Template:Did you know nominations/Iyarkai

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The result was: promoted by Cielquiparle (talk) 22:07, 24 March 2023 (UTC)

Iyarkai

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... that despite a disappointing box office response, Iyarkai was not a box office failure due to its shoestring budget? Source: https://www.rediff.com/movies/2006/oct/17jan.htm
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Improved to Good Article status by DareshMohan (talk). Self-nominated at 02:32, 28 February 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Iyarkai; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy compliance:

Adequate sourcing:
Neutral:
Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing: - Earwig says 68.5% (Violation Possible)

Hook eligibility:

Cited:
Interesting:
Other problems: - Hook is unclear.

QPQ: None required.

Overall: There are verbatim segments from Tamil MDB in the plot summary. ([1]) While the copyvio is obviously the main issue, I'd also propose some cleaning up of the hook itself: ALT2: ... that despite a disappointing box office performance, Iyarkai made a profit? Wracking ^💬 08:33, 1 March 2023 (UTC)

@Wracking: Did you see this alternate hook : ... that Iyarkai is based on a true story of a man who got lost in the Mediterranean Sea and never returned? Source: https://www.rediff.com/movies/2006/oct/17jan.htm Will try to fix plot issues. DareshMohan (talk) 01:03, 2 March 2023 (UTC)

I see it now! I like it. My only concern then is to make sure that point is clear in the article. As it stands, the article itself does not clearly say that the man never returned, even though the source does. I think just adding that bit to the article would help. Once the copyvio issues are fixed, just let me know! Wracking ^💬 02:33, 2 March 2023 (UTC)

@Wracking: Thanks, I have fixed the copyvio issues and added that bit to the article. DareshMohan (talk) 02:55, 3 March 2023 (UTC)

@DareshMohan: rechecked for copyvio and it turned out good! for ALT1 and ALT2, with a preference for ALT1: ... that Iyarkai is based on a true story of a man who got lost in the Mediterranean Sea and never returned?