Talk:DMart

Some proposed changes

DMart is a one-stop supermarket chain that aims to offer customers a wide range of home and personal products under one roof. Each DMart store stocks home utility products - including food, toiletries, beauty products, garments, kitchenware, bed and bath linen, home appliances and more - available at competitive prices that the customers typically appreciate. The core objective of DMart is to offer customers products at competitive value.
DMart was started by Mr. Radhakishan Damani to address the growing needs of the Indian family. From the launch of its first store in Powai in 2002, DMart today has a well-established presence in 112 locations across Maharashtra, Gujarat, Andhra Pradesh, Madhya Pradesh, Karnataka, Telangana, Chhattisgarh and Uttar Pradesh. DMart aims to be the lowest priced retailer in the regions it operates, The business continues to grow with new locations planned in more cities.
The supermarket chain of DMart stores is owned and operated by Avenue Supermarts Limited. (ASL).

PROMOTERS
DMart is owned and operated by Avenue Supermarts Ltd. (ASL) – a company founded by Mr. Radhakishan Damani.

DMart's REACH
DMart in it's en devour to serve as many customers as possible, is continuously expanding the number of store presence across the country. In addition to Mumbai, DMart has multiple stores in cities such as Ahmedabad, Baroda, Bengaluru, Hyderabad, Pune and Surat.

ATN 12:37, 5 October 2016 (UTC) Nagarindam (talk) 09:57, 5 October 2016 (UTC)

• Not only is the proposed text copied directly from this corporate web page and a WP:COPYVIO, it is also entirely promotional. Text referring to "our" this or that is utterly unsuitable for an encyclopaedia, as is WP:PEACOCKery about the wonders of the company's founder. AllyD (talk) 12:30, 5 October 2016 (UTC)

• AllyD, have made the requisite changes... request you to please take a look and guide me if any text is objectionable as per guidelines

• Sorry, the changes you have made are not sufficient. The text is still closely paraphrased from the original; merely changing a few words is not enough to avoid a copyright infringement. Take a look at the examples on the page I linked. Rewriting the text from a less promotional point of view will also help put it in your own words. Altamel (talk) 04:49, 6 October 2016 (UTC)

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Sponsored edits

Hello! This is to inform fellow editors that I have made few minor edits to the article. And I have also added a picture to further enhance it. I have a conflict of interest in this article, few details of which I have furnished above. Please do let me know in case of any actions that I may have done in an incorrect way. I also intend to add more content to this article at a later period. Thank you. Rohan TK (talk) 10:40, 12 August 2018 (UTC)

• As per the advice at WP:COI ("COI editors should not edit affected articles directly, but propose changes on article talk pages instead"), please suggest any further changes on this page. This has served well in the past, for example with the advertising copy which was proposed above and rejected. AllyD (talk) 12:41, 12 August 2018 (UTC)

• Sure. Thank you. Rohan TK (talk) 13:16, 9 January 2019 (UTC)

Copyright problem removed

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