User contributions for Twozenhauer

19 August 2024

• 02:3602:36, 19 August 2024 diff hist +14 m Byzantine priority theory →Pericope Adulterae: I mostly came to correct the spelling of "intervene," but I see that this paragraph could use some further work; can anyone access the cited paper by Robinson?

14 July 2024

• 01:4901:49, 14 July 2024 diff hist 0 m Eighth Crusade →Campaign and the death of Louis IX: Correcting a tiny bit of Latin spelling
• 01:3801:38, 14 July 2024 diff hist +1 m Toon In with Me Minor spelling in one of the links --

8 July 2024

• 02:3002:30, 8 July 2024 diff hist −13 Four kingdoms of Daniel →Schools of thought: We had "2st century B.C." before; having looked over the Swain article, I believe the 2nd rather than the 1st was meant.

4 July 2024

• 22:5622:56, 4 July 2024 diff hist +1 m Template:Dean of Cardinals Just correcting the name of Cardinal Monaco La Valletta current

12 June 2024

• 22:0922:09, 12 June 2024 diff hist −14 m Dominic Savio Adding some needed periods, slightly rephrasing one sentence --

21 April 2024

• 02:5602:56, 21 April 2024 diff hist +46 m Elizabeth Johnson (theologian) Replaced confusing "it" with its intended & former antecedent
• 02:3402:34, 21 April 2024 diff hist +16 Eucharistic adoration →19th and 20th centuries: Fixing the links to Mlle. Tamisier & St. John Neumann, &c.

20 April 2024

• 03:2403:24, 20 April 2024 diff hist +151 Roald Dahl revision controversy Not to stir the pot, but I am restoring this line after some months of its absence; it was removed because it was believed not to have come from the cited source, but I have perused the source and found the relevant information there, with the exception of the otherwise restored comment's mention of Dahl's Spanish publisher, which indeed is not in the NPR article.

25 March 2024

• 01:4801:48, 25 March 2024 diff hist +21 m Anelida and Arcite We had the wrong Thebaid before! current

26 January 2024

• 22:1522:15, 26 January 2024 diff hist +1 m Hyperbaton →Prose: Missing parenthesis
• 21:2621:26, 26 January 2024 diff hist +18 Template:Figures of speech This template now includes epanalepsis, to whose article I just added this template.
• 21:2321:23, 26 January 2024 diff hist +22 Epanadiplosis Adding template for figures of speech

9 January 2024

• 05:4305:43, 9 January 2024 diff hist −42 m Founding Fathers of the United States Undoing possible vandalism Tag: Manual revert
• 05:4005:40, 9 January 2024 diff hist −2 Founding Fathers of the United States Undid revision 1194289665 by 2001:569:7471:3100:D0EA:72A:A40D:9C27 (talk) Tags: Undo Reverted

1 January 2024

• 00:1600:16, 1 January 2024 diff hist +183 The Faerie Queene →Summary: Correcting & amending what I added earlier --
• 00:0100:01, 1 January 2024 diff hist +4 Willie Whopper →1934: Adding relevant link
• 00:0000:00, 1 January 2024 diff hist +4 Robert Stokes (animator) Adding relevant link current
• 00:0000:00, 1 January 2024 diff hist +5,495 N The Good Scout Creating the page

31 December 2023

• 23:5923:59, 31 December 2023 diff hist +1,888 The Faerie Queene Summaries

21 December 2023

• 00:5000:50, 21 December 2023 diff hist +31 Template:Christmas Adding a link specifically to St. Lucy's feast day
• 00:4800:48, 21 December 2023 diff hist +15 Feast of the Seven Fishes Adding the Christmas template, on which a link to this article appears!

29 August 2023

• 21:4621:46, 29 August 2023 diff hist +7 Yibbum →Levirate-type marriages other than yibbum: Making "ploni almoni" go to the Hebrew section of the article on placeholder names
• 21:4021:40, 29 August 2023 diff hist +70 m Nathan (son of David) →New Testament: A different translation of the same sentence of St. John Damascene's Exposition; the old citation had a typo I could not parse, and I was frustrated to find it in situ; the information here is the same, and I mean no offense to the finder of the original citation.

9 August 2023

• 10:3410:34, 9 August 2023 diff hist +5 Nathan (son of David) Undid revision 1161332130 by 2600:1008:B051:47EB:0:46:9A12:B901 (talk) On the one hand, Bathshua might be an alternative transliteration; on the other, English-speakers know her as Bathsheba. The two may also transliterate different names, as suggested, but David was certainly married to a queen we call Bathsheba. Tag: Undo
• 10:2810:28, 9 August 2023 diff hist +1 m The Satire of the Trades →The Satire's Use in Scribal Schools: Adding needed period --

4 August 2023

• 08:4108:41, 4 August 2023 diff hist +19 A New Theory of the Earth Present tense in the introduction; an updated link to the text
• 06:2706:27, 4 August 2023 diff hist +2 m Monothelitism The link is perfectly correct, but I am clarifying anyway that this is the Third Council of Constantinople, &c.
• 05:4805:48, 4 August 2023 diff hist +2 m Audianism Sorry about that tag! And I checked it last time, too; what a blunder!
• 05:4605:46, 4 August 2023 diff hist +1 m Audianism Proper tag for wanting citation; capitalization; &c.

