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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Washington State Route 142/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Rschen7754 (talk · contribs) 22:06, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]


History
  • The railroad was completed in April 1903, via a route along the Klickitat River Canyon to Wahkiacus and Swale Creek to the southern outskirts of Goldendale. - with the repeated "to" construction the sentence is less clear.
    • Fixed by adding "before reaching"
  • incorporated into a branch of a major railroad - do we know which one? Also, the repeated "railroad" in this sentence makes it more confusing.
    • The sentence meant to say that the Lyle branch was supplementary to the northern bank railroad (which was the mainline of the SP&S Company). I have reworded it to make it clearer.
  • shorter and longer bridges - could use a bit more explanation
    • Added descriptors (west and east).

Couldn't find any other issues. Should be a pass once these issues are fixed. --Rschen7754 22:38, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Rschen7754: Thanks for the review. I have fixed all three issues that were raised. SounderBruce 03:46, 15 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]