User contributions for 82.24.122.84

25 March 2017

• 05:4705:47, 25 March 2017 diff hist −47 Kh-35 →Current operators: Use of 'division' in original was inconsistent with English meaning of the term

24 March 2017

• 23:1623:16, 24 March 2017 diff hist +9 Type 22 frigate →Evolution: Capitalise Outboard and prefix with Classic to identify it as a system, not a location (see Friedman)

17 March 2017

• 17:4917:49, 17 March 2017 diff hist +25 William Hulton →Biography: Add number of injured to reflect scale of the Peterloo Massacre
• 17:4817:48, 17 March 2017 diff hist +323 William Hulton →Biography: Make it clear that Hulton actively ordered the attack on the crowd with text from The Peterloo Massacre

13 March 2017

• 23:2123:21, 13 March 2017 diff hist 0 Thaon di Revel-class offshore patrol vessel Clarify FFBNW notation, 'Fitted For But Not With', by providing page link on first usage.
• 23:1623:16, 13 March 2017 diff hist +17 Thaon di Revel-class offshore patrol vessel Clarify FFBNW notation - 'Fitted For Bi

12 March 2017

• 18:2818:28, 12 March 2017 diff hist −2 Michael Redgrave →Film: Change 'Dr B N Wallis' to the much more widely known Barnes Wallis

8 March 2017

• 20:4020:40, 8 March 2017 diff hist +385 Rosa Monckton, Baroness Monckton of Dallington Forest →Fundraising: Add section on 2017 minimum wage controversy

4 March 2017

• 07:2707:27, 4 March 2017 diff hist −14 Kashin-class destroyer →Original design: Remove "Rusty Bucket"
• 07:1307:13, 4 March 2017 diff hist +128 Buk missile system →3S90 "Uragan" / M-22: Fix mangled English
• 05:4905:49, 4 March 2017 diff hist −54 Tor missile system →Tor-M1-2U: Improve English
• 05:4105:41, 4 March 2017 diff hist −522 Tor missile system →9K332 Tor-M2E: Improve English
• 01:4101:41, 4 March 2017 diff hist +40 Pantsir missile system →Pantsir-M/ME: Clarify use of Hermes missile, which is not a SAM
• 01:3401:34, 4 March 2017 diff hist −405 Hermes (missile) Resolve fractured English by reference to linked sites

25 February 2017

• 16:3716:37, 25 February 2017 diff hist +3 Glossary of RAF code names Replace 'backward' with more descriptive 'rear-facing'

24 February 2017

• 09:1009:10, 24 February 2017 diff hist +427 Bastard Operator From Hell →References: Add Media References section

14 February 2017

• 07:5507:55, 14 February 2017 diff hist +1 Pantsir missile system →Design: Correct spelling of Crotale and SeaRAM

4 February 2017

• 19:1719:17, 4 February 2017 diff hist −292 Tuo Chiang-class corvette Remove spurious claims Hsiung Feng III is nuclear capable and hypersonic - the Sun and Mirror are not authoritative defence sources Tag: references removed
• 19:1419:14, 4 February 2017 diff hist −71 Tuo Chiang-class corvette →Development: Remove spurious claims Hsiung Feng III is nuclear capable and hypersonic

11 December 2016

• 08:3408:34, 11 December 2016 diff hist −56 Pease pudding Remove claim pease pudding is sold as 'pea and ham soup' outside of the North East, that's a completely different dish.

30 November 2016

• 22:0622:06, 30 November 2016 diff hist +8 Talk:Simon Wessely →Balance: Improve wall of text format
• 22:0222:02, 30 November 2016 diff hist +5,692 Talk:Simon Wessely →Balance
• 19:5419:54, 30 November 2016 diff hist +1 Graded exercise therapy Move edit outside of tag - where it was meant to be.
• 19:4919:49, 30 November 2016 diff hist +1,381 N Talk:Graded exercise therapy Balance
• 19:3319:33, 30 November 2016 diff hist +12 Graded exercise therapy No edit summary
• 19:2919:29, 30 November 2016 diff hist +50 Graded exercise therapy Balance -The NHS + RACGPs are not 'All health organisations', while referring to a prominent patient group as 'some' downplays the opposition.

