User contributions for Faff296

15 January 2024

• 05:2605:26, 15 January 2024 diff hist +378 Talk:Koori →Koorie not an Aust-wide term: Reply Tag: Reply

25 September 2023

• 01:1701:17, 25 September 2023 diff hist +10 Martini (cocktail) →False variations: came up with a less judgemental title
• 01:1501:15, 25 September 2023 diff hist +6 Martini (cocktail) →False variations: again, removed judgemental language.
• 01:1401:14, 25 September 2023 diff hist −42 Martini (cocktail) →False variations: Added some historical context and removed some of the judgemental language here. It would be nice to find a less judgemental name for this section. Regardless of the connection to the original, it is not outrageous or unprecedented to name a category of cocktail after the glass in which it is served.

9 April 2023

• 01:0201:02, 9 April 2023 diff hist +414 m Furphy Elaborated on why the term is connected to the water tank name, framed the alternative derivation offered.

5 March 2023

• 00:3900:39, 5 March 2023 diff hist +2 m Meaghan Morris →Edited Books: fixed up some punctuation
• 00:2500:25, 5 March 2023 diff hist +102 Meaghan Morris →Books: Updated
• 00:2300:23, 5 March 2023 diff hist +332 Meaghan Morris →Edited Books: Updated to include the two collections referred to in the article and one other update.
• 00:1700:17, 5 March 2023 diff hist +279 Meaghan Morris →Life: Elaboration on Morris' academic career based on her CV, still very inadequate relative to her importance as an intellectual figure. A start.

28 October 2022

• 23:2523:25, 28 October 2022 diff hist +46 Australian magpie →Taxonomy: added "nomenclature" to section title as this is major part + plus first described "in scientific literature" to distinguish from pre-settlement descriptions

15 February 2022

• 01:4201:42, 15 February 2022 diff hist −146 Whitney Cummings Added some important "hats" to the first line (eg. writer, producer) and removed the second line, which mostly repeated the first.

26 December 2021

• 03:4303:43, 26 December 2021 diff hist +84 Soup joumou Added that soup joumou was added to UNESCO Intangible Cultural Heritage List in 2021
• 03:3903:39, 26 December 2021 diff hist −3 m Soup joumou grammar fix ("which added" -> "which is added") and clarity fix ("some Haitians often add..."->"some Haitians add..."

21 August 2021

• 04:1004:10, 21 August 2021 diff hist −4 m Alice Miller (psychologist) →Life: removed italicisation that didn't seem to serve any purpose.

1 March 2021

• 07:4607:46, 1 March 2021 diff hist +37 Kingston Foreshore Redevelopment Correcting picture

28 February 2021

• 04:5804:58, 28 February 2021 diff hist +47 Kingston Foreshore Redevelopment Replace incorrect image of Barton apartment development with image of the Kingston Foreshore development. Tag: Reverted

26 January 2021

• 01:3101:31, 26 January 2021 diff hist +5 m The Bostonians →Critical evaluation: reorganised sentence
• 00:1100:11, 26 January 2021 diff hist +13 The Bostonians →Critical evaluation: inserted authoritative source for claim that James' novel was inspired by a Daudet novel.

25 January 2021

• 22:5122:51, 25 January 2021 diff hist +17 The Bostonians →Critical evaluation: changed "based on to "draw inspiration from". The first reference is to Brittanica, which says "inspired by", the second reference seems to be more or less a lift from Brittanica but changes the wording to "based on". "Based on" is a strong claim and not really elaborated here or much elsewhere. Tempted to delete it all together, but it's an interesting lead so have just toned it down.
• 22:3322:33, 25 January 2021 diff hist −37 m The Bostonians →Critical evaluation: replacement of unnecessarily vague term "the western side of the Atlantic" with "north America".
• 22:3222:32, 25 January 2021 diff hist +48 m Elizabeth Peabody Clarification of vague reference to Buddhist translation

29 August 2020

• 05:3305:33, 29 August 2020 diff hist +4 Fruit preserves →Jelly
• 05:3205:32, 29 August 2020 diff hist −2,018 Fruit preserves major clean up: more clarity in definition, removal of repetitions, reorganisation (eg. moving info on Canadian legislation to the legislation section)
• 04:2804:28, 29 August 2020 diff hist +19 Fruit preserves No edit summary
• 04:2604:26, 29 August 2020 diff hist −12 Fruit preserves simplified first sentence, removed reference to vegetables given the topic is fruit preserves
• 01:2501:25, 29 August 2020 diff hist +270 Marmalade More info on what distinguishes a marmalade from a jam or a jelly

16 June 2020

• 05:1705:17, 16 June 2020 diff hist 0 m Miles Franklin →Life and career: corrected link to home location

12 April 2020

• 01:0901:09, 12 April 2020 diff hist −59 Sallie-Anne Huckstepp Removed "heroin addict" from first sentence listing her "occupations". "Heroin addict" is not an occupation.

