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9 January 2025
- 13:0013:00, 9 January 2025 diff hist −117 Artificial gravity Remove outdated claim that's contradicted by the very next sentence. Also remove uncited "this result has not been replicated." First, "this result" refers to a replication of an earlier experiment. So there are two positive results, and they both replicate each other. But second, it's obvious from the lack of any subsequent text that no further results are available as far as we know. And stating it without a source doesn't rule out the possibility that additional results were just overlooked. current Tag: Visual edit
- 12:5112:51, 9 January 2025 diff hist +386 Gravitational shielding →Minority views: Add a passage from Artificial gravity that indicates this research actually has been replicated at least once. Well, "replication" is a strong word for a paper that found an effect orders of magnitude smaller than the original research. But still, it's not true that nobody has performed any independent experiments. current Tag: Visual edit
- 02:0602:06, 9 January 2025 diff hist −45 Western Hemisphere Institute for Security Cooperation →School of the Americas: Remove excessive quotation marks and an editorial tone that makes them seem like "scare quotes" used to convey a sense of incredulity or doubt as to the reality of the phrase in quotes. That type of thing is broadly inappropriate in an encyclopedia, but especially when it's not made clear who is being quoted and why their incredulity is relevant, and especially in this case as the words "communist" and "terrorist" refer to real things, not hoaxes or mere rhetoric. current Tag: Visual edit
8 January 2025
- 23:2723:27, 8 January 2025 diff hist +3,991 Talk:Fried chicken →Article contradicts itself and the Karaage article?: new section current Tag: New topic
- 23:0923:09, 8 January 2025 diff hist +1,855 Fritter →Europe: Add peixinhos da horta current Tag: Visual edit
7 January 2025
- 14:3014:30, 7 January 2025 diff hist −450 Bullet →History: remove material that has no citation and seems to not be about bullets (slingshots don't fire bullets, and the lead of this article says a bullet is "shot from a gun barrel") Tags: Reverted Visual edit
6 January 2025
- 11:1011:10, 6 January 2025 diff hist +1,142 Vin Diesel →Personal life: More details and an update on the sexual battery suit. current Tag: Visual edit
3 January 2025
- 05:3805:38, 3 January 2025 diff hist +37 Armour-piercing fin-stabilized discarding sabot →History: Citation needed tag current Tag: Visual edit
- 05:3405:34, 3 January 2025 diff hist −26 High-explosive squash head →Users: fix a link current Tag: Visual edit
30 December 2024
- 09:2309:23, 30 December 2024 diff hist −26 Air-independent propulsion →Stirling cycle engines: remove link to an unrelated submarine. there is no article on this subject as far as I can tell. Tag: Visual edit
28 December 2024
- 17:1917:19, 28 December 2024 diff hist +569 Religion of Black Americans →Islam: Add correct data about the percent of enslaved Africans who were Muslims and the influence they had on Black American culture. current Tag: Visual edit
- 16:5316:53, 28 December 2024 diff hist +8 Religion of Black Americans →Colonial era: Add a date to the pie chart for the data. According to the source, the data were collected in 2007. Tag: Visual edit
13 December 2024
- 15:3115:31, 13 December 2024 diff hist +248 Eye for an eye →In Hebrew law: Inline tags. Tag: Visual edit
12 December 2024
- 14:2314:23, 12 December 2024 diff hist +252 Talk:Killing of Jordan Neely →Requested move 9 December 2024 Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 14:2014:20, 12 December 2024 diff hist +2,861 Talk:Killing of Jordan Neely →Requested move 9 December 2024 Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 14:0814:08, 12 December 2024 diff hist +2,609 Talk:Killing of Jordan Neely →Death, not killing ...: Reply Tag: Reply
11 December 2024
- 14:3414:34, 11 December 2024 diff hist +39 National Popular Vote Interstate Compact →State power relative to population: improper synthesis tag Tag: Visual edit
3 December 2024
- 12:1412:14, 3 December 2024 diff hist +82 Codon usage bias →Mutation-selection-drift balance model: Clarification needed tag. current Tag: Visual edit
30 November 2024
- 11:0411:04, 30 November 2024 diff hist +37 Gacha game →Model: Many people consider this practice manipulative, but in this context it seems to be inferring an evil motive for a gameplay feature that is, on the surface, benign or at least innocuous. It's not neutral for wikipedia, in its own voice, to read the developers' minds and attribute evil intent underlying such an action. Note that I'm not denying that these companies use psychological manipulation to harm vulnerable players. But calling it "predatory gifting" without proof... Tag: Visual edit
- 10:4710:47, 30 November 2024 diff hist +41 Gashapon →Description: Unreliable source tag. Most of this text seems fine, but specifically the claims about price and quality are a little dubious coming from a gacha fan blog. current Tag: Visual edit
