Talk:Ride (Lana Del Rey song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 21:45, 21 December 2012 (UTC)
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[edit]- Prose comments
The prose needs work. I found several non-compliant prose issues through the article, and here are a few examples only from the composition section:
- "composed in the indie pop, soul pop, and baroque pop genres"
- "Del Rey sings lines such as,"
- "The song opens with an audible inhalation"
- "before Del Rey gushes out,"
- "The recording features mild cursing, but is otherwise laced"
- Reference comments
References look good overall, but they need polish to be at a full standard.
- Coverage comments
I am afraid that this article is not complete. It misses a commercial performance section that can be perfectly created, as well as other information, such as how the song came into existence, the relation between this song, the EP it belongs to, and her previous work.
For these reasons, I'd have to fail the article: it fails 1(a) and possibly 1(b), as well as, in some sort, 3(a). Regards. — ΛΧΣ21 22:07, 21 December 2012 (UTC)