User contributions for Mansheimer

6 October 2024

• 11:5811:58, 6 October 2024 diff hist −436 Richard Deacon (actor) →Personal life: self-published sources are not in any way reliable per our standards and do not belong here, WP:RS
• 11:5711:57, 6 October 2024 diff hist −81 Richard Deacon (actor) →External links: rm inappropriate categories, it is not a fact that he was gay -- he never identified himself as such, such claims are based on posthumous speculation in mostly fringe sources

19 July 2024

• 03:1603:16, 19 July 2024 diff hist −48 Ross Perot →Business: ce for encyclopedic tone
• 03:1103:11, 19 July 2024 diff hist −10 Ross Perot →Business: tone down puffery

18 July 2024

• 21:4121:41, 18 July 2024 diff hist +1 m Battle of Hamburger Hill →=Etymology
• 21:4121:41, 18 July 2024 diff hist +33 Battle of Hamburger Hill →Terrain: separate etymology for clarity, ce

17 July 2024

• 20:4620:46, 17 July 2024 diff hist +15 N Talk:Queerphobia talk header
• 20:4320:43, 17 July 2024 diff hist +558 Queerphobia remove inappropriate redirect as this is a separate topic from queer erasure; should have its own article or at least a better redirect Tags: Removed redirect Reverted

10 July 2024

• 17:3517:35, 10 July 2024 diff hist −4 Blockchain Capital this data needs a reliable source
• 17:3417:34, 10 July 2024 diff hist +52 Blockchain Capital tag for notability given paucity of reliable sources
• 17:3317:33, 10 July 2024 diff hist −304 Blockchain Capital →History: unsourced
• 17:3217:32, 10 July 2024 diff hist −855 Blockchain Capital cleanup promo fluff, remove hbr article which doesn't even mention this firm, remove claims that are not backed or even mentioned in the provided sources

9 July 2024

• 20:4520:45, 9 July 2024 diff hist +53 Shaul Magid principal position and calling is as a rabbi

8 July 2024

• 22:4622:46, 8 July 2024 diff hist +4 Alabama paragraph already establishes that it is referring to mid-to-late 20th century ("during and after ww2"); use precise year for founding of space flight center, copyedit
• 22:4022:40, 8 July 2024 diff hist +2 Alabama fix link to selma marches
• 22:3822:38, 8 July 2024 diff hist −41 Alabama people skimming through the sources, one sees plenty of references to "american settlers" and none using "european american settlers"
• 22:3522:35, 8 July 2024 diff hist −21 Alabama →Etymology: "european america" is awkward and vague phrasing, especially in this context, copyedit
• 21:1621:16, 8 July 2024 diff hist −176 Colleen Brown (artist) →Early life and education: this is not a cv/resume -- if reliable sources exist for this, those need to be used, otherwise not WP:RS WP:BLP current
• 21:1421:14, 8 July 2024 diff hist +35 Colleen Brown (artist) too much reliance on primary sources -- there should be more than enough reliable sources available for this person
• 21:1121:11, 8 July 2024 diff hist −1,190 Colleen Brown (artist) →Selected exhibitions: entire section on "residencies" amounts to promo as there is not a single reliable source used, all primary -- WP:RS
• 21:1021:10, 8 July 2024 diff hist −211 Colleen Brown (artist) →Residencies: publisher sales pages are not reliable sources
• 21:0821:08, 8 July 2024 diff hist −677 Colleen Brown (artist) removed gallery website being used inappropriately as a source and likely added by their staff, WP:RS
• 21:0721:07, 8 July 2024 diff hist −224 Kate Newby →Background: remove gallery website being used as a source yet again, WP:RS
• 21:0621:06, 8 July 2024 diff hist +35 Gambia Castle primary sources
• 21:0421:04, 8 July 2024 diff hist −17 Kate Newby →Career: removed primary source
• 21:0321:03, 8 July 2024 diff hist −1,373 Kate Newby →Awards: remove section that is absolute promo and sourced to gallery websites, WP:RS
• 21:0221:02, 8 July 2024 diff hist −204 Kate Newby →Career: unsourced
• 21:0221:02, 8 July 2024 diff hist +57 Kate Newby add primary sources tag as this "bio" is swimming in them
• 21:0021:00, 8 July 2024 diff hist −615 Azza El Siddique remove gallery promo once again
• 20:5920:59, 8 July 2024 diff hist +31 Kate Newby bio is not written like a proper encyclopedia entry, but resembles a promotional resume
• 20:5720:57, 8 July 2024 diff hist −565 Kate Newby remove gallery promo, these websites are not reliable sources
• 20:5620:56, 8 July 2024 diff hist −139 Colleen Brown (artist) gallery website is not a WP:RS
• 20:5520:55, 8 July 2024 diff hist −149 Nour Bishouty remove promo, likely inserted by gallery staff -- promo does not qualify as a WP:RS
• 20:4720:47, 8 July 2024 diff hist −48 Lexus official website should be lexus.com -- previous url also seems to have issues Tag: Reverted

