Talk:Nazgûl/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 22:07, 27 May 2020 (UTC)

I've gone through all of the redirects for this article, might as well review it, too. Hog Farm (talk) 22:07, 27 May 2020 (UTC)

Criteria

1. Prose  On hold

2. Verifiability  On hold

3. Depth of Coverage  On hold

4. Neutral ✓ Pass

5. Stable ✓ Pass

6. Illustrations ✓ Pass

7. Miscellaneous ✓ Pass

Comments

1.

• Minas Morgul is a circular link

Removed.

• Like with Merry Brandybuck, Tolkien character is italicized in the infobox, which probably isn't the best stylization

Removed.

• Link Eowyn

Linked.

• "breaking off a piece of it in the Hobbit's flesh" - Two things. Hobbit is a duplink, and it's lowercase in other usages.

Removed.

• Cracks of Doom redirects to the top of the Mount Doom page, so it's essentially a duplink

Removed.

• "In The Lord of the Rings movie trilogy (2001–2003)" - I'm not sure that the links to 2001 in film and 2003 in film are really relevant

Removed.

• The Shire is a duplink

Removed.

2.

• For the in-popular-culture material, it's generally considered best not to only cite it to the primary source for the reference - the game, movie, etc. Since popular culture references should only be mentioned if they're significant, citing those to secondary sources helps weed out the insignificant ones. There's a number of these. If you object to this, I can ask for a second opinion.

Fixed.

• What's ref 17 (secondary)? It says it's a file you can't access

Replaced ref.

• Ref 6 (secondary) has formatting issues, it's formatting as a "see this" instead of as a citation

Fixed.

3.

• You describe how their sight is different. If I recall correctly, Aragorn says something in FOTR about their sense of smell. If I'm remembering right, maybe that should be mentioned.

Added.

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