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21 October 2009

• 05:2605:26, 21 October 2009 diff hist +11 Fear of Flying (novel) On their first appearance, quotation marks are made like this: "quotation". Only for nested quotations are they made like this: "quotation mark". Then, the single ones are used for nesting on the in.
• 04:5704:57, 21 October 2009 diff hist +304 Erica Jong →Personal life
• 04:1304:13, 21 October 2009 diff hist +5 Beyond the Valley of the Dolls →Plot
• 04:1204:12, 21 October 2009 diff hist +21 Beyond the Valley of the Dolls →Plot
• 04:1104:11, 21 October 2009 diff hist +42 Beyond the Valley of the Dolls →Box office
• 04:1004:10, 21 October 2009 diff hist +76 Beyond the Valley of the Dolls →Production
• 04:0104:01, 21 October 2009 diff hist +473 Jacqueline Susann →Posthumous works: Referring to the subject of this article as "Jackie" is highly inappropriate for a work like this one. "Jacqueline" might be O.K., but "Ms. Susann" is far better.
• 03:4503:45, 21 October 2009 diff hist +388 Jacqueline Susann →Valley of the Dolls: It is really, really Inappropriate to abbreviate the title ''Valley of the Dolls'' whatsoever. It is not long, and doing so is merely a sign of severe laziness!
• 03:3403:34, 21 October 2009 diff hist +25 Jacqueline Susann →Her Career In Writing Novels
• 03:3203:32, 21 October 2009 diff hist −50 Jacqueline Susann →Her Career In Writing Novels
• 03:3103:31, 21 October 2009 diff hist +359 Jacqueline Susann →Her Career In Writing Novels
• 03:2703:27, 21 October 2009 diff hist +52 Jacqueline Susann →Fame
• 03:2403:24, 21 October 2009 diff hist −1 Jacqueline Susann →Fame
• 03:2303:23, 21 October 2009 diff hist +135 Jacqueline Susann →Writing career
• 03:1503:15, 21 October 2009 diff hist +14 Jacqueline Susann →Sexuality: The section title "Sexuality" indicates that the section deals with Susann's depiction of human sexuality in her NOVELS !
• 03:1303:13, 21 October 2009 diff hist +65 Jacqueline Susann →Sexuality: "None" is singular, and therefore, it goes with the verb "has" - and not "have".

20 October 2009

• 14:1014:10, 20 October 2009 diff hist +13 Ares (disambiguation) →Other uses
• 14:0914:09, 20 October 2009 diff hist 0 Ares (disambiguation) →Rocketry: It is not acceptable to use obscure acronyms like "SSTO" w/o explaining what they mean. On the other hand, common ones like ICBM and RCA are O.K.
• 14:0614:06, 20 October 2009 diff hist +1 Ares →Attendants
• 14:0514:05, 20 October 2009 diff hist +47 Ares →Attendants: Lots of omissions of {a, an, the} were here. Just as an example, Venus was not "goddess of love", but rather, "the goddess of love", and Ares was "the god of war".
• 06:2606:26, 20 October 2009 diff hist −4 Apopka, Florida →Education
• 06:2606:26, 20 October 2009 diff hist −23 Apopka, Florida →Points of interest
• 06:2506:25, 20 October 2009 diff hist 0 Apopka, Florida →History
• 06:2506:25, 20 October 2009 diff hist +4 Apopka, Florida →History
• 06:2306:23, 20 October 2009 diff hist +1 Apopka, Florida No edit summary
• 06:2306:23, 20 October 2009 diff hist +5 Apopka, Florida No edit summary
• 06:2206:22, 20 October 2009 diff hist −746 Apopka, Florida Referring to highways just as "41", etc., is purely spoken slang, and it is not standard English at all. Realize that the spoken language and the more formal written language can differ! Tag: reference list removal
• 01:1601:16, 20 October 2009 diff hist −43 Liberty County, Texas No edit summary
• 01:1301:13, 20 October 2009 diff hist −306 Liberty County, Texas It is Absolutely Unacceptable to use acronyms like "ISD" without explaining what they mean. Many, many readers will not understand them w/o a good deal of trouble. Tag: references removed
• 01:0001:00, 20 October 2009 diff hist −18 Cleveland, Texas →History: NOT "requesting that the town was named", but rather "requesting that the town be named".

19 October 2009

• 18:4218:42, 19 October 2009 diff hist −22 Dublin (disambiguation) No edit summary
• 18:3918:39, 19 October 2009 diff hist +11 Ireland →Air
• 18:3618:36, 19 October 2009 diff hist +23 Ireland →All-island institutions
• 18:3418:34, 19 October 2009 diff hist +143 Ireland →All-island institutions
• 18:3118:31, 19 October 2009 diff hist +768 Ireland No edit summary
• 18:1018:10, 19 October 2009 diff hist +80 Ireland →Transport: The word "transport" is a verb, and the proper noun form is "transportation".
• 18:0118:01, 19 October 2009 diff hist +2 Ireland →Sport
• 17:5817:58, 19 October 2009 diff hist +20 Ireland →Energy network: There is no such thing as an "energy network". It is a "power network". Signed - a M.S. electrical engineer from the United States.

18 October 2009

• 00:0800:08, 18 October 2009 diff hist +18 Resilience No edit summary
• 00:0700:07, 18 October 2009 diff hist +80 Materials science →History
• 00:0500:05, 18 October 2009 diff hist +33 Materials science →History
• 00:0300:03, 18 October 2009 diff hist +23 Resilience No edit summary
• 00:0200:02, 18 October 2009 diff hist +60 Resilience →Music

17 October 2009

• 23:5923:59, 17 October 2009 diff hist −60 Resilience →Community/Social Networks
• 23:5923:59, 17 October 2009 diff hist +247 Resilience No edit summary

16 October 2009

• 18:0518:05, 16 October 2009 diff hist +525 Talk:Concepción, Chile No edit summary
• 17:5517:55, 16 October 2009 diff hist −28 Concepción, Chile →History: Appositives like ,[Bernardo O'Higgins, have commas before and after, and I cannot understand the many cases in many articles that only have one comma.
• 04:2204:22, 16 October 2009 diff hist −23 Vanilla Sky →External links
• 04:2004:20, 16 October 2009 diff hist +68 Vanilla Sky →Music
• 04:1304:13, 16 October 2009 diff hist +48 Vanilla Sky →Filming