5 July 2024

• 05:4805:48, 5 July 2024 diff hist −4 m Greta Thunberg →Post-high school graduation
• 05:4605:46, 5 July 2024 diff hist +25 Greta Thunberg →Post-high school graduation: thunberg was "immediately criticized" by whom? tag for source

4 July 2024

• 22:5122:51, 4 July 2024 diff hist −71 Prisca Thevenot →Political career: remove inappropriate editor-translated quote as WP:UNDUE, most reliable sources do not report this and so far none of the English-language media seem to report it, e.g. BBC, Politico, etc

29 June 2024

• 00:2800:28, 29 June 2024 diff hist −1,319 Ruth Pearl cleanup unsourced promo-like/unencyclopedic written content

28 June 2024

• 22:4822:48, 28 June 2024 diff hist −1 m Malcolm X →Legacy: remove comma typo
• 22:4722:47, 28 June 2024 diff hist +22 Malcolm X →Claims of bisexuality
• 22:4222:42, 28 June 2024 diff hist 0 Malcolm X →Purported bisexuality: retitle section to "claims" as that is exactly what these are -- there is literally not a single shred of reliable evidence to back these allegations and they are purely speculation on the part of a controversial academic and another even less reliable "scholar" -- any "scholar" can publish any kind of speculation, we must be careful not to position these as being in any way factual or being backed by actual evidence
• 22:3822:38, 28 June 2024 diff hist +42 Malcolm X →Advocacy and teachings while with the Nation: copyedit to clarify such views as being during this period of noi involvement which after he left, changed entirely
• 22:3522:35, 28 June 2024 diff hist +4 Malcolm X →Advocacy and teachings while with Nation: grammar
• 22:3422:34, 28 June 2024 diff hist +13 Malcolm X →Media attention to Malcolm{{nbsp}}X over Muhammad: as a separate section, should clarify that we're talking about elijah muhammad as opposed to simply "muhammad" which when used as a singular name to a general readership, especially muslim, may confuse with the historical prophet
• 19:0419:04, 28 June 2024 diff hist +15 Punky Brewster add chicago in lead, since that is where the series is set
• 19:0019:00, 28 June 2024 diff hist +296 Soleil Moon Frye →Early life: add that she was raised in mother's jewish faith
• 18:4518:45, 28 June 2024 diff hist +33 Winnetka, Los Angeles →Parks and recreation centers: tag for dead links
• 18:4318:43, 28 June 2024 diff hist +23 Winnetka, Los Angeles →History: dead link tag
• 18:4118:41, 28 June 2024 diff hist +27 Winnetka, Los Angeles article needs more and better sources, some dead links scattered around
• 18:3818:38, 28 June 2024 diff hist −65 Winnetka, Los Angeles no source or reference provided to demonstrate that this area is "highly ethnically diverse" in comparison with other areas in los angeles, which is "ethnically diverse" in general overall