User contributions for JChurchman-Davies

18 February 2022

• 18:2818:28, 18 February 2022 diff hist −1 m Adrian Lyne Minor grammatical errors fixed.

24 September 2021

• 04:0104:01, 24 September 2021 diff hist +3 m Two Guns, Arizona →Early history: improved grammar

17 June 2021

• 10:3610:36, 17 June 2021 diff hist +16 m Switched reluctance motor Minor editing change - wording of sentence was incorrect.

6 April 2021

• 14:4914:49, 6 April 2021 diff hist +664 Collision avoidance system →Automobile manufacturers
• 14:3314:33, 6 April 2021 diff hist +354 Collision avoidance system →Automobile manufacturers: added Jaguar Land Rover

12 June 2019

• 07:3707:37, 12 June 2019 diff hist +16 m Phosphine Modified language slightly to make meaning clearer

6 August 2018

• 08:4608:46, 6 August 2018 diff hist 0 m Mary Carlisle corrected word

8 May 2018

• 08:4108:41, 8 May 2018 diff hist +1 m Ingenium engine family corrected incorrect singular
• 08:4008:40, 8 May 2018 diff hist +1 m Ingenium engine family typo - replaced in correct singular with correct plural

6 May 2018

• 07:5407:54, 6 May 2018 diff hist 0 m King Abdullah Petroleum Studies and Research Center →Campus: corrected spelling - two of many that need to be done.

16 April 2018

• 11:4911:49, 16 April 2018 diff hist −1 m Clive Dunn →Death: replaced "Which" with correct objective pronoun.

7 October 2017

• 11:0911:09, 7 October 2017 diff hist +21 Warship →Decline of Battleships: Bismark was not just "heavily damaged". This implies that it survived. The vessel was heavily damaged to the point of being inoperative, then sunk/scuttled.

17 August 2017

• 07:4607:46, 17 August 2017 diff hist +2 m Honda Civic (ninth generation) →Civic Type R (2013): Improved language at start of sentence.
• 07:4207:42, 17 August 2017 diff hist −1 m Honda Civic (ninth generation) Corrected spelling of "Dencember"

7 August 2017

• 13:2813:28, 7 August 2017 diff hist +11 m Fat Slags (film) added word to improve sense.
• 05:5305:53, 7 August 2017 diff hist −1 m Helen Alexander (businesswoman) →Career: corrected tense

30 July 2017

• 10:4610:46, 30 July 2017 diff hist +1 m MUSS (countermeasure) →History: typo corrected

25 July 2017

• 11:2611:26, 25 July 2017 diff hist +573 Rolls-Royce Trent 1000 →Trent 1000 TEN: Flagged factual error in article. This needs checking and changing.
• 10:5910:59, 25 July 2017 diff hist +1 m Rolls-Royce Trent 1000 →Trent 1000 TEN: corrected minor typos
• 10:4610:46, 25 July 2017 diff hist +4 m Turbine blade →Cooling effusion: Added missing definite article.
• 10:4610:46, 25 July 2017 diff hist +2 m Turbine blade →Transpiration cooling: Improved language

19 July 2017

• 11:4111:41, 19 July 2017 diff hist 0 m Sygic →Overview: changed "Minimal" to more correct "Minimum"

16 July 2017

• 05:0005:00, 16 July 2017 diff hist 0 m Reconquista →Pepin the Younger and Charlemagne: grammatical correction

12 July 2017

• 12:5612:56, 12 July 2017 diff hist +66 m Flywheel energy storage →Comparison to electric batteries: corrected inconsistent use of plurals and clarified explanations.

6 July 2017

• 12:3912:39, 6 July 2017 diff hist +1 m 2017 Ukraine ransomware attacks →Attribution: corrected "by" to "buy"

3 July 2017

• 07:2507:25, 3 July 2017 diff hist −4 m Heinkel He 111 operational history →Battle of Britain: removed misleading "But"
• 07:0807:08, 3 July 2017 diff hist +4 m Derek Mills-Roberts →Early life: added definite article as is customary for the University of Oxford.

19 June 2017

• 13:1813:18, 19 June 2017 diff hist +1 m Dyson (company) →Cheating allegations regarding energy requirements: corrected language

14 June 2017

• 12:4912:49, 14 June 2017 diff hist +7 m Aluminium-ion battery →Research: Improved language
• 12:4512:45, 14 June 2017 diff hist +37 m Lithium-ion battery →Research: Changed language to improve clarity.
• 08:5808:58, 14 June 2017 diff hist 0 m Pumpable ice technology →Indirect pumpable ice technology: corrected typos

13 June 2017

• 13:0313:03, 13 June 2017 diff hist −1 m The Cramps →1980s: removed incorrect hyphenation

16 May 2017

• 14:3914:39, 16 May 2017 diff hist +12 m M2 Browning →Commonwealth and other forces: finessed the language

15 May 2017

• 13:1413:14, 15 May 2017 diff hist +1 m Boron →Occurrence: further correction of English.
• 13:1313:13, 15 May 2017 diff hist +11 m Boron →Occurrence: corrected English

14 May 2017

• 11:5811:58, 14 May 2017 diff hist +4 SS Thistlegorm →Construction: Altered engine power in text (which was extremely low) to match value in the data table (which is of appropriate magnitude for a large vessel)

13 May 2017

• 09:1109:11, 13 May 2017 diff hist +73 m Robert Craufurd →Family life: added detail that Mary was granddaughter of Capability Brown.

10 May 2017

• 05:0205:02, 10 May 2017 diff hist +1 m A.I. Artificial Intelligence →Plot: "Of" changed to correct "Off"

9 May 2017

• 11:1311:13, 9 May 2017 diff hist +9 m Cost of electricity by source →Sheikh Mohammed Bin Rashid solar farm (2016): Corrected word order, changed decimal delimiter to Dubai original source standard form ("." rather than ","), hyphenated "kilowatt-hour"

28 March 2017

• 11:2711:27, 28 March 2017 diff hist +8 m Multi-junction solar cell →Multi-junction cells: Altered language to improve grammar and flow of the sentence.
• 09:0909:09, 28 March 2017 diff hist +11 m Crystalline silicon →HIT solar cell: Altered minor aspects of language to improve the flow and sense

18 October 2016

• 16:0816:08, 18 October 2016 diff hist +1 m Kempton Park Steam Engines →Media: missing "S" in "engine"(s)

17 October 2016

• 13:4413:44, 17 October 2016 diff hist +2 Alfred Russel Wallace →Early life: Corrected "ate some income generating property" to sensible form - mischievious edit?

8 September 2016

• 08:1208:12, 8 September 2016 diff hist +31 m Ferguson plc smartened up link to CEO's name
• 08:0508:05, 8 September 2016 diff hist −3 m John Martin →United Kingdom: corrected mistake in name
• 07:5807:58, 8 September 2016 diff hist +21 John Martin →United Kingdom
• 07:5507:55, 8 September 2016 diff hist +51 m John Martin Added name to index
• 07:5007:50, 8 September 2016 diff hist +3 m Ferguson plc Altered name of CEO to reflect new page title that avoids difficulty of locating specific individual concerned.
• 07:4807:48, 8 September 2016 diff hist 0 m Talk:John Martin JChurchman-Davies moved page Talk:John Martin to Talk:John W. Martin (British Businessman): Too many pages under the title "John Martin".
• 07:4807:48, 8 September 2016 diff hist 0 m John Martin JChurchman-Davies moved page John Martin to John W. Martin (British Businessman): Too many pages under the title "John Martin".