23 November 2016

• 02:5802:58, 23 November 2016 diff hist +1,912 Talk:Fly-by-wire →Airbus/Boeing differences: General comment + new section with notes on improvements to redundancy section
• 02:3402:34, 23 November 2016 diff hist +35 Fly-by-wire →Efficiency of Flight: Improve wording for clarity of understanding.
• 02:2502:25, 23 November 2016 diff hist +511 Fly-by-wire →Redundancy: Rewrite to be slightly less gosh-wow, break final paragraph into new Efficiency of Flight section as it has no relevance to redundancy

15 November 2016

• 20:2420:24, 15 November 2016 diff hist +318 Talk:Aktion T4 →Controversial move
• 20:2020:20, 15 November 2016 diff hist +1,107 Talk:Aktion T4 →Low Importance?

7 November 2016

• 22:0522:05, 7 November 2016 diff hist +569 Wheelchair →Manual self-propelled wheelchairs: Add missing header section and bump this down to the level it should be at

5 November 2016

• 21:0921:09, 5 November 2016 diff hist +409 Talk:Wheelchair →Complete Restructuring: Terminology notes
• 20:4920:49, 5 November 2016 diff hist +1,430 Talk:Wheelchair →Complete Restructuring: Does what it says on the tin
• 20:2820:28, 5 November 2016 diff hist +6,734 Wheelchair Complete structural rewrite, removing duplication and simplifying language use.
• 15:2315:23, 5 November 2016 diff hist +27 Wheelchair →History: General improvement to flow of text
• 15:1415:14, 5 November 2016 diff hist +1,248 Wheelchair →Buildings: General re-write to improve readability and emphasise increasingly common legal access requirements

1 November 2016

• 03:5903:59, 1 November 2016 diff hist +88 Fairey Swordfish →Production and further development: Removed incorrect link to AI Mk.X, radar in the Mk III was ASV Mk.XI

28 October 2016

• 07:5207:52, 28 October 2016 diff hist −1 The Forgotten Enemy →Plot summary: Correct plural of reindeer

24 October 2016

• 08:4308:43, 24 October 2016 diff hist +2,416 Talk:David Beatty, 1st Earl Beatty →"there seems to be something wrong with our bloody ships today": and Beatty's culpability

17 October 2016

• 21:1721:17, 17 October 2016 diff hist −62 No.101-class landing ship Quick pass to improve the flow of the English

15 October 2016

• 04:4604:46, 15 October 2016 diff hist +1 Caproni Ca.331 →Ca.331 C.N. (Ca.331B): Correct 'Night Fight' to 'Night Fighter'
• 04:4504:45, 15 October 2016 diff hist −1 Caproni Ca.331 →Variants: Correct 'assault trainer' to 'combat trainer', matching Italian wiki text
• 04:4404:44, 15 October 2016 diff hist −1 Caproni Ca.331 →Other variants: Correct 'assault trainer' to 'combat trainer', matching Italian wiki text

13 October 2016

• 00:3400:34, 13 October 2016 diff hist +1,014 Talk:Cars for wheelchair users →General Patching
• 00:2000:20, 13 October 2016 diff hist −1 Cars for wheelchair users →General Patching
• 00:2000:20, 13 October 2016 diff hist +266 Cars for wheelchair users →General Patching
• 00:0500:05, 13 October 2016 diff hist 0 Talk:Wheelchair accessible van Merger Proposal
• 00:0300:03, 13 October 2016 diff hist −1 Talk:Cars for wheelchair users →Merger proposal: Spelling correction
• 00:0100:01, 13 October 2016 diff hist +790 Talk:Cars for wheelchair users Merger Proposal