23 February 2020

• 22:4022:40, 23 February 2020 diff hist −9 Elizabeth Smart (Canadian author) →Single mother and writer: removed "renowned" from "renowned actor" - very subjective/localised judgement

21 February 2020

• 02:3602:36, 21 February 2020 diff hist +231 Marcel Danesi →Publications: Added publicly available reference
• 00:5000:50, 21 February 2020 diff hist −9 m Marcel Danesi →Publications: Reordered listing of reviews. No content changes.

25 January 2020

• 23:5723:57, 25 January 2020 diff hist −127 How to Cook and Eat in Chinese Removing claims her husband did not write this book (see Talk page)
• 23:4523:45, 25 January 2020 diff hist +1,051 Talk:How to Cook and Eat in Chinese →Removing claims that she did not write this book: new section
• 23:1523:15, 25 January 2020 diff hist −26 Buwei Yang Chao I have adjusted the claim that she did not write the book so that it is clear that it is a claim only - can't find any evidence in the source except for the writer's conviction that it is "obvious".
• 23:1123:11, 25 January 2020 diff hist +34 Buwei Yang Chao Even the referred author who claims she did not write this book concedes she and her husband worked these out together, so if he says that, we can say at least this much.
• 23:0323:03, 25 January 2020 diff hist −9 m Buwei Yang Chao Rearranged first sentence so the fact she was married to someone isn't so prominently placed and changed "writer of recipes" to "writer".

14 January 2020

• 11:0411:04, 14 January 2020 diff hist +39 The Baphomet added name of translators Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

23 December 2019

• 00:2800:28, 23 December 2019 diff hist −6 Jean Galia Corrected claim that Galia described the game as "jeu à treize" ("thirteens game"). This name was imposed in the post-war period, nit before.

6 December 2019

• 13:1313:13, 6 December 2019 diff hist +4 m Farewell, My Love →Cast

4 December 2019

• 23:5423:54, 4 December 2019 diff hist +14 m Hippolyte Taine →Early years: corrected link and modified language register ("turned to literature" rather than "got into literature")
• 23:5023:50, 4 December 2019 diff hist +48 m Hippolyte Taine →Early years: corrected links, spelling mistakes
• 23:4423:44, 4 December 2019 diff hist +9 m Francisque Sarcey →Vegetarianism: clarification that his diet would be called pescatarianism now (rather than in his time)

20 November 2019

• 00:4000:40, 20 November 2019 diff hist −37 S.A. (corporation) removed comment that "société" "literally" means "society". "Société" is the French word for company. The fact that it is also the French word for "society" doesn't mean its literal meaning is "society".

16 November 2019

• 13:4413:44, 16 November 2019 diff hist −7 Merahi metua no Tehamana changed “native wife” to “wife” Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

11 November 2019

• 06:3306:33, 11 November 2019 diff hist +1 Paranoid (Kanye West song) changed "lady" to "woman" and corrected spelling mistake

3 November 2019

• 23:2123:21, 3 November 2019 diff hist +181 Professional sports →Resistance to professionalism: Removed and rewrote material that was clearly not NPOV, non-sequitur-ish and "supported" by inadequate references. More work is needed.

27 September 2019

• 23:4523:45, 27 September 2019 diff hist +4 m Canberra Raiders added "the"
• 23:4423:44, 27 September 2019 diff hist −18 m Canberra Raiders toned down/clarified language - "play" for the national team instead of "don the green and gold for" the national team.

15 September 2019

• 12:2712:27, 15 September 2019 diff hist +564 Talk:Line-out (rugby union) No edit summary
• 12:2112:21, 15 September 2019 diff hist +179 Line-out (rugby union) The article does not say WHAT the line-out is, literally, ie how it works - ie players from each team line up etc. I have started this but am not knowledgeable enough to finish it.