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GA Review

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


This review is transcluded from Talk:Rod Taylor (American football)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 02:46, 26 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 06:55, 26 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
  • Expand lead some.
  • The lead should also say he played for the Defenders but didn't play for the other teams.
  • "American professional"
  • New high school infobox formatting
  • "Early life"
  • Remove 252nd overall from lead
  • Change weight per PFR
  • Link pancake block
  • "a five-star prsopect" typo
  • How did he go from a four-game suspension to banned all in the span of one season? lol
    • Presumably he was suspended for PEDs, then continued after the suspension ended (so then 10 game suspension), and continued after that suspension ended, so indefinite suspension.
  • Put an asterisk by Team 9.
  • Remove 2019 from infobox
  • It says he was released by DC, but he was claimed off waivers? Shouldn't it say he was "waived" by DC.
  • "He was released on April 14" add "without appearing in a game".
  • Any personal life details? College bios usually have stuff like that.
    • Didn't see his college bio or personal life details.

I don't think there's much more to say about this guy. Nice work! ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 06:55, 26 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.