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A user with 21 edits. Account created on 28 June 2024.
29 August 2024
- 12:4412:44, 29 August 2024 diff hist +572 Ritual →Death, mourning, and funerary rites: I expanded the section by adding examples of death and mourning rituals from Buddhism, Islam, and Indigenous Australian cultures. These additions highlight the spiritual significance of these practices and how they serve to honor the deceased and guide the soul in various traditions. Tag: Visual edit
- 11:5911:59, 29 August 2024 diff hist +870 Medical billing I added highlighting the difference between medical billing and medical coding. Tag: Visual edit
27 August 2024
- 11:3311:33, 27 August 2024 diff hist +1 m Domain authority →Centrality of a website: The term "link-centrality" was hyphenated unnecessarily. I corrected this by removing the hyphen, making it "link centrality. current Tag: Visual edit
- 11:2111:21, 27 August 2024 diff hist −5 Email spam →Spam techniques: I Changed "Spam vertised sites" to "Spam Advertised Sites" for proper spelling and capitalization. Used simpler language and removed unnecessary complexity to make the information more accessible. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
26 August 2024
- 15:1015:10, 26 August 2024 diff hist +22 m Minimalism →Minimalist architects and their works: Made internal linking Tag: Visual edit
- 15:0215:02, 26 August 2024 diff hist +682 Carpool →Operation: I added a paragraph highlighting the benefits of carpooling, such as cost savings, reduced carbon footprint, and community engagement. It also emphasizes the adaptability and technological evolution of carpooling in the Netherlands. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Disambiguation links added
- 14:4914:49, 26 August 2024 diff hist +1,032 Temporary Academy I added a paragraph highlighting the Temporary Academy's impact on technological and educational advancements in post-war Netherlands. It provides context on why the academy was significant beyond its immediate function, showing how its legacy contributed to the establishment of Eindhoven University of Technology and influenced technical education. Tag: Visual edit
- 14:4114:41, 26 August 2024 diff hist +246 User talk:GrayStorm →Question from Thomasrobbert (14:41, 26 August 2024): new section Tag: Mentorship module question
23 August 2024
- 14:0114:01, 23 August 2024 diff hist +65 Receipt →Recipients: I made two edits. First i Clarified that the invoice is sent to the payer, and the shipping list accompanies the shipment, improving clarity and flow. secondly, i Rephrased to make the sentence smoother and more concise while maintaining the original meaning Tag: Visual edit
- 13:4813:48, 23 August 2024 diff hist −75 m Commuting →Commuting and the scarcity of local employment: I had made two small changes. Simplified the sentence to make it clearer and more direct while retaining the original meaning. And Streamlined the sentence for clarity and conciseness without altering the original intent. Tag: Visual edit
19 August 2024
- 09:2809:28, 19 August 2024 diff hist +217 m Islamic extremism →October 2016 Shakeel Begg case: I included a note about how this worldview often rejects pluralism and any legitimate interpretations of Islam differing from their own extremist beliefs. This provides a more comprehensive understanding of the consequences of a 'Manichean' worldview. And I revised the ninth point to specify that the fatwas cited include those advocating violence or terrorism, adding clarity to the type of fatwas considered extremist. Tag: Visual edit
- 09:1809:18, 19 August 2024 diff hist +15 m Linguistics →Discourse: I have made two edits. The first edit clarifies that genre selection is context-specific and strengthens the connection between discourse and language by emphasizing how deeply discourse shapes language, right down to its basic phonological and grammatical elements. The second edit refines the original sentence by making it more concise and highlighting that both vocabulary and style play key roles in differentiating registers and discourses. Tag: Visual edit
15 August 2024
- 06:5406:54, 15 August 2024 diff hist +4 m Baroon i have make internal linking Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 06:4906:49, 15 August 2024 diff hist +233 m Baroon Included details about traditional Pakhtoon festivals like Jashn-e-Dir, with references to documentation by the Khyber Pakhtunkhwa Culture and Tourism Authority. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 06:3506:35, 15 August 2024 diff hist −52 m Brand →Brand recognition: Simplified the sentence by removing "that" and "the," making it more direct and easier to read. eplaced "he/she" with "they" for inclusivity and made "the brand" more concise as "it. Streamlined the sentence by removing unnecessary words, making it more concise and consistent. Tag: Visual edit
13 August 2024
- 13:5513:55, 13 August 2024 diff hist +548 Hairstyle I wrote this content to highlight the key technological advancements in hairstyling. It explains how innovations like electric clippers, ceramic tools, and virtual try-on apps have enhanced the grooming process. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
9 August 2024
- 07:2307:23, 9 August 2024 diff hist +1,137 Notebook →Binding and cover: Added one additional paragraphs that describes types of Binding Tag: Visual edit
8 August 2024
- 07:5307:53, 8 August 2024 diff hist −2 m Gift Changed "A gift or a present" to "A gift or present": Removed the second "a" to streamline the sentence and avoid redundancy. The sentence is now more concise and fluid without altering the meaning. Tag: Visual edit
- 07:4107:41, 8 August 2024 diff hist −68 m Gift →Promotional gifts: Changed "vary from normal gifts" to "differ from regular gift" The reason is The word "differ" is more precise and formal. "Regular" is a clearer term than "normal" for contrast. Tag: Visual edit
2 August 2024
- 07:3807:38, 2 August 2024 diff hist −10 m Gift →Promotional gifts: Changed "employee of a company" to "employees of a company" for grammatical consistency. Changed "the gifts itself" to "the gifts themselves" for grammatical accuracy. Tag: Visual edit
- 07:3407:34, 2 August 2024 diff hist −36 m Gift Changed "meant to be free" to "intended to be free" for slight variation in wording. Tag: Visual edit