User contributions for Bret Sterling

19 October 2024

• 02:1402:14, 19 October 2024 diff hist −2 m Mark Halperin →Criticism: italicized "Morning Joe" as elsewhere
• 02:1202:12, 19 October 2024 diff hist +4 m Mark Halperin →Criticism: italicized "The Circus" as elsewhere

1 October 2024

• 04:5304:53, 1 October 2024 diff hist +44 The Shining (film) →Plot: Edited hedge maze sentence, as Jack doesn't follow a false trail after Danny fakes him out. There isn't any trail forward at that point.

25 September 2024

• 23:3023:30, 25 September 2024 diff hist +1 You Send Me →Background: deleted red link since even if some info on the brothers is available, it probably isn't sufficient for an article current
• 23:1123:11, 25 September 2024 diff hist +33 Sam Cooke →Crossover pop success: lowercased "civil rights movement" + several minor
• 16:1816:18, 25 September 2024 diff hist −237 Huey "Piano" Smith hyphens > dashes; deleted duplicate paragraph current
• 16:0816:08, 25 September 2024 diff hist −4 m Huey "Piano" Smith →Post-Ace years: changed tense since he's passed on

21 September 2024

• 03:3203:32, 21 September 2024 diff hist +3 Avatar: The Way of Water →Plot: squads > squad; resulting in many Tulkun casualties > which magnified the bloodshed (reef boys were also killed)

20 September 2024

• 01:0301:03, 20 September 2024 diff hist −3 m Avatar (2009 film) →Plot: two minor

15 September 2024

• 23:2123:21, 15 September 2024 diff hist 0 m Ron Unz →Relation to anti-Semitism, Holocaust denial, homosexuality research, etc.: Harvard board of overseers > Harvard Board of Overseers; quotes 1x
• 15:1715:17, 15 September 2024 diff hist +844 Talk:I Shall Be Free →Never performed in concert, or never performed in public at all?: new section current Tag: New topic

14 September 2024

• 18:2318:23, 14 September 2024 diff hist 0 m Dick Biondi →1960s–1970s: Knock Knock > Knock-Knock – per label; see https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wR13VjnMUNY current

13 September 2024

• 15:0315:03, 13 September 2024 diff hist −402 Jack and the Beanstalk →Story: corrected inconsistent tenses and misleading formatting (text is not quoted), deleted superfluous summary paragraph mentioning goose rather than hen

10 September 2024

• 13:3913:39, 10 September 2024 diff hist +536 Talk:Stars (disambiguation) →Duplication with {{Srt}}: new section current Tag: New topic

31 August 2024

• 14:4314:43, 31 August 2024 diff hist −1 m Voice of America →Cold War: the Voice of American > the Voice of America; per source

30 August 2024

• 13:5313:53, 30 August 2024 diff hist −3 Every Beat of My Heart (Gladys Knight & the Pips song) →The Pips version: eleven > ten #1 R&B hits per Pips discography current

28 August 2024

• 19:2119:21, 28 August 2024 diff hist +1 m Rope-a-dope →Technique: boxers > boxer's

25 August 2024

• 20:3020:30, 25 August 2024 diff hist −307 Gerald McBoing-Boing deleted last "Original recording" paragraph because it was repeated under "Television"; slightly altered the paragraph there

24 August 2024

• 15:0915:09, 24 August 2024 diff hist −4 m La Grande, Oregon →Education: deleted link; not sure an article on the La Grande School District is necessary

23 August 2024

• 15:3115:31, 23 August 2024 diff hist +1,369 Talk:Harlem Shuffle →Cover opening single?: new section Tag: New topic
• 01:3201:32, 23 August 2024 diff hist −189 Harlem Shuffle →The Rolling Stones version: deleted quoted first lines, as they're not unique to the Stones version as implied

18 August 2024

• 03:3603:36, 18 August 2024 diff hist +210 I Got You Babe →Live performances: added "following his death in a skiing accident in 1998" and reference
• 03:3203:32, 18 August 2024 diff hist 0 m Sonny Bono 1997 > 1998
• 03:2603:26, 18 August 2024 diff hist +25 I Got You Babe →Sonny & Cher version: wanted to add a reference to the correction later in the article, and this seemed preferable to "[sic – see below]".

16 August 2024

• 00:2300:23, 16 August 2024 diff hist −4 Artificial general intelligence →Terminology: deleted misleading and out-of-place virtuoso link

9 August 2024

• 00:4700:47, 9 August 2024 diff hist −68 Alice Brock →First restaurant: Existing interviews have made no mention of any remarriages or children after her divorce from Ray Brock;{{citation needed|date=December 2016}} > There are no known remarriages or children after her divorce from Ray Brock; current

8 August 2024

• 20:1320:13, 8 August 2024 diff hist −6 Alice Brock removed red link at Dream Away Lodge as it seems doubtful that it rates an article; changed a few tenses, e.g. regarding place of residence in 2022; updated year on Apple Tree Inn

5 August 2024

• 20:4420:44, 5 August 2024 diff hist −10 Finlandia removed "Finnish" link, which seemed superfluous and rather insulting, to both the country and the reader current

8 July 2024

• 17:2517:25, 8 July 2024 diff hist 0 Talk:Keir Starmer →Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 5 July 2024: corrected date of request
• 17:2417:24, 8 July 2024 diff hist +367 Talk:Keir Starmer proposal to change "since 2024" to "following elections in 2024"
• 02:3502:35, 8 July 2024 diff hist +265 Talk:Keir Starmer →since 2024?: Reply Tag: Reply

6 July 2024

• 14:4114:41, 6 July 2024 diff hist +572 Talk:Keir Starmer →since 2024?: new section Tag: New topic

3 July 2024

• 01:1001:10, 3 July 2024 diff hist −4 David Bowie discography per the label (https://www.bowie-singles.com/Early/Youve_Got_A_Habit_Of_Leaving_files/youvegot_Issue.jpg); it was "Davy Jones & The Lower Third" ("davy jones & the lower 3rd" on the sleeve) only on a reissue (https://i0.wp.com/turnupthevolume.blog/wp-content/uploads/2020/08/davy-1.jpg, /media/wikipedia/en/8/8d/ManishBoysLowerThird.jpg)

28 June 2024

• 20:4520:45, 28 June 2024 diff hist +946 User talk:StartGrammarTime →Talk page discussion for minor change which is correct: new section Tag: New topic
• 20:0620:06, 28 June 2024 diff hist +21 The Avengers (2012 film) →Plot: "killing" > "mortally wounded" with addition of "subsequent"; per discussion
• 20:0020:00, 28 June 2024 diff hist +121 Talk:The Avengers (2012 film) →"killing" vs. "mortally wounding": Reply Tag: Reply
• 15:5215:52, 28 June 2024 diff hist +608 Talk:The Avengers (2012 film) →"killing" vs. "mortally wounding": replied to adamstom97's concern, proposing addition of "subsequent"

26 June 2024

• 01:4701:47, 26 June 2024 diff hist +1,440 Talk:The Avengers (2012 film) →"killing" vs. "mortally wounding": new section Tag: New topic
• 00:5900:59, 26 June 2024 diff hist +600 Wikipedia:Teahouse →Talk page discussion for minor change which is correct: Reply Tag: Reply

25 June 2024

• 19:2619:26, 25 June 2024 diff hist +2,374 Wikipedia:Teahouse →Talk page discussion for minor change which is correct: new section

24 June 2024

• 01:5701:57, 24 June 2024 diff hist +29 Unchain My Heart (song) The quote was inaccurate and the sentence following seemed extraneous. Tried to fix it. current

23 June 2024

• 14:2114:21, 23 June 2024 diff hist +10 The Avengers (2012 film) Undid revision 1230531185 by Adamstom.97 (talk). Yes, but not before Loki escapes. It could imaginably be something like "dealing a death blow to", but "mortally wounding" is correct and more so than "killing". That the death occurred is immediately confirmed in the sentence following. Tags: Undo Reverted
• 02:3402:34, 23 June 2024 diff hist +10 The Avengers (2012 film) →Plot: killing > mortally wounding (Coulson is still alive when Loki escapes) Tag: Reverted

19 June 2024

• 01:4701:47, 19 June 2024 diff hist +1 m Don't Let the Sun Catch You Crying slightly revised punctuation current
• 01:4101:41, 19 June 2024 diff hist −143 Don't Let the Sun Catch You Cryin' →Other recordings: various minor current
• 01:3001:30, 19 June 2024 diff hist −1 Ray Charles brushed up quotation marks (the period is part of the lottery slogan – I checked)
• 01:1701:17, 19 June 2024 diff hist −1 Ray Charles made " Charles' " consistent except in Obama quote; moved reference to end of sentence for legibility

18 June 2024

• 02:3202:32, 18 June 2024 diff hist −8 Ray (film) →Plot: experiment with his music > develop his music – it seems dubious to characterize Charles' "Georgia on My Mind" as experimental
• 01:4001:40, 18 June 2024 diff hist +1 Ray (film) →Production: The source says twice: "he and Anschutz had such bitter fights over the PG-13 dictum that he twice walked off the project." I don't see where "five times" could have come from.
• 01:0501:05, 18 June 2024 diff hist +319 Ray (film) →Plot: added short paragraph mainly in order to include "Night Time Is the Right Time"