User talk:Igread

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Happy editing! Blue Square Thing (talk) 07:58, 28 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hemsted Park

Hello. I reworked your additions to the Hemsted Park article because they seemed to fall foul of the WP:NPOV guidance we have. The links, in particular, seemed, if I'm honest, to be a bit spammy and the tone needed a little more neutrality. I found a third-party source, albeit only Kent Online, for the opening of the facility, but I can't find one for the use of the brand name. Is there any third party press coverage at all of this? It would be really helpful to be able to add that to the article, just to confirm it. You'll notice that I moved some of the information out of the lead section and into the body where it talks about building occurring on the school site. That seemed the best place for the detail.

From looking at your edits you appear to have a connection to the school. That's OK, but you should read Wikipedia:Conflict of interest and, preferably, declare any interest, particularly if you're an employee. The guidance says that you're discouraged from editing pages where this papplies, but doesn't prohibit it - certainly making corrections to the school website, numbers of children etc... isn't problematic, but anything beyond that is likely to cause problems, especially if there's any hint of things going across the NPOV line.

Let me know if there's a problem with my reworking of the stuff on the Hemsted Park page or if there's anything here you need a hand with. Here is fine, or my talk page or the Hemsted Park talk page. Thanks for your time. Blue Square Thing (talk) 08:08, 28 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]