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Ignatius' Peer Review.

I am currently Peer Reviewing The Article Open Systems Interconnection

After reading the the lead or first section of the article Open Systems Interconnection, I was satisfied with the introduction because I understood what the it was all about. I do have some suggestions that I belief if included will make this article better. To begin with, I think the criticism section of this article should be removed because it makes the article looks biased. In a addition, the article has limited references, thus needs some additional sources to aid readers have more insight of what they author is writing about .Also, a body should be added to this article, and it should include the definition of the various layers with examples, how data are called at each layer e.g application layer is data and transport layer is Transmission Control Protocol (TCP) and User Datagram Protocol(UDP) etc..., and an explanation of the process of Encapsulation(sending data where the data is augmented with successive layers of control information before transmission across a network) and and de-encapsulation( the opposite of encapsulation). Finally, the TCP/IP Stack should be added together with the diagram to the history portion of this article. (Sahmofor (talk) 02:10, 13 March 2019 (UTC))(Sahmofor (talk) 01:53, 13 March 2019 (UTC))

Sahmofor (talk) 18:35, 9 March 2019 (UTC)