diff hist +1 Maruti Suzuki Alto Zero is plural :)
• 12:2612:26, 30 January 2022 diff hist −4 Maruti Suzuki Alto Grammar improved.

8 January 2022

• 12:2712:27, 8 January 2022 diff hist 0 Telavox Capitalised proper noun.
• 00:1200:12, 8 January 2022 diff hist −4 Splodgenessabounds I don't think "BBC Television" requires a "the" in front of it.

5 January 2022

• 20:2020:20, 5 January 2022 diff hist +28 James Webb Space Telescope Added UK link.
• 20:1320:13, 5 January 2022 diff hist +3 James Webb Space Telescope Missing "to" added.

3 January 2022

• 22:3322:33, 3 January 2022 diff hist −1 Rainbow 100 Speling correction :)

27 December 2021

• 20:4420:44, 27 December 2021 diff hist +18 The Cuckoo's Egg (book) If the FBI gets an abbreviation, why not the others?

20 December 2021

• 10:1210:12, 20 December 2021 diff hist +1 Nightlife legislation of the United States I don't think even the Americans spell it "councilar".

19 December 2021

• 23:1623:16, 19 December 2021 diff hist +9 Teen Dance Ordinance (album) Added apostrophe, resolved ambiguity.
• 23:1423:14, 19 December 2021 diff hist −1 A (band) One band is singular.

18 December 2021

• 20:4820:48, 18 December 2021 diff hist −1 Shakespears Sister A duo is a single thing, therefore "is". Confirmed by the second sentence using "it".

16 December 2021

• 21:3221:32, 16 December 2021 diff hist −2 Michael Anthony (musician) No reason for the quotation marks.