31 July 2023

• 03:0503:05, 31 July 2023 diff hist +5 m Revival of the Hebrew language →Background: Spelling of Maimonides; "however" separated by a semicolon; Oxford commas for consistency

16 July 2023

• 06:4306:43, 16 July 2023 diff hist +4 Rosa rubiginosa →Invasive species: Fixing some grammar and cleaning up a little in the first bullet -- It is still not a pretty bullet: I am certainly open to removing one or both of the middle sentences but could come up with no special justification for it!
• 06:2906:29, 16 July 2023 diff hist −15 m Death and state funeral of Silvio Berlusconi →Funeral: "Inspired" for the unusual "inspirated"; also, shuffling a sentence a bit to allow better for the sense of "officiate"; "officiated" as a passive descriptor of the ceremony was not strictly wrong, but I believe this makes clear that Msgr. Delpini officiated and leaves clear that the Mass was in the Ambrosian Rite.

8 July 2023

• 05:3405:34, 8 July 2023 diff hist −2 m History of the Jews in Naples →Synagogue: Not strictly necessary, but we generally treat Second World War as a proper name; a colon for a semicolon
• 05:0005:00, 8 July 2023 diff hist +8 m 1 Corinthians 2 →The rulers of this age: Adding rightful circumflexes and breathings to the Greek text; tweaking transliteration in line with this

6 July 2023

• 10:5010:50, 6 July 2023 diff hist +8 m Sonnet 86 Very minor English

5 July 2023

• 10:0210:02, 5 July 2023 diff hist +43 m Euchites →History: An adding of a few articles and a rearranging of a little text --

3 July 2023

• 08:1108:11, 3 July 2023 diff hist +20 Anomoeanism →Notable Anomoeans: Adding to a handsome list of red links, I fear! But we had Euphronius the ancient painter, not Euphronius the heretical bishop.

18 June 2023

• 23:5923:59, 18 June 2023 diff hist +29 m Ichimura at Brushstroke Adding template for New York restaurants
• 23:5323:53, 18 June 2023 diff hist +29 m The Original Soupman Adding template for New York restaurants
• 23:5123:51, 18 June 2023 diff hist 0 m Template:Restaurants in the City of New York Moving Rolfe's Chop House to the defunct section, though I hate to do it!
• 23:5023:50, 18 June 2023 diff hist −2 m Rolfe's Chop House What I hope are improvements, however small, to the English and the clarity of the article -- but do we like "establishment . . . established" in the first line? I find it amusing, but what say you?
• 23:1423:14, 18 June 2023 diff hist +55 Cote (restaurant) Adding template for New York restaurants; I am not sure the "wine" template especially belongs here, but I suppose I have no compelling reason to remove it either! Also giving the links specific titles --
• 23:0523:05, 18 June 2023 diff hist +41 The Clocktower (restaurant) Adding template

17 June 2023

• 09:0509:05, 17 June 2023 diff hist +33 m Template:Restaurants in the City of New York Changing title to reflect template's new name
• 09:0109:01, 17 June 2023 diff hist +110 N Template talk:Restaurants in Manhattan Twozenhauer moved page Template talk:Restaurants in Manhattan to Template talk:Restaurants in the City of New York: At least one of the restaurants listed is not in the Borough of Manhattan: this change seems in line with the intentions of the list and, so, preferable to simply removing restaurants in the boroughs from the template; for the time being, it also seems preferable to separate templates for each borough, though perhaps that might be considered in the future. current Tag: New redirect
• 09:0109:01, 17 June 2023 diff hist 0 m Template talk:Restaurants in the City of New York Twozenhauer moved page Template talk:Restaurants in Manhattan to Template talk:Restaurants in the City of New York: At least one of the restaurants listed is not in the Borough of Manhattan: this change seems in line with the intentions of the list and, so, preferable to simply removing restaurants in the boroughs from the template; for the time being, it also seems preferable to separate templates for each borough, though perhaps that might be considered in the future.
• 09:0109:01, 17 June 2023 diff hist +105 N Template:Restaurants in Manhattan Twozenhauer moved page Template:Restaurants in Manhattan to Template:Restaurants in the City of New York: At least one of the restaurants listed is not in the Borough of Manhattan: this change seems in line with the intentions of the list and, so, preferable to simply removing restaurants in the boroughs from the template; for the time being, it also seems preferable to separate templates for each borough, though perhaps that might be considered in the future. Tag: New redirect
• 09:0109:01, 17 June 2023 diff hist 0 m Template:Restaurants in the City of New York Twozenhauer moved page Template:Restaurants in Manhattan to Template:Restaurants in the City of New York: At least one of the restaurants listed is not in the Borough of Manhattan: this change seems in line with the intentions of the list and, so, preferable to simply removing restaurants in the boroughs from the template; for the time being, it also seems preferable to separate templates for each borough, though perhaps that might be considered in the future.
• 05:2705:27, 17 June 2023 diff hist +1 m Death and state funeral of Silvio Berlusconi →Lying in state: English: "lay in state" for "lied in state"; also put the restricted access in the past tense