Talk:Portugal
I tried to make the article simpler. Please tell me if it is better or worse. Thank you. --83.70.36.37 21:22, 1 Jun 2005 (UTC)
- I think it looks simplified and can have the tag removed. I tried to improve a couple of sentences with odd structure. I also think this one:
- The country says that Olivença is also part of it, but it is controlled by Spain.
- could use work just because of the antecdents. Perhaps even allow some repetition?:
- Portugal believes that Olivença is part of Portugal, but Spain controls Olivença.
- (Also, should we add the Spanish name? Probably Olivenza -- no ç in Spanish!) I'll remove the {{unsimple}} tag if no one advocates for it remaining in a few days. -- PhilipR 18:38, 13 Jun 2005 (UTC)
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