Talk:Glow in the Dark Tour

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Private Concert in Vienna?

I cannot find proof of this ever happening anywhere on the internet - does anyone have a source this happened? --87.140.195.0 (talk) 13:44, 3 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Last year's European dates

I think the European dates are wrong. I saw Kanye perform last October in the Phoenix Park, Dublin, Ireland and am going to see him again in November 2008, but there is no mention of any dates he performed in Europe last year. The show was billed Glow in the Dark tour as well?? Connor oc (talk) 10:53, 26 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

There was a European tour before 2008. because i was at the Trent FM Arena,Nottingham, England show, which was on the 26th nov 2007. On my ticket it says 'Glow in the dark tour 2007' RaveSlave (talk) 19:33, 9 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Set List(s)??

Why is there no set list for this tour. Every single Wiki article for a tour I've seen, contains information about the music played on each leg of the tour, as well as the songs of the other performer's too. PopMusicBuff ^talk 22:59, 7 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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Outfits

Where could and outfits or costume sub-topic might be, I want to find the jacket. 2600:1011:B13E:E9A9:C6DD:EC56:ACD2:D20 (talk) 12:31, 22 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

Passed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 23:13, 2 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

This review is transcluded from Talk:Glow in the Dark Tour/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 21:37, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 17:10, 2 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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It's been a while, so take a fresh look at this and make the suggested changes too. Also found the author for the Financial Times review. Ping when addressed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 17:37, 2 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know? If you fancy doing so, I always have plenty of GA nominees to review. Just look for the all-uppercase titles in the Television section. Reviews always appreciated.

Copy changes

Lead and infobox

Ditch the small font in the infobox for dates/countries. MOS:SMALLFONT
in his book, Glow in the Dark (2009) Unnecessary comma in this context

Background

The first show was supposed to be a two-night concert at Hammersmith Apollo in London, until West moved it to the city's O2 Arena on the night of November 22, 2007, as a result of heavy demand. Remove comma after London
Devlin had previously handled the design for West's Touch the Sky Tour (2005–06), a role he later served for the Watch the Throne Tour (2011–12) and The Yeezus Tour (2013–14). Try rewording as Devlin had previously handled the design for West's Touch the Sky Tour (2005–06) and later served in that role for the Watch the Throne Tour (2011–12) and The Yeezus Tour (2013–14).
Las Vegas, Nevada and Albuquerque, New Mexico during use your MOS:GEOCOMMAs: Las Vegas, Nevada, and Albuquerque, New Mexico, during
Hyphenate "30-minute" to match "90-minute"

Marketing

dubbed as "The Glow in the Dark Tour Ignited by Absolut 100" No need for "as" in this construction.

Tour controversies

Fix time formats: should be 3:30 a.m., 4:25 a.m.
- Be consistent: this section also has "1am" and "2am".
Consider reflowing paragraph breaks so Bonnaroo is its own paragraph. Sacramento, Bonnaroo, Newcastle.

Tour dates

There is no header in the 2008 list for Notes, though several entries have notes.

Sourcing and spot checks

Reviewed: 1, 10, 25, 38, 39, 46

[1] is a dead link. The new link is https://www.billboard.com/music/music-news/lil-wayne-2008-2009-tours-gross-42-million-267462/
[25] should be credited in-reference and in-text to Richard Clayton per the ProQuest version of this article.

Images

The poster has a valid NFUR. The other images are all CC-licensed with appropriate captions and alt text. I'd suggest making the alt for the "female alien" one more descriptive than the current alt and maybe moving the two left-aligned images (aside from the Child Rebel Soldier collage) to right-align.

@Sammi Brie: I have implemented all of the fixes, apart from a few I'd like to go over. I placed a comma after book in the lead since this is often done when introducing works there such as the Graduation album, I don't agree with removal of the comma after London since until is best suited a comma before and the images work better with the alignment changing in my opinion. --K. Peake 21:38, 2 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, I won't beef too hard on minor or non-MOS matters. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 23:12, 2 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.