28 November 2024
- 19:5319:53, 28 November 2024 diff hist +252 Markarian 1018 Clarification needed tag. Tag: Visual edit
27 November 2024
- 12:3512:35, 27 November 2024 diff hist +22 ArmaLite Update a link current Tag: Visual edit
23 November 2024
- 07:2407:24, 23 November 2024 diff hist +44 Talk:International Criminal Court →Ecocide would shift priorities toward the Global North?: add a link Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 07:1707:17, 23 November 2024 diff hist +515 International Criminal Court →Jurisdiction over corporations: Add failed verification tag. See Talk:International Criminal Court#Ecocide would shift priorities toward the Global North? for discussion. Tag: Visual edit
- 07:1607:16, 23 November 2024 diff hist +10,130 Talk:International Criminal Court →Ecocide would shift priorities toward the Global North?: new section Tag: New topic
- 05:2405:24, 23 November 2024 diff hist +108 International Criminal Court →Principle of complementarity: Clarification needed tag. An "influential paper" is mentioned as a decisive moment raising a "thorny issue," but it is never explained what the paper was about, what its influence was, or who or what was influenced by it. Tag: Visual edit
- 05:2105:21, 23 November 2024 diff hist +53 International Criminal Court →Principle of complementarity: Add a reminder of what the principle of complementarity is. It is mentioned earlier in the article, but that is much earlier, with no discussion in between, and this is a very large article users are unlikely to read in its entirety. Tag: Visual edit
- 05:1705:17, 23 November 2024 diff hist +50 International Criminal Court →Unintentional consequences: Fix a sentence that seemed to say the opposite of what it was quoting ("It has also been argued that justice is a means to peace" but the following quote says there is "little evidence of justice as a means to peace") Tag: Visual edit
- 05:0105:01, 23 November 2024 diff hist +146 International Criminal Court →Israel: Clarify that the Guardian article is based on anymous sources. It previously was ambiguous and could be read as implying that Bensouda herself was the source of the accusations. Tag: Visual edit
- 03:2103:21, 23 November 2024 diff hist +2,498 Attempted assassination of Donald Trump in Pennsylvania →Photographs: Add some reporting about the Mills photograph of the bullet flying past Trump's head. Tag: Visual edit
- 02:4302:43, 23 November 2024 diff hist 0 Attempted assassination of Donald Trump in Pennsylvania →Criticism of security arrangements: Replace "view of sight" with "line of sight", which I think is what was meant. "line of sight" is a firearms term of art, while "view of sight" sounds redundant or maybe is mixing up "clear line of sight" with "clear view of Trump" Tag: Visual edit
- 02:3902:39, 23 November 2024 diff hist +34 Attempted assassination of Donald Trump in Pennsylvania →Motive: Add a reference and an as-of date for the statement that "officials maintain that no confirmed motive has been determined and remains under investigation," and rephrase it to specify the officials in question. Tag: Visual edit
- 02:3502:35, 23 November 2024 diff hist +1,194 Attempted assassination of Donald Trump in Pennsylvania →Motive: Add reporting that Crooks' rifle was semi-automatic. The Javed Ali statement is a bit silly, because Crooks did not have the capability to "empty the magazine on fully automatic," as his rifle was semi-automatic (like most AR-15s). He had no way of obtaining a full-auto rifle either, as fully automatic firearms are illegal in the US without a rare special license. Also add the latest report about the task force and details about Crooks' encrypted membership on European platforms. Tag: Visual edit
19 November 2024
- 06:4006:40, 19 November 2024 diff hist +174 Milky Way →Age and cosmological history: contradictory age estimate. we should use the revised estimates from the page on HD 140283, I'd add them but I can't figure out how to copy the references from that page. they are borked Tag: Visual edit
17 November 2024
- 09:1609:16, 17 November 2024 diff hist +13 Right-wing politics →Populism: fix a typo ("rather than" -> "than") and change "ordinary" to "other". the previous language implies that BJP supporters are not "ordinary Indian citizens," which is stigmatizing and suspect in any case, given BJP's popularity in India. Tag: Visual edit
- 08:4508:45, 17 November 2024 diff hist +20 Right-wing politics →Anti-communism: Rephrase this to clarify that it's talking about what communists originally meant by "right-wing." It previously said "the original use of the term," which is confusing since the term "right-wing" long predates communism. It was used to refer to France's pro-aristocratic faction in the aftermath of the French Revolution. They were not opposed to communism (since it did not exist yet) but to egalitarianism and the abolition of customs. Tag: Visual edit
