User contributions for SyncopatorSyncopator

14 October 2024

• 18:5818:58, 14 October 2024 diff hist +3 m Trick 'r Treat →Sam: Punctuation corrections. Tag: Visual edit
• 18:5618:56, 14 October 2024 diff hist +13 m Trick 'r Treat →Surprise Party: Punctuation and grammatical corrections. Tag: Visual edit
• 18:5318:53, 14 October 2024 diff hist +8 m Trick 'r Treat →Halloween School Bus Massacre: Punctuation corrections. Tag: Visual edit
• 18:5118:51, 14 October 2024 diff hist +4 m Trick 'r Treat →Plot: Removed "blood" after "vomiting" and added "violently." In the film, the vomit is clearly brown and "chocolatey," not red. Tag: Visual edit
• 02:0602:06, 14 October 2024 diff hist +2 m Trick 'r Treat Replaced an ambiguous pronoun with a name. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 02:0402:04, 14 October 2024 diff hist +1 m Trick 'r Treat Corrected the tense of a verb. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

4 October 2024

• 06:4406:44, 4 October 2024 diff hist −2 m List of gay, lesbian or bisexual people One punctuation change and one subject-verb-agreement correction. current Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

10 August 2024

• 17:0817:08, 10 August 2024 diff hist +167 m Stone (2010 film) Corrected the order of the final events, which had been recounted here incorrectly. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 16:5416:54, 10 August 2024 diff hist +13 m Stone (2010 film) Clarified the parentage of "daughter." Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 16:4216:42, 10 August 2024 diff hist +156 m Stone (2010 film) This had been horribly written and was riddled with inaccuracies. I reworked several sentences, clarified ambiguous pronouns, and added a new sentence or two. Even so, I'd still consider this a minor edit. Admittedly, this plot still needs work, but it's been improved. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

6 August 2024

• 06:3206:32, 6 August 2024 diff hist 0 m Stretch (2014 film) Added a missing hyphen. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 06:2906:29, 6 August 2024 diff hist −1 m Stretch (2014 film) Reworked a sentence for accuracy. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 06:2706:27, 6 August 2024 diff hist +11 m Stretch (2014 film) Clarified a sentence for accuracy. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 06:2306:23, 6 August 2024 diff hist +1 Stretch (2014 film) Clarified a sentence. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 06:2306:23, 6 August 2024 diff hist +5 m Stretch (2014 film) Replaced "closure" with "satisfaction." Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 06:0606:06, 6 August 2024 diff hist +14 m Stretch (2014 film) Clarified poorly described (and inaccurate) details about Stretch's task. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 05:5205:52, 6 August 2024 diff hist +30 m Stretch (2014 film) Clarified a couple of sentences for accuracy. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 05:5105:51, 6 August 2024 diff hist +6 m Stretch (2014 film) Replaced "works" with "was filming." Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 05:4805:48, 6 August 2024 diff hist +24 m Stretch (2014 film) Added a comma to a dollar figure and reworked a sentence that incorrectly used the verb "hallucinates" as transitive. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

4 August 2024

• 06:1806:18, 4 August 2024 diff hist +1 Shaun Martin Changed the tense of one verb, since this person died today. Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

15 July 2024

• 05:4905:49, 15 July 2024 diff hist −30 The Pink Cloud Removed a second link to Eduardo Mendonça, because the link points to the page for a *different* Eduardo Mendonça. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
• 05:4805:48, 15 July 2024 diff hist −4 m The Pink Cloud Removed the link to co-star Eduardo Mendonça, because the linked page is to a *different* Eduardo Mendonça. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor

13 July 2024

• 03:4203:42, 13 July 2024 diff hist −1 Predestination (film) →Plot: Replaced the incorrect verb "brings" with "takes." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

12 July 2024

• 07:4507:45, 12 July 2024 diff hist +16 The Crying Game →Plot: Added detail to a few sentences for clarity and accuracy. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

13 June 2024

• 05:2805:28, 13 June 2024 diff hist 0 Raw milk Added a missing hyphen. Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

15 April 2024

• 05:5005:50, 15 April 2024 diff hist +2 Autostereogram Clarified an awkward sentence by adding commas. I think there may yet be a better construction of this sentence, but I stopped short of rewriting it. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

9 March 2024

• 14:1314:13, 9 March 2024 diff hist −1 Blackface →Early history: Removed a comma that made a sentence difficult to parse. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

6 November 2023

• 06:2406:24, 6 November 2023 diff hist +2 Underground (TV series) →Season 1 (2016): Clarified a sentence containing an ambiguous pronoun. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

7 October 2023

• 23:1523:15, 7 October 2023 diff hist +50 m Good Time (film) Added a few details to, and removed ambiguous pronouns from, a couple of sentences. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

13 September 2023

• 02:5602:56, 13 September 2023 diff hist +12 m Films about race →Notable films with a race theme, by year released: Further correction of syntax for film title. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
• 02:5502:55, 13 September 2023 diff hist +7 m Films about race →Notable films with a race theme, by year released: Correcting syntax for film title. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
• 02:5402:54, 13 September 2023 diff hist +349 Films about race →Notable films with a race theme, by year released: Added the film "Harriet" to the list. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
• 02:4602:46, 13 September 2023 diff hist +9 m Films about race →Notable films with a race theme, by year: Added the word "released" for clarity. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor

1 September 2023

• 07:2907:29, 1 September 2023 diff hist +9 Luz (2020 film) →Synopsis: Clarified a sentence for accuracy. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

24 May 2023

• 21:4921:49, 24 May 2023 diff hist +21 It Follows →Plot: Added a phrase to a sentence for clarity. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 21:3221:32, 24 May 2023 diff hist +4 It Follows →Plot: Reworked an awkward sentence for syntax. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 21:2921:29, 24 May 2023 diff hist +5 It Follows →Plot: Corrected one sentence for accuracy. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

14 March 2023

• 18:1418:14, 14 March 2023 diff hist +76 m West Side Story →Recordings: Added an omitted song Tag: 2017 wikitext editor

26 July 2022

• 02:1102:11, 26 July 2022 diff hist +404 User talk:SyncopatorSyncopator →Appealing IP-address block.: new section Tag: New topic

25 March 2022

• 01:2401:24, 25 March 2022 diff hist +4 m Lucid dream Corrected grammar in the opening sentence. Tag: Visual edit
• 01:2301:23, 25 March 2022 diff hist +3 m Lucid dream Corrected grammar in the opening sentence. Tag: Visual edit

28 February 2022

• 05:5705:57, 28 February 2022 diff hist 0 m Emancipation Proclamation Removed an unnecessary hyphen. Tag: Visual edit

21 February 2022

• 04:3704:37, 21 February 2022 diff hist +3 m Slow West Corrected punctuation. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 04:3504:35, 21 February 2022 diff hist +10 m Slow West Clarified an ambiguous pronoun. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 03:4903:49, 21 February 2022 diff hist +8 m Slow West Modified a short paragraph for clarity and accuracy. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 03:4303:43, 21 February 2022 diff hist −9 m Slow West Corrected a verb and clarified a passage. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 03:4003:40, 21 February 2022 diff hist 0 m Slow West Replaced a semicolon with a period. Capitalized the following sentence. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

20 February 2022

• 04:4504:45, 20 February 2022 diff hist +1 m One Hour Photo Added two commas. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 04:3504:35, 20 February 2022 diff hist −3 m One Hour Photo Changed one word. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 04:1804:18, 20 February 2022 diff hist +23 m One Hour Photo Further improved my previous edit. Added a sentence for clarity and modified the following sentence. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit