Talk:Lego Batman 2: DC Super Heroes/GA1

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Reviewer: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 17:44, 6 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! I will review this article due to the ongoing GAN backlog. I will start the review soon. Cheers, --Vacant0 (talk) 17:44, 6 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Comments

General

The {{small}} template from the infobox should be removed per MOS:SMALL.
Implement {{Unbulleted list}} for directors and composers.
Add a comma between Action-adventure and platform.
Done. elijahpepe@wikipedia 16:45, 7 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"Some suits from Lego Batman: The Videogame return in Lego Batman 2, such as the magnetic suit for Robin, and the sonic suit for Batman. Other suits returning include the demolition suit and sonar suit for Batman." → Some suits from Lego Batman: The Videogame return in Lego Batman 2, such as the magnetic suit for Robin, and the sonic suit, demolition suit and sonar suit for Batman.
Agreed, that was wordy. Fixed. elijahpepe@wikipedia 23:55, 7 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Point missing at the end of the second sentence in the "Music" section.
Fixed. elijahpepe@wikipedia 23:55, 7 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Images

All are alright.

Sources

"Like its predecessor, the player can defeat enemies by using the abilities each character provides, such as Superman's super freeze or the Joker's handbuzzer, as well as traditional combat moves such as standard punches and kicks. Most enemies in the game don't carry weapons, although boss levels may have certain weapons or abilities that the player must counter. Combat rewards the player with studs, which the player can use to purchase new characters to use in the game's free roam section, and thereby contributes to their "True Hero" percentage for the mission." – unsourced.
"Certain adjustments exist between the two games, including the addition of a glass shattering gun to the glide suit (now called the bat suit), and the addition of a gun that can store water to the bio suit (now called the hazard suit). New suits available in Lego Batman 2 include the acrobat suit allowing for Robin to traverse areas that require acrobatics, magnet suit allowing for Robin to traverse areas with magnets and control magnetic elements, and ice suit to freeze water for Robin, and the sensor suit to go invisible and view X-rays, power suit to destroy silver objects and use super strength, and electricity suit to transfer energy between switches and move through areas with electricity for Batman. These suits can be used to aid in combat. For instance, the power suit's ability to create missiles can be used to track missiles to enemies." – unsourced.
Sourced. elijahpepe@wikipedia 23:55, 7 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Two paragraphs below that one are also unsourced.
"Synopsis" section is mostly unsourced.
"A demo was released on Xbox Live on June 19, 2012, followed by a Microsoft Windows demo a day later and a PlayStation Network demo a week after the Xbox Live demo." – unsourced.
Altered. elijahpepe@wikipedia 16:12, 8 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
One dead link spotted, the YouTube source can be removed since there's another source besides it.
Removed. elijahpepe@wikipedia 23:55, 7 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Well, I believe that this article deserves a quick fail, mostly because it contains a lot of unsourced paragraphs. Once the sources get added some parts of the text will also have to be re-written. When this gets fixed, it can get nominated for a review again. Cheers, --Vacant0 (talk) 18:16, 7 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]