User talk:Sahmofor

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Hello, Sahmofor, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Elysia and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:26, 22 January 2019 (UTC)

replying to question

Hi @Sahmofor: I saw your question on my talk page. The exercise that your instructor assigned "evaluate Wikipedia" was a link to more specific directions, which you can find here. So you could find an article, for example, in Category:Start-Class Technology articles. Start class articles have some useful content, but in general would benefit by expansion using content from reliable sources. You could look at articles such as Digital footprint, Ecoleasing, or Mosquito laser, just to name a few of the more than 2,500 articles in that category. Once you've selected an article, follow the exercise instructions for evaluating the article tone, sources, and content. Happy editing! Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:55, 28 January 2019 (UTC)

/* Ignatius' Peer Review. */

I am currently Peer Reviewing The Article Open Systems Interconnection

After reading the the lead or first section of the article Open Systems Interconnection, I was satisfied with the introduction because I understood what the it was all about. I do have some suggestions that I belief if included will make this article better. To begin with, I think the criticism section of this article should be removed because it makes the article looks biased. In a addition, the article has limited references, thus needs some additional sources to aid readers have more insight of what they author is writing about .Also, a body should be added to this article, and it should include the definition of the various layers with examples, how data are called at each layer e.g application layer is data and transport layer is Transmission Control Protocol (TCP) and User Datagram Protocol(UDP) etc..., and an explanation of the process of Encapsulation(sending data where the data is augmented with successive layers of control information before transmission across a network) and and de-encapsulation( the opposite of encapsulation). Finally, the TCP/IP Stack should be added together with the diagram to the history portion of this article.(Sahmofor (talk) 02:19, 2 April 2019 (UTC))

Peer review Assignment 7 completed

I peer-reviewed the article that was assigned to me.