- 08:3108:31, 17 November 2024 diff hist −91 Biology and political orientation Remove claim about the anterior cingulate cortex from the lead. It was only found in one study, and there is now a much larger, preregistered study on this (see Brain studies below) that replicated other findings but not this one. I considered trying to add this nuance and use more cautious language ("one study found x, but another did not" rather than just "x"), but that's not really what the lead is for. Basically if the lead mentions specific examples, it should focus on solid ones. Tag: Visual edit
- 07:4607:46, 17 November 2024 diff hist +272 Political spectrum →Other proposed dimensions: Clarification needed. I think two things are being conflated here. Pacifism/dove relates to one's willingness to participate in war or approval of one's nation waging war, not necessarily how one feels about imposing political values. Plenty of politicians called hawkish oppose the use of force to impose political values. And one may use violence to achieve one's political ends without advocating for war or aggressive foreign policy. Like the Black Panthers. current Tag: Visual edit
- 07:3607:36, 17 November 2024 diff hist +168 Political spectrum →Other proposed dimensions: Add tags. Most of these bullets lack references, and one of them contains a strange claim that the urban vs. rural axis is no longer prominent in the United States, which pretty much any adult living in the US can tell you is not true. Tag: Visual edit
- 07:0107:01, 17 November 2024 diff hist +9 Political spectrum →Leonard W. Ferguson: Fix a link that was leading from the text "religionism" (in the sense of belief in God or adherence to religion) to the article on Religious discrimination. That redirect is for an unrelated neologism, which constructs "religionism" by analogy to "racism" rather than by analogy to "nationalism", so it's misleading here. Tag: Visual edit
- 06:5806:58, 17 November 2024 diff hist −2,463 Political spectrum →Historical origin of the terms: Remove unreferenced material, looks like synthesis, that is not really related to the historical origin of the terms (the section it was in). Someone could add it back in a different section I guess, but 3 large paragraphs with no citations shouldn't be added in the first place. Tag: Visual edit
- 00:5500:55, 17 November 2024 diff hist +11 Nayib Bukele →Political views: this is the first reference to Donald Trump in the article, but it only refers to "Trump" - most people probably know what that means, but it's still proper to use the full name and link in the first reference, before switching to abbreviated forms. there might have previously been a complete reference to Donald Trump before this passage, and it just got removed at some point. Tag: Visual edit
16 November 2024
- 00:0000:00, 16 November 2024 diff hist +106 Thunderbolt →In religion and mythology: Clarification needed tag. current Tag: Visual edit
12 November 2024
- 22:4122:41, 12 November 2024 diff hist +38 Jesusland map citation needed - it seems more like synthesis, since the cited articles don't really say this about the implications or the fundamentalism thing. Tag: Visual edit
4 November 2024
- 07:4207:42, 4 November 2024 diff hist −175 Capernaum →4th-century transformation: Remove dubious tags littered around the page with the discuss links containing sarcastic commentary instead of valid links to sections on the talk page. One calls something "un-Christian." Another doubts that walls can be made of plaster, but plaster is the main component of some types of wall. What is confusing is that later it says the stone walls were plastered, so add a clarification needed tag. Replace inline tags with an unreferenced section tag. Tag: Visual edit
3 November 2024
- 17:0117:01, 3 November 2024 diff hist −247 Burckle Crater →Impact event and megatsunami hypothesis: This is a bad example. The Sirente crater article doesn't indicate any consensus that it's a sheep watering hole, and leaves the reader with the impression that many geologists think it probably is an impact crater. If we're going to say looking for impact craters has "misled" investigators in the past, the examples should be clear, undisputed examples of misidentifications, not contemporary debates. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 16:5716:57, 3 November 2024 diff hist −193 Sirente crater Remove false statement that no other theories have been proposed. current Tag: Visual edit
- 14:1414:14, 3 November 2024 diff hist +1,997 Numeral system →Other historical numeral systems using digits: Elaborate and add sources on counting rods and Chinese numerals. Add inline tags for unreferenced content. Replace a broken section link with a link to the subject's full article. Tag: Visual edit
2 November 2024
- 23:3223:32, 2 November 2024 diff hist +103 Access journalism page needed tag. Tag: Visual edit
- 23:2123:21, 2 November 2024 diff hist −981 Vegetius →Epitoma rei militaris: Remove uncited editorial current Tag